A slice from: I:3 part 1..."the illest immortal illuminati"...

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Much love on that mayne. Yeah I remember you dropped on this awhile ago. The beats selected were GET BY by KWELI and LOSE YOURSELF by Eminem. GET BY played for most of the song, with slick transitions to LOSE YOURSELF in certain areas.
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  2. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    This was hella fucking long but damn nice bars left to write appreciate the effort and as it stands it being a glory verse and flex verse shit is nasty!! You had some crazy flow in this and I do love to read but this being with great emotion I would appreciate it so much more laid in track my friend which you should do for future reference. It has that crazy stop and go rhyme that resonates great content.

    Props
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  3. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    First? That's a dope screen name you're rockin.

    Second? Thank you very very much my friend for taking the time to read my lengthy piece and the critique/suggestions you've given I will take forthwith to heart. Thanks for making me better at my craft; I hella appreciate that.

    I will start putting up tracks onsite some time next year, if all goes as planned...
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    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    Do yourthing man


    I'll post some of my shit up hit me bak if anything


    Thanks as well for the screen name appreciation it's my stage name as well
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    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    There were TWO threads with a piece of I:3 in it. Big surprise. I like this thread better.
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