A Race To Nowhere.

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  1. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    I think the poem started well.

    for me i appreciate the parallel of the water cresting as a person struggling to be noticed

    analogies to a river give me positive images and i couldnt relate to some of the images of the poem after "but for what?" and the closing off the poem with despair.
    test
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