a lil somethin,,, critiqe me

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by flowheat, Jul 17, 2010.

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  1. flowheat

    flowheat drop bombs

    Jul 17, 2010
    she rolld my joint an i took flight
    pass the sky im outa sight
    take these spectacle see me u jus might
    im on a roll hand me the mic
    i bowl i hit a strike
    now i got the light cuz my shit sound right

    i swang round the curb while i sipped my henny
    my vision blured its from the ganja herb
    it makes my views a whole lot superb
    and i got her to be my joint roller

    look threw my eyes what do u find
    nuttin but a broken heart sewed up wit line
    dnt worry bout me ill be jus fine
    so hit me up on the fone line
  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

    Sep 7, 2005
    I didn't really understand this ...
    Surely you can do better than this homie ... put somethin in it.
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