a lil somethin,,, critiqe me

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by flowheat, Jul 17, 2010.

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  1. flowheat

    flowheat drop bombs

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    she rolld my joint an i took flight
    pass the sky im outa sight
    take these spectacle see me u jus might
    im on a roll hand me the mic
    i bowl i hit a strike
    now i got the light cuz my shit sound right



    i swang round the curb while i sipped my henny
    my vision blured its from the ganja herb
    it makes my views a whole lot superb
    and i got her to be my joint roller

    look threw my eyes what do u find
    nuttin but a broken heart sewed up wit line
    dnt worry bout me ill be jus fine
    so hit me up on the fone line
    test
  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    I didn't really understand this ...
    Surely you can do better than this homie ... put somethin in it.
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    test
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