A Keystyle

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  1. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    A Keystyle

    These wimps try to charm and attempt to harm while
    I gain power my game tower like skyscrapers so smile
    Because I’m buck wild with rhyme look my luck and style
    Find flunkies and remind monkeys that my bandana is not
    A banana so don’t peal this, it’s real ish like Atlanta it’s hot
    Run have fun engage in sports then amaze courts when I win
    Cases rap to chicks then I’m in laces getting sex now and then
    No doubt I’m writing funny, fighting about money these acts
    Not exciting to a honey, wow keep the stage rattled with attacks
    Wage battles from Cadillacs these cats amaze cattle with the whack
    Beef they bring, so I bend minds when I contend with rhymes
    And win sometimes by just keeping real feel me? Nickel and dimes
    Make dollars all the fakes hollers foul I’m scholar who howls
    Like wolf you can ask Lawrence Talbot even dogs seem to growl
    So I got verbal combat in my habitat got vocab and stats go
    To the lab with that on my mind invent explosives that flow
    Corrosive like rust, it’s a must that I teach folks try reach them
    With quotes as this speech promotes knowledge like Slim Jim's
    It’s physical conflict, lyrical are sick like Aides patients in ICU
    I try be true to the game filling it with penicillin and shit so who
    Wants to step to this? Look I rap stats just had to slap a cat cap
    Clean off his head like them barbers do these dudes need a map
    To find me you too blind to see my skills
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  2. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    ... You're a motherfucking genius, like straight up and down - Sheldon cooper, Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawkin aint got SHIT on you right now.

    This is a little embarrassing, but i need to tell you; I wake up in the morning and PRAY that i find another bagglad verse on Open Mic, it gets me through my day. I sit there and try to visualise you in your leopard print dressing gown hunched over the desk scribbling down these immense lyrics.

    Time and time again, your lyrics just leave me feeling like a baby giraffe, scared - with a long neck and not able to walk. But that's BEAUTIFUL!!!

    "It’s physical conflict, lyrical are sick like Aides patients in ICU
    I try be true to the game filling it with penicillin and shit so who
    Wants to step to this? Look I rap stats just had to slap a cat cap
    Clean off his head like them barbers do these dudes need a map"


    POETRY. PURE AND UNADULTERED WITH LESS THAN 0% SATURATED FAT, POETRY.

    There's a reason you get the most views/replies in the open mic bro.
    It's because people type "amazing lyricist" on google and your threads are the first results, people flock from the far corners of gambodia to see this.

    @Shadow @GaLaTeA @MissAndrea @L u c y @Tacky Jones @Resilient @Baron Mynds @Prec1se ` @Coup d'état
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    Awww man...:scared:
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  4. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    See @bagglad , they're at a loss for words.
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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Hot garbage
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    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    AaAawROooOOoo!
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  8. MC Shogun

    MC Shogun New Member

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    "Make dollars all the fakes hollers foul I’m scholar who howls
    Like wolf you can ask Lawrence Talbot even dogs seem to growl"

    My favorite bars but the whole thing was decent.
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  9. Shattered Jaws

    Shattered Jaws New Member

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    Flow wise it's pretty nice...havin' said that your run on with words may lead to a few heads not catchin' it properly.I thought the content was cool for the most part...it kept me wantin' to read this to the end.

    These wimps try to charm and attempt to harm while
    I gain power my game tower like skyscrapers so smile
    Because I’m buck wild with rhyme look my luck and style
    Find flunkies and remind monkeys that my bandana is not
    A banana so don’t peal this, it’s real ish like Atlanta it’s hot

    ^^Your openin' scheme was slick.

    ...Stay uppity.
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  10. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    thanks for the props and critiques on this one yall got to keep on keeping on
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