"A GUN & A MIC" - Part 6! === "The Progression"

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  1. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    A GUN AND A MIC
    PART 6































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    (Somewhere down a block… EX VENOM rolls and sees BLACKGAMMON walking alone… stops the car and gets out to get at BLACK)

    EX VENOM: Yooo BLACK!!!
    BLACK: (walks bothered and in a troublesome look ignores EX and walks with his head down)
    EX VENOM: Heeeeey whats wrong?
    BLACK: (walks on ignoring EX)
    EX VENOM: (grabs BlACKGAMMON)
    BLACK: (turns around ready to sock EX)
    EX VENOM: HEEEEEEEEY! What the fuck!?!??!?! What is wrong with you?
    BLACK: LEAVE ME ALONE!!! (turns around and walks away looking at the ground again)
    EX VENOM: (runs up and walks beside him) Heeeeey….it’s JOOKS isn’t it…. It’s about NEBZ isn’t it…(BLACK ignores and says nothing) Look… we can work this out…
    BLACKGAMMON: (grabs EX’s collar) THE ONLY THING NOT WORKIN OUT IS THIS BULLSHIT OF A THING THAT U GOT US INTO… NOTHING! --- AND IM NOT WITH THAT… U HEAR ME?!?!?
    EX VENOM: (pushes off BLACKGAMMON) GET A GRIP MAAN… THIS SHIT IS OVER… NOTHING U DO AINT GONNA DO NOTHING FOR NEBZ….
    BLACKGAMMON: WHY SHULD I GIVE A FUCK WHAT U THINK?
    EX VENOM: Cus u my dogg!!!! How long we been boys? Huh???? Where u at maaan?
    BLACKGAMMON: WHERE IM AT!?!??! (pulls out his pistol) LET ME TELL U SOMETHIN… I GOT SOME BIGTIME SELFMADE SHIT HAPPENIN IF NEED BE… AND NOT U OR ANY MUTHAFUCKA IS GONNA STOP ME FROM THIS… DO U HEAR WHAT IM SAYIN????? DO U HEAR WHAT IM SAAAAYIN?
    EX VENOM: (glares at BLACK…. BLACK lets go of EX and walks off.. EX pants…) YO…. (still panting) YO MAN…. NAWW… NAWW MAAN…. (runs back to his car and jets off)

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    (The next day… MADPOET cruising on over to GHETTOQUEEN’S house. He walks up to knock on the door but GHETTOQUEEN suddenly opens.)

    GHETTOQUEEN: What’s this I hear??? You and BLACK and all of them about to start trouble again… What are you doing MAD???
    MAD: Excuse meeeee… but no HI BABY… or anything like that?
    GHETTOQUEEN: (pushes MAD’s hands away) Whatever… ……….No what the hell is with all this?? Do I need to remind you what just fuckin happened last week? Huh??
    MAD: (walks aside GQ and goes in the house) Ease up girl…. (sits on the couch) This is something that needs to happen…
    GQ: NOTHING NEEDS TO HAPPEN! DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT IM SAYIN? LOOK AT YOUR CHEST! LOOK AT ME! FOR GOD’S SAKES… MAD.. DON’T DO THIS…
    MAD: (raising his voice) THIS IS NOT SOMETHING FOR YOU TO DECIDE! WHAT HAPPENED SINCE NEBZ AND BLACK SAW YOU BATTERED UP AND BRUISED WAS SOMETHING THAT NEEDS TO BE JUSTIFIED!
    GQ: LISTEN TO YOURSELF! MY FUCKIN GOSH YOU’RE TALKING LIKE NEBZ! WHERE IS NEBZ RIGHT NOW… ANSWER ME THAT… HUH… WHERE IS HE MAD?
    MAD: (stands up walking away) WILL YOU GET OFF MY BACK!??! MY FUCKIN GOSH I COME HERE TO SEE WHATSUP WITH YOU AND HERE I AM GETTING THE PMS TREATMENT FROM YOU! WHAT I DO IS MY BUSINESS U UNDERSTAND ME?
    GQ: (walks up to MAD with a scowl in a quiet anger) No I don’t understand you and chew on this then! If this is what you’re gonna do to justify all the hardships and pain we both went thru the last few days… then I don’t want any part in you and me at all! So just leave…get out of my house… NOW!
    MAD: (shocked with mouth open wide gazing at GQ) Wha!? Huh!? Oh its like thaaat?
    GQ: YEAH ITS LIKE THAT!
    MAD: (a Thizz look on his face) You know what… fine then… (grabs his keys and goes to the front door) if this is how it ends then Ill leave you alone! (walks out the door and slams it)
    (GQ glares at the door…. panting in rage… then for a second she frowns and runs to open the door)
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  2. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    GQ: MAAAAAD!!!!!!..... (MAD turns around with a furious look on his face) MAAAAAAAAD! (begins to cry)
    MAD: (walks over to GHETTOQUEEN. GQ collapses into MAD’s chest..holding him)
    GQ: MAAAD… (crying) MAAAD…. Oooh gosh…….. it hurts sooo much….an…and noww…. You.. you gonna go and do all this…. But.. whyyy…why-hy-hy…..(crying even harder)
    MAD: (holding GHETTOQUEEN clutches her tightly) Heey… hey girl..… listen…… listen to me…. (looks at GQ in a quieter tone) Heeey….. you know them po-po’s gonna do nothing but ask more questions and let this linger on and on……. Heeey.. (wipes her eyes…. Stares at her… and sighs looking down at the ground) Look…. NEBZ was my friend too.. ok? Now yes… I know doing what I gotta do won’t bring him back and all that yadda yadda yadda… but look…he was someone you loved… but he was someone close to me too..ok? You’re dealing with your way and I’m dealing with mine… and if I have to risk my own self in getting this done… then it has to be…
    GQ: (sniffling and crying) b-but w-what-what about me and y-you???? W-What about us???
    MAD: (sighs and continues talking quietly) Heey, I know you’re watching out for me… and you’re also watching out for me so that WE.. me and you will remain… but if I don’t do nothing and leave it as nothing after what they did to NEBZ, I’ll feel like an idiot and a coward for not doing something in his honor…
    GQ: B-But what honor??? MAAAAD… (sinks her head dripping tears) Why are u doing this? Why…..
    MAD: Cus after what happened with u…. and with NEBZ…. Hell naw there’s no way this goes without action..
    GHETTOQUEEN: (crying) DON’T DO THIS TO ME…. MAD… PLEEEASE… (holding on to him)
    MAD: (looks at her) Hon… I have to go…
    GHETTOQUEEN: (cries and runs into her house and shuts the door)
    MAD: (sighs and looks into the window. GHETTOQUEEN crying… closes the curtain windows… MAD sighs… and walks slowly to the car. He pauses and looks back and sees a lonesome house.)

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    (The next day… the day of the live affair…)

    SERGE: (sits in a car with ENVY chillin) so what the deal…
    ENVY: holdup maan… (peers into his binoculars from across the block) … there they are…
    SERGE: (takes the binoculars from ENVY and looks into it) Is that him?
    ENVY: (unfastens his seat belt and gets outta car) comeon lets go…

    (SERGE and ENVY walk across the street and pace towards the end of the corner… A man is seen going into a small door inside a deserted store building. SERGE and ENVY wait as the figure goes in… then proceed….)

    (Inside the building… a dim light shines upon a old table with the suitcase lying on it. A door slowly opens and SERGE and ENVY proceed inside. The door closes… they look at each other.. then at the table. Slowly… they walk closer.. and closer to the table when suddenly a gun trigger pulls…)

    (A gun points at the two..)

    SERGE: (pulls out his gun pointed at the figure in the dark)
    ENVY: (looks at SERGE and motions him to put the gun away)
    SERGE: What is this B?
    ENVY: (talking into the dark) U alone?
    FIGURE IN DARK: yeah…(he reveals himself as KALEEF!)
    SERGE: u know this bitch???
    ENVY: yeah me and K go back…
    KALEEF: So what kinda trouble u getting into now ENVY..
    ENVY: The kind ur too pussy to get into…
    KALEEF: Whatever… (stands behind the table facing the two) So what we have here is a little business thing… right?
    ENVY: We here to get the goods…
    KALEEF: Yeah… but you aint told me for what reason…
    ENVY: Circle Arena…. Tonight…. Just kickin it u know…
    KALEEF: (eyes on ENVY su****iously) I know you… everytime you say you kickin it something happenin… (eyes on SERGE) so what is it?
    ENVY: (pops out a cigar… and a lighter) Nothing….. just some deal that we finnah put the stops to… (puffs his cigar)…(looks at cigar… exhales… then at KALEEF) so what u offer?
    KALEEF: (opens up his briefcase and flips it around for the guys to see…. It reveals an array of lethalized weapons) Straight from the market… just came in…
    SERGE: (peeks and checks out one of the weapons) Infrared scope… invisible beam… only seen with a special pair of goggles… double mag inserter with an 18 shell bullet chamber… where’d u get this?
    KALEEF: Like I said… from the docks… brought in from overseas… my man from the other side getting me the cargo… got another coming in in a few hours….
    ENVY: (picks up another weapon) whats this??
    SERGE: (looks at weapon) Silencer with a cylindrical barrel tip… makes the trigger pull muffled so low that not even the next door neighbor dog can hear it..…looks like one of them James Bond shits..
    ENVY: What u offering for this? (looking at the weapon)
    KALEEF: 2300…. For that and 3 grand even for the infrared…
    ENVY: (shuffles the weapon and then points it at KALEEF) Maybe we can take this and just walk outta here..
    KALEEF: Not possible… the door u came into prevents the way out..
    SERGE: (points the infrared gat) Maybe u aint understanding….(pulls trigger but no shot goes off)
    KALEEF: (lifts up a key) ahhh I forgot… a key…. To let your weapons be accessed…
    ENVY: Nooo… maybe u don’t know what’s happenin…

    (Suddenly a gun points to KALEEF’s Head…)

    ENVY: (nods at the mysterious figure to escort KALEEF out the door..)
    KALEEF: WAIT! (Everyone stops… looks at ENVY) OK… shipment coming in… its yours… but for one price…
    SERGE: (shakes his head) You think u in a position to be making a deal to us????
    ENVY: What u want
    KALEEF: Give me JOOKS… part me in this..
    SERGE: Yo ENVY Why da fuck do we want him in on this?
    ENVY: (eyes on KALEEF) Cus I owe him… and …. Because he’s nice to give us these nice toys (looks at his new weapon) what’s ur beef with JOOKS?
    KALEEF: Personal vendetta… something from awhile back….
    ENVY: HADES let him be…
    HADES: (pulls his gun down from KALEEF)
    KALEEF: We can head off to the docks right now…. Shipment’s due in 30 minutes…
    ENVY: (motions the guys to go) Let’s pay the docks a visit…
    (The four leave)

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  3. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    (Meanwhile inside a house garage... VIZZ SWITCHBLADE, MALOSOVICH, DICINYAEYE, INKWELL and SSENLLI gather…)

    VIZZ: (continues talking)….. so as that whole area is being covered… SSENLLI and MALO make sure to cover that spot…. MALO….
    INKWELL: (taps MALO) Yo maan.. wakeup…
    MALOSOVICH: (wakesup) Whaa man….
    VIZZ: Yo the fuck is up maan? We here tryin to work this shit out… and u dozing off????
    SSENLLI: Look as far as we know… the plan is set for us… it’s useless that u tell us what u gonna be doing with CASTRO cus we’re all about L…
    VIZZ: NO THAT’S WHERE UR WRONG.. WE ALL IN THIS.. SO WHATEVER HAPPENS… WE ALL HAPPIN WITH IT…
    MALO: Ayo I was never for the cause for this CASTRO shit…. Matter of fact I don’t even know this bitch… I ain’t wasting my time on this shit…
    INKWELL: Heey maan whatever happened to the loyalty with us maan?
    DIC: Shut the fuck up INK…
    VIZZ: Make sure all this is done… u heard?

    (The boys get up…. VIZZ goes to MALO)

    VIZZ: Yo whatsup man?
    MALO: (frownin) with what maaan?
    VIZZ: why u makin this look bad in front of the guys?
    MALO: Maaan shutup VIZZ… u know what u doing and so do we… now just… go away (leans back to sleep) (VIZZ shoves MALO… MALO gets up and charges at VIZZ) YO WHAT THE FUCK MAAN?
    (The boys get in between and separate the two)
    DIC: (pushes away VIZZ) YO WHAT THE FUCK IS UP WITH U MAAN
    VIZZ: WHO DO U THINK U ARE!??!?! NAW IM SAYIN?
    DIC: NAWW I think the question is who do u think u are!!!
    (INK holds back VIZZ)
    VIZZ: Yo you three just do your shit and we’ll do ours…. (VIZZ walks off with INK)
    SSENLLI: Yo fuck him…. We do our own shit…
    DIC: Yeah MALO I think us 3 are better off without his dumbass… the fuck we need him for…
    MALO: All I know (lookin at his hands after touchin his lip) is… they won’t be leaving that arena…
    DIC: Comeon… lets be out…

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    (Meanwhile out at MICKEY D’s… CASTRO sits in the ride with J DOT C…)

    CASTRO: (checks rear view mirror) Yo where the fuck is heee?
    J DOT C: (checks his side mirror) He said he’d be here….
    CASTRO: (checks his watch… he looks around… a cell phone goes off…. CASTRO digs into his cell and answers) Yo…
    VOICE ON PHONE: Yo we comin around the corner…
    CASTRO: Come to the lot.. were in the back.. (hangs up)
    J DOT C: Is that them?
    CASTRO: (looking around) yeaa…
    ( a car pulls up… two figures appear…)
    FANTOM: (opens his window and parks next to CASTRO and J DOT C)
    FANTOM: What is it maan
    CASTRO: They taking 2 long….
    FANTOM: (checking his watch) They shoulda been here 10 minutes ago…
    (a limo pulls up…. The back door opens… JOOK comes out..)
    J DOT C: Yo whadaup maan….
    JOOK: Alright guys… u know the deal…. Get thru with the com once you guys get in the arena… I’ll be with INSANITY the whole time….
    J DOT C: U got it… (to the guys) let’s go… (J DOT C and CASTRO get in the car. JOOK takes off first in the limo. FANTOM and DMETRIUS back up their ride and follow off to the limo. CASTRO backs up his ride… and leaves the lot going a different route with J DOT C).

    JOOKS: (inside his limo dials up the cell)
    INSANITY: (answers cell) This is he…
    JOOKS: It’s all ready…
    INSANITY: Good… everyone’s headed off to the arena?
    JOOKS: Just as it’s planned… What about your end?
    INSANITY: Ohhh we’re on the go now…. Don’t worry about it… we got it locked…
    JOOKS: alright… (hangs up and looks out the window. He sits with a long case in his lap and opens it slowly to reveal a silencer gun.)

    (Over at INSANITY’s place…)
    INSANITY: Ready to move?
    (AWEDISHIN and L-DOGG nod and look at each other. INSANITY gets into his ride.. the two guys lace up and strap and head off into their bikes. INSANITY slowly rides off…. AWEDISHIN gets on one motorcycle and moves to the front of INSANITY’s ride… while L-DOGG rolls behind the ride).

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    (INSENSE gets off the phone…)

    INSENSE: change of plans…
    PENTUP: What!??
    INSENSE: Jeff just hired me to oversee security…
    PENTUP: shutup!
    PATRIARCH: U serious???
    INSENSE: They’ll have me uniformed and packed the whole time…
    PENTUP: So you’re not performing tonight?
    INSENSE: He told me after my act since Im going first on stage… I’ll be able to get into gear after as I change… and then I’ll be on the scope..
    PATRIARCH: That’a gonna be good..
    PENTUP: Yeah…
    INSENSE: So now since were all ready….. let’s review what we gonna do..
    (The three huddle up)

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    (Meanwhile elsewhere in the city… a cell phone rings…)

    EX VENOM: (on phone calls MADPOET)
    MADPOET: This MAD… whadup?
    EX VENOM: Yo son… what’s goin on with BLACK…
    MADPOET: What u mean?
    EX: Yall ain been clueing me in as to what yall gonna do…..
    MADPOET: Me and BLACK bout to score on some payback…
    EX: U mean ur on this too?
    MADPOET: VENOM… think about NEBZ…then ask me why were doing what were doin
    EX VENOM: What about GHETTOQUEEN?
    MADPOET: That’s none of your business..
    EX VENOM: She’s a friend of mine…. So yes its my business too!
    MADPOET: Are you with us or u gonna pussy out?
    EX VENOM: MAD this is wrong and u know it!
    MADPOET: Maan fuck u..
    (MAD hangs up phone… and drives through the city reflecting… thinking… and slowly veers a right turn thinking about everything… then about GHETTOQUEEN… shakes his head grimly….. leans back a bit comfortably as best as he can as he cruises into the city..)

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    (Meanwhile… at the hospital…. GHETTOQUEEN and NANIJAH peek into the door where SHORT2003 is.. the two come inside and both stand around SHORT)

    (SHORT2003 slowly opens her eyes..with the oxygen mask over her faintly awake)

    GHETTOQUEEN: (whispering) heeey girl….. (SHORT lends out her hand and holds GHETTOQUEEN’S hand…)
    NANIJAH: (looks at SHORT2003) U doin fine girlfriend… (holds SHORT2003’s hand…)

    (All three sit together in the lonely hospital room…. )



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    TO BE CONTINUED
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  4. Mac Flow

    Mac Flow Die

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    man my part was bustafied this time lol
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  5. Madpoet

    Madpoet why is this so short....

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    Im gangsta...and pimpy *bends pinky*
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  6. Flow Da HoloGraff

    Flow Da HoloGraff Fuck Up!

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    i got a no speaking part lol
    i'm a prop
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  7. Fantom

    Fantom :ihadadream:

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    make with the shooting already...
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  8. Blue BaIIs

    Blue BaIIs Damn Trick You Done?

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    lol@being held back by ink

    youd need an electric fence to hold me back son

    i woulda murdered malo
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  9. Hidden_Poetry

    Hidden_Poetry New Member

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    yay short made it :D

    good stuff.....
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  10. Short2003

    Short2003 AbsoluteHotness

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    Woooooooohoooooo Im alive
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  11. Serge dot T

    Serge dot T Guest

    Shoulda blasted Leef and bounced.
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  12. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Lol the kid is about to come up and still MadPoets shorty.

    Dope piece tek lets meet in holywood and make this shit happen.
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  13. kaLeeF

    kaLeeF me and weed go waaay back

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    homie was too pussy to shoot...but i had to put up a front ...yall aint getting shit


    i hope..
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  14. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    wooohoooo theres a new sheriff in town

    all I know is ain't none of you bastards shooting up shit on my watch. I'll have snipers positioned there, there, there, there, and over there. Try something...

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  15. *NativeTongue*

    *NativeTongue* New Member

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    really

    i never wouldve held someone back from a fight
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  16. Madpoet

    Madpoet why is this so short....

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    Tek only did that so I could cap ya silly dancin ass now..
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  17. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    try me poet, I got the streets watchin you...

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  18. GammoN

    GammoN Sole Survivor of the DOJO

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    Good shit, man..diggin' this..
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  19. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    I ain't do shit this part...
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  20. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    dont worry .... jus be patient.
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