A A child grows and I'm senile old so I like turtles

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  1. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Inspired by bagglad and this is not a mean spirited attack.

    I repent of this. Forgive me.

    A child grows and I'm senile old so I like turtles
    A myrtle beach on a wild doe makes Bambi hurtle
    Birds singing raps but caterpillars sag blue hats blood
    It's absurd bringing four wheelers and red daps thud!
    The forest has turtles too, and bell flowers named Sue
    But that trick adores a whore at hours, blame you!
    A child grows and I'm senile old so I like turtles



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  2. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Nicely done.
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  3. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Nicely done bagels on lightly done tables...I'm a Greek poet so I produce pastries. Thanks G
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  4. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    smooth verse lol. i really enjoyed it..too short if you ask me but definitely an enjoyable verse...nicely done
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  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    haha, I'm waiting for the rhyme master's seal of approval.
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  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    he's banned
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  7. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    who was it anyways?
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  8. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    no idea tbh

    only a 3 day ban..we'll see how angry he is tuesday
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  9. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    ^ rofl... my favorite part.. is where he accuses you of stealing his rhymes
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  10. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    lol i know right, im still not even sure where he actually rhymed
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