_Undisputed_ vs. LetterFOUR

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by _Undisputed_, Jul 4, 2007.

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  1. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    iight we'll post here... you should be able to make new posts if you've activated your account through the email you should have received when you signed up
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  2. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    This idiot’s report card; where he got his name - Letter four
    Too stupid to write a verse n too dumb to get a metaphor
    I started with a drizzle, now I’m gonna let it pour
    I’ll spread ya whore, then shred it more
    than you so she’s wanting MY dick instead of yours
    Head to Florida, where I’m always blazing the heat
    It’s amazing to me, how this kid thinks he can disgrace the elite
    Got him running now like he’s chasing the beat
    I was raised in the street, amongst gangstas n G’s
    and I’ll snatch ya out your kicks n have you facing da-feet
    My patience is weak, like your starving Haitian physique
    I’m debasing this geek with a verse that’s fluid and felt better
    I’ll take a W while I’m handing you the twelfth letter
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  3. LetteRfOUR

    LetteRfOUR New Member

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    Ok you live amongst gangstas n G’s
    What do you think G stands for????
    Answer me please
    Whered your street smarts from
    Your familys genes
    With a mother who popes xaniez and tries to stand on her knees
    The decision that you fuckin stupid is undisputed
    You sound like a kid in the first bar saying im dumb and stupid
    When dumb is stupid
    Your about to get your privliges to post here quickly snatched
    And i wont give em back for spitin raps so freakin wack
    Old Rock fanS are switchin back
    This kid is blaCk.... Where the fuck is his rhythom at
    Anyway this was a bitch attack..
    And when bitches attack usually i dont hit em back
    This is why for my responce i didnt try
    I read between your lines and All I saw was some hidden lies
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  4. LetteRfOUR

    LetteRfOUR New Member

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    i checked my email either its too filled up with junk or i never got it or i accidentally gave the wronge email
    either way i cant find it.. im bout to sign up again under a differant name
    but i will let yall know its me
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  5. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    uppin for votes
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  7. LetteRfOUR

    LetteRfOUR New Member

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    i think were dead on votes
    i dont mind too much cause i coulda done better
    but still
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  8. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    yo let's get some votes on this
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  9. LetteRfOUR

    LetteRfOUR New Member

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    you got my vote
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  10. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    lol how has noone else voted on this yet? Both verses have been posted for like a week....
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  11. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    yo ..
    undisputed.. your really bad...
    the 12th letter thing was clever enough to keep me laying in really hard... but.. DO BETTER


    letterfour.. you made me giggle a couple times,,, like a newlely fingered schoolgirl... black people rhthym .. put your verse in a more readable format .... reading it was tough for figuring rhythm and punches,,, otherwise not so bad...

    boptedr45r= BOTE which +=5-5= VOTE = letterfour... EASY
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  12. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    This is funny to me. One guy did cool wit the wordplay and all, and was overall decent. The other one comes in rough...rough...but he started to warm up, as I did to his verse. However, reviewing this again, my vote goes to Undisputed.

    v= Undisputed
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  13. _Undisputed_

    _Undisputed_ New Member

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    votes are at 1-1 now...keep em coming
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  14. Tightnme

    Tightnme 1$ on 1 mill$ intrest ?

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    my vote goes to letter 4 xD
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  15. Bill of Writes

    Bill of Writes New Member

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    its like thsi entire site went back in time or sumthin, everything i read is terrible, first cat's flow was steady but thas it, it seemed like all he focused on was makin the lines rhyme but threw hardly any punches, and the punches he threw were terrible, he also had a 'de-feet' line, horribly wack

    second cat wasnt much better, flow was equally as steady, if not better, he also attacked more, although nothing was clever in either verse, he seemed more aggressive and attacked more, threw more lines at his opponent

    so vote- letterfour
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