95. Fatal Words 0-1 vs 96. In Awe

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Word of the Week!!!!

IV

Any head caught biting will be banned from the League
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lol, ok fatal, how about 14.

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=642318

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=642291

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=642281

lol.ok..good luck

well edit with the 6 links.

this is done his scared, someone please replace this wussy
seriously I must be a peeping tom, cuz I can see your pussy
dont push me, my punches will leave your head full of knottz
im hitting this fatal guy with more rights then stuttering cops
your game aint on my level man so just clean out your locker
an ive seen harder punches then yours from anerexic boxers
you cant act hard your from toronto, man I lost some respect
in real life id just cut from ear to ear of corn on that redneck
dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other
I spit straight fire and my lyrics will turn you into mintsmeat
the only fatal words made, are when IV set you up against me
will let the fat lady sing cuz fatal can barely let out a breath
fatals never ate an emcee, even his fat lady starved ta death

this is just a demonstration kid, don't make this a routine..thats my hole spit
cuz you thought vitory was in the bag....too bad it had a hole in it
fuck kicks and punches, Fatal changing directions and going with auto pain
faggot..your family is prolly watching the monitor, yelling "what an awesome name"
Fatal is gonna ask you a question...are you ill?..your prolly gonna say yes
but the mods made a 'stupid move' by matching us..like retarded people playing chess
I aint use to all this glammar, so keeping you in awe...Im taking to my metal of death
cuz I wanted someone ill to battle with, but like court cases..I had to settle for less
Im cocky with my mic, so mods change my record to 1-1...and fuck the details
I wanted to deserve my win...but is Im getting shit for free like bootleg sales
Im not interested in this battle, but fuck it...IV only wanted me to get tested
I came into this battle looking for beef...but instead I saw nothing in-vested
Im blessed with..RBL is only a myth...most of these emcees only rap for luck
so cut in-awe off the sign in list..cuz like' gewish elves' at christmas...you can't 'wrap with us'

gewish--you know..spelled with a J instead

vote=fatal

he got it handz down , better overall verse

V - In Awe

Holmmes came much nicer, Fatal had some stretched ass bars which really ended up making it look like he sacrificed flow for content. Which is a no-no. And his punches weren't that great, anyway..

Wow..

Vote: In Awe

Awe: had like 2 nice lines...and a few okay concepts...nothing special at all really...pretty ok wordplay and nice flow

Fatal: Wut a waste of a post, that was garbage, from opener to closer...step ur game up buddy...this is the rbl

vote-awe

nice verse, i liked it

fatal-keep practicin

vote-awe

better punches
flow wordplay
blah
everything
some all right concepts in the verse and good flow

fatal had stretched bars choppy flow and pretty wack punches

vote-Awe had him from the get go...


dont push me, my punches will leave your head full of knottz
im hitting this fatal guy with more rights then stuttering cops

this was cool.. lol


you cant act hard your from toronto, man I lost some respect
in real life id just cut from ear to ear of corn on that redneck
dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other

lol@the corn referances... but i don't think toronto is really much of a redneck city.. oh well still funny

will let the fat lady sing cuz fatal can barely let out a breath
fatals never ate an emcee, even his fat lady starved ta death

HAHAHAHA nice closer


this is just a demonstration kid, don't make this a routine..thats my hole spit
cuz you thought vitory was in the bag....too bad it had a hole in it
fuck kicks and punches, Fatal changing directions and going with auto pain
faggot..your family is prolly watching the monitor, yelling "what an awesome name"

this was definitly a nice opening to fatal's verse.. but after that he really took a turn for the worst


vote-In Awe

Remove fatal from the rbl and re-instate the limit on how many people are in it, this kid was pathetic. Awe won this with no problem hands down better lines, not to mention better flow.

my vote:awe

dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other



^^ isn't that in he top punches this week!! in one of the mags....i know i read this same concept



i know im right

5. I use bullets as an opinion, so hear me out my brotha
..cuz my advice tends to go in one ear - & out the other - Warlokk

Vote =AWE

Not a great battle,Awe had one line that i liked,which was the "stuttering cop" line..

..Fatal didnt have one single decent line in his verse...extremly poor showing,no doubt..

In Awe - Flowed nicely, concepts weren't very hard hitting. The in one ear and out the other line was ok. Had some other ok lines, none that really caught my attention though.

Fatal Words - Thought for sure you'd have this but your rhyme scheme threw me off. I just wasn't feeling this style. The long bars and once again not rhyming made it seem more like an open mic piece or something.

My vote goes to In Awe.

thanks for the votes.

and lol at the biting, the only thing that was similar was the expression.

my punch was based on imagery, yours was a fracture like gangsta punch.

U consider my guns all talk.. then let me put voices in ya head..

^that was closer to yours then mines was

but again thanks for the votes.

Awe came more creative. At least half of fatals lines were played, or ive seen em before. His lines were a little stretched, took too many words to make his point. Awe had some nice punches, i was feelin most of his verse. Awe takes this for more originality.

Vote: in awe

v- fatal

\he had the bootleg line while in awae only had a nice structure

VOTE=AWE

That stuttering cops line had me rollin....

Easy Victory, of course.....nice drop Awe


*Opinion* on Fatal Words.......Needs work. A lot.

>>Grimm<<