95. Fatal Words 0-1 vs 96. In Awe

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. in awe

    in awe solo

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  3. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    lol.ok..good luck

    well edit with the 6 links.
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  4. in awe

    in awe solo

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    this is done his scared, someone please replace this wussy
    seriously I must be a peeping tom, cuz I can see your pussy
    dont push me, my punches will leave your head full of knottz
    im hitting this fatal guy with more rights then stuttering cops
    your game aint on my level man so just clean out your locker
    an ive seen harder punches then yours from anerexic boxers
    you cant act hard your from toronto, man I lost some respect
    in real life id just cut from ear to ear of corn on that redneck
    dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
    cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other
    I spit straight fire and my lyrics will turn you into mintsmeat
    the only fatal words made, are when IV set you up against me
    will let the fat lady sing cuz fatal can barely let out a breath
    fatals never ate an emcee, even his fat lady starved ta death
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  5. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    this is just a demonstration kid, don't make this a routine..thats my hole spit
    cuz you thought vitory was in the bag....too bad it had a hole in it
    fuck kicks and punches, Fatal changing directions and going with auto pain
    faggot..your family is prolly watching the monitor, yelling "what an awesome name"
    Fatal is gonna ask you a question...are you ill?..your prolly gonna say yes
    but the mods made a 'stupid move' by matching us..like retarded people playing chess
    I aint use to all this glammar, so keeping you in awe...Im taking to my metal of death
    cuz I wanted someone ill to battle with, but like court cases..I had to settle for less
    Im cocky with my mic, so mods change my record to 1-1...and fuck the details
    I wanted to deserve my win...but is Im getting shit for free like bootleg sales
    Im not interested in this battle, but fuck it...IV only wanted me to get tested
    I came into this battle looking for beef...but instead I saw nothing in-vested
    Im blessed with..RBL is only a myth...most of these emcees only rap for luck
    so cut in-awe off the sign in list..cuz like' gewish elves' at christmas...you can't 'wrap with us'

    gewish--you know..spelled with a J instead
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  6. Da Dime

    Da Dime 'Da' 'D'evils 'I'n 'ME'

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    vote=fatal

    he got it handz down , better overall verse
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  7. Hybrid Angel

    Hybrid Angel Inkwell Q Thompson

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    V - In Awe

    Holmmes came much nicer, Fatal had some stretched ass bars which really ended up making it look like he sacrificed flow for content. Which is a no-no. And his punches weren't that great, anyway..
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  8. MiStA aRsOnIsT

    MiStA aRsOnIsT New Member

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    Wow..

    Vote: In Awe

    Awe: had like 2 nice lines...and a few okay concepts...nothing special at all really...pretty ok wordplay and nice flow

    Fatal: Wut a waste of a post, that was garbage, from opener to closer...step ur game up buddy...this is the rbl
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  9. Orbit

    Orbit new face

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    vote-awe

    nice verse, i liked it

    fatal-keep practicin
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  10. hazmat.

    hazmat. New Member

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    vote-awe

    better punches
    flow wordplay
    blah
    everything
    some all right concepts in the verse and good flow

    fatal had stretched bars choppy flow and pretty wack punches
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  11. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    vote-Awe had him from the get go...


    dont push me, my punches will leave your head full of knottz
    im hitting this fatal guy with more rights then stuttering cops

    this was cool.. lol


    you cant act hard your from toronto, man I lost some respect
    in real life id just cut from ear to ear of corn on that redneck
    dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
    cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other

    lol@the corn referances... but i don't think toronto is really much of a redneck city.. oh well still funny

    will let the fat lady sing cuz fatal can barely let out a breath
    fatals never ate an emcee, even his fat lady starved ta death

    HAHAHAHA nice closer


    this is just a demonstration kid, don't make this a routine..thats my hole spit
    cuz you thought vitory was in the bag....too bad it had a hole in it
    fuck kicks and punches, Fatal changing directions and going with auto pain
    faggot..your family is prolly watching the monitor, yelling "what an awesome name"

    this was definitly a nice opening to fatal's verse.. but after that he really took a turn for the worst


    vote-In Awe
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  12. MuDFo0t

    MuDFo0t GooseBumps

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    Remove fatal from the rbl and re-instate the limit on how many people are in it, this kid was pathetic. Awe won this with no problem hands down better lines, not to mention better flow.

    my vote:awe
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  13. KiLLer-Combo

    KiLLer-Combo New Member

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    dont ignore me son, I heard your wack you heard im butter
    cuz my punches will go straight in one ear and out the other



    ^^ isn't that in he top punches this week!! in one of the mags....i know i read this same concept



    i know im right
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  14. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    5. I use bullets as an opinion, so hear me out my brotha
    ..cuz my advice tends to go in one ear - & out the other - Warlokk
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  15. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    Vote =AWE

    Not a great battle,Awe had one line that i liked,which was the "stuttering cop" line..

    ..Fatal didnt have one single decent line in his verse...extremly poor showing,no doubt..
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  16. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    In Awe - Flowed nicely, concepts weren't very hard hitting. The in one ear and out the other line was ok. Had some other ok lines, none that really caught my attention though.

    Fatal Words - Thought for sure you'd have this but your rhyme scheme threw me off. I just wasn't feeling this style. The long bars and once again not rhyming made it seem more like an open mic piece or something.

    My vote goes to In Awe.
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  17. in awe

    in awe solo

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    thanks for the votes.

    and lol at the biting, the only thing that was similar was the expression.

    my punch was based on imagery, yours was a fracture like gangsta punch.

    U consider my guns all talk.. then let me put voices in ya head..

    ^that was closer to yours then mines was

    but again thanks for the votes.
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  18. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Awe came more creative. At least half of fatals lines were played, or ive seen em before. His lines were a little stretched, took too many words to make his point. Awe had some nice punches, i was feelin most of his verse. Awe takes this for more originality.

    Vote: in awe
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  19. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    v- fatal

    \he had the bootleg line while in awae only had a nice structure
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  20. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    VOTE=AWE

    That stuttering cops line had me rollin....

    Easy Victory, of course.....nice drop Awe


    *Opinion* on Fatal Words.......Needs work. A lot.

    >>Grimm<<
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