9. Yung Troy 4-3 vs 10. Star Screen 3-2

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    9. Yung Troy 4-3 vs 10. Star Screen 3-2
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  2. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    checkin in

    20 lines

    I might post cuz I don't know how the rest of my week gon be

    I'll start on my verse right now
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  3. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Alright, here I go

    Soft cat I'll be rippin ya whiskers
    you're the type of MC who clings with ballet tights and bunny slippers.................
    but you are not the blame its your mom and dad
    they knew you were a mistake
    your first word came out as "jimmy hat"..............
    the 2nd time I chose to battle you fag
    SHARING my rhymes with you, prepare for the stock market to crash...................
    for you its hard to think punches, man that's sad
    you'd be better just choosin DOPE and snorting KG's mag......................
    and as an emcee you're cheap and wack
    so your (text style/textile)
    easily located on clearance racks.................
    you should receive life imprisonment
    damn you the worsest
    with an obsession towards murdering your own verses..................
    you're like a janitor who thoroughly cleans
    your lines worn and filthy
    so when I read I think "mop strings"........................
    and its best you don't step to this slugger
    cuz you won't win long as your punches hit with effection of playful lovers...............

    what you got?
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  4. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    .........my bad
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  5. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    kids, stay in school..

    You reached these forums by accident, and should have steered clear
    This is for the top 20, Your lame ass probably should have clicked here
    http://board.rapmusic.com/forumdisplay.php?f=40
    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night
    Your at the bottom of the food chain..and for further discussion
    The only way that your Gettin (bred).is with one of your cousins
    This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday
    I'll leave u awe struck, battle with Star and give hope all up
    Troy replaced the writters on the strike, when the jokes all sucked
    Cut Ya throat all up, raw..the loss is like the stalk of Your soul
    It'll be hard to talk, You'll communicate Ya thoughts through Ya nose
    I'm lockin up board..he's lookin for a bone to pick with raps
    I'm an epidemic..even a dentist couldnt bridge the gap
    Leprien's the tightest of the three, cuz he's got the most work
    he floods the open mic, and will probably vote for u post verse
    this makes the second time straight I've had to beat your ass sucker
    Your moms so fuckin old she was a waitress at the last supper? lol​
    test
  6. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    half assed verse...YADA, YADA, YADA
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  7. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Nice..................you popped up outta nowhere

    Damn
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  8. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    lol, one of the mods is fuckin with me
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  9. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    for you its hard to think punches, man that's sad
    you'd be better just choosin DOPE and snorting KG's mag

    gotta love the ass kissachure on this one, lol

    and as an emcee you're cheap and wack
    so your (text style/textile)
    easily located on clearance racks

    cool lil wordplay on this.

    you're like a janitor who thoroughly cleans
    your lines worn and filthy
    so when I read I think "mop strings".
    ROFL .. i honestly laughed ..
    its so simple though, lol.



    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night
    ^nice ..

    This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday
    ^coo sheahit ..

    this makes the second time straight I've had to beat your ass sucker
    Your moms so fuckin old she was a waitress at the last supper
    ^ROFL.

    vote - Star ..

    he easily picked troy apart ..
    my nigga still needs to elevate.
    read a few battles man
    adjust your style ..
    & look up metaphors & similies.
    & check out a few examples.
    youre scratching the surface
    on a few of your punches.
    test
  10. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    troys improving still, but you needa swtich up that bracket (explanation) type shit



    and as an emcee you're cheap and wack
    so your (text style/textile)
    easily located on clearance racks.................

    this was cool from troy...hes def. improving


    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night
    This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday

    both those lines are pretty played, but still enough to beat yung troy

    V goes to STARSCREEN
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  11. xEPITOMEx

    xEPITOMEx The Golden Rule

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    Troy:

    Your flow is okay, and I'm not sure there's a reason but I really liked this:

    "damn you the worsest
    with an obsession towards murdering your own verses"

    But I just didn't feel your punches and your wordplays were a bit streched.

    "SHARING my rhymes with you, prepare for the stock market to crash" - This concept was okay but perhaps could've been worded better...

    You're the kind of kat that will be good in a couple months time, but it's like ur still working on improving...


    StarScreen

    Really solid verse, nice multi flow. In the first half I pretty much thought every couplet was good. Fell off for me at the writers bit, but a cool (if not a little cheesy) closer...

    "You reached these forums by accident, and should have steered clear
    This is for the top 20, Your lame ass probably should have clicked here"
    http://board.rapmusic.com/forumdisplay.php?f=40


    "This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday" <---Line of the battle

    "this makes the second time straight I've had to beat your ass sucker
    Your moms so fuckin old she was a waitress at the last supper?" <---lol


    vote = StarScreen
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  12. Prodigal_Son

    Prodigal_Son FlObama

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    Troy, you my boy and everything, but you gotta stop explaining your wordplay dog. We ain't stupid, well most of us ain't stupid, we understand. I was feelin some of your lines tho:

    for you its hard to think punches, man that's sad
    you'd be better just choosin DOPE and snorting KG's mag
    and as an emcee you're cheap and wack
    so your (text style/textile)
    easily located on clearance racks


    you're like a janitor who thoroughly cleans
    your lines worn and filthy
    so when I read I think "mop strings'


    Star, first of all sorry for no showin when we was supposed to battle. I had to take care of real life shit. Secondly, that verse didn't seem to lack a lil luster, but was tight none-the-less.

    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night


    This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday


    this makes the second time straight I've had to beat your ass sucker
    Your moms so fuckin old she was a waitress at the last supper? lol


    good battle but...

    Starscreen GMV.
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  13. Big Mack

    Big Mack Boss

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    The opening Destroyed! for Star.

    That was so funny. I had to click on the link to figure it out, that's great!

    What else is there to say?

    Vote-Starscreen
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  14. Mr.Perfect

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    yung troy should just stop with the explanations...hella newbie-ish

    but his clearance rack line was decent, nothing else really worth mentioning


    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night

    that line was dope from Star, and though i didnt quote his other lines, he didnt have anything that i absolutely despised, unlike yung troy

    so vote starscreen
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  15. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    mos def..I have to make sure I vote on my other battles this week

    nice verse Troy, I know u could have came alot better

    pzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  16. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    vs

    star killed it,
    his verse was just too much 4 troy,
    consistent,easy read,hard punches,clever lines.

    Vote - starscreen
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  17. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    There's not much i can say that hasn't already been said, but Troy does have that 'go for the throat' mentality. That shit was evident in lines like...

    It's not the best in the world but it shows a glimpse of a bright future beyond a 'shadow of doubt' heh.

    But word, this battle had Star written all over it.

    Vote= Star
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  18. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    Wow Troy definitely stepped his shit up ... HUGE improvement man, nice work ...

    Not a one-sided battle to say the least (theres something that hasn't already been said =P)

    Yung Troy:
    Aggressive attack on his style ... In-part true, but hush-hush on the swaying ... Your closer could've been worded better ... or changed altogether but, a good overall verse ...

    Star Screen:

    Agressive at the start of that citing ... And graphic towards the end ... Wtf were you thinking on that closer? LMAO!!! Above-average verse overall

    Troy, you're definitely grasping the concept a little better, but there's still some complexity missing ... TOO simple is exactly that: TOO simple ... Try to toss up some more complex punches and wordplay in your shit

    A CLOSE battle, but I feel Star got the edge in this one ...

    Nice work Troy, keep it up

    Vote = Star Screen
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  19. Johnny Weeks

    Johnny Weeks New Member

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    props to troy for steppin up, for sure

    but star screen had fresher concepts and used them more effectively

    the wording and flow was much better, it was just an overall superior verse


    V Star
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  20. xX_NASTY_Xx

    xX_NASTY_Xx Guest

    Yung Troy

    Soft cat I'll be rippin ya whiskers
    you're the type of MC who clings with ballet tights and bunny slippers.................EH
    but you are not the blame its your mom and dad
    they knew you were a mistake
    your first word came out as "jimmy hat"..............HAHA
    the 2nd time I chose to battle you fag
    SHARING my rhymes with you, prepare for the stock market to crash...................HEHE
    for you its hard to think punches, man that's sad
    you'd be better just choosin DOPE and snorting KG's mag......................I LIKE THIS LINE
    and as an emcee you're cheap and wack
    so your (text style/textile)
    easily located on clearance racks.................LOL NICE
    you should receive life imprisonment
    damn you the worsest
    with an obsession towards murdering your own verses..................AH MADE UP WORDS AREN'T COOL
    you're like a janitor who thoroughly cleans
    your lines worn and filthy
    so when I read I think "mop strings"........................EH
    and its best you don't step to this slugger
    cuz you won't win long as your punches hit with effection of playful lovers...............NOPE

    StarsCreen

    You reached these forums by accident, and should have steered clear
    This is for the top 20, Your lame ass probably should have clicked here
    http://board.rapmusic.com/forumdisplay.php?f=40 ....LOL HAHAHA LOVE THIS LINE

    This is flatterin..Star shines.. this kid's distracted with the light
    I'll beat Troy beyond the shadow of a doubt, unless we battlin at night....NIIIICE

    Your at the bottom of the food chain..and for further discussion
    The only way that your Gettin (bred).is with one of your cousins....LOL COUSIN FUCKIN

    This battle is banana's, keep Ya EYES peeled on the driveway
    I'm at my strongest point, your on the weak end like a Friday....1ST LINE WAS STRONG SECOND WAS AIGHT

    I'll leave u awe struck, battle with Star and give hope all up
    Troy replaced the writters on the strike, when the jokes all sucked....LOL

    Cut Ya throat all up, raw..the loss is like the stalk of Your soul
    It'll be hard to talk, You'll communicate Ya thoughts through Ya nose....SOSO

    I'm lockin up board..he's lookin for a bone to pick with raps
    I'm an epidemic..even a dentist couldnt bridge the gap....AIGHT

    Leprien's the tightest of the three, cuz he's got the most work
    he floods the open mic, and will probably vote for u post verse....EH

    this makes the second time straight I've had to beat your ass sucker
    Your moms so fuckin old she was a waitress at the last supper? lol....LMAO LOVE THE ? HAHAHAHAHA

    VOTE= Star stayed consistant throughout his whole verse
    test
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