9. Vyris (11-6) v. 10. One's Abyss (5-0)

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  1. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    9. Vyris v. 10. One's Abyss

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  2. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    going around 20..

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  3. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    i was thinkin more like 14.
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  4. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  5. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    here's 14, match it.

    I'ma hurt u simply, dirty punches leave kid on the floor numb
    u better steal Randy Johnson's jersey cuz after this u'll be 5-1
    I'm famous, and my lines design anguish often and shine stainless
    while u're shit is as interesting as blind men talking in sign language
    I'll damage ur grill, and it's ur Business to handle the thrill
    but how are u gonna 'Stay In Charge' when u can't Manager skills?
    for real, kid will prolly bite..tonight we know ur words will show
    us that u're a 'wolf' <-- sorry, I just wanted to reverse my 'flow'
    I'm sellin this quote, don't drop or yell for ur hope
    u telling me to trip is the only time I fell for a joke
    my words are bombs, so bring the army to fight mine
    cuz u'll need a big gun to win since u never cannon ur lifetime
    u assemble fakeness, u copy my whole lyric
    and u couldn't resemble greatness, if u stole my spirit

    holla.
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  6. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    im destroyin this fake, ya can't hide from ya fate
    Cause if your a fucking virus, consider me bill gates
    you can't win- get the clue? everyone hates ya to
    Faggots searching for more 'dick', then librarians do
    divertin ya game, twirps the first to get maimed
    I got eyedill lookin in art stores for his fucking body frame
    Smash ya face with lug's, put salt on ya slugs
    and i'll be converin up ya coffin', like tissue paper does
    even with the help of ghostwriters ya shit's lame
    Im a meteorologist, and word has it you'll never reign
    try n match wits? and i'll end ya career
    and you'll never reach 12 wins like the cavaliers
    how dare you test me, one's burryin the lid
    n im breaking this cottdamn billy bob, like angelina joeline did


    mottafugga
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  7. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Oh My God...


    Vote - Eyedill

    His Verse Was Less Painful To Read...Not By Much Though...

    Jesus.
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  8. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  9. Klobb 16

    Klobb 16 ..

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    Eyedill

    I'm famous, and my lines design anguish often and shine stainless
    while u're shit is as interesting as blind men talking in sign language
    I'll damage ur grill, and it's ur Business to handle the thrill
    but how are u gonna 'Stay In Charge' when u can't Manager skills?

    and the joke line was nice

    Abyss

    .. eh.. nothin I liked.. forced/ played punches

    blah..

    vote eyedill..
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  10. Hal Jordan

    Hal Jordan One Hal of a Writer

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    vote = eyedill

    other dude used the most played concepts...reign/rain?

    eyedill had an all around better verse....


    blah
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  11. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    one was hurting himself, utterly forcing those punches

    dill had some nice concepts and a tolerable verse


    i think they both half assed it though



    vote goes to eyedill
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  12. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    i should have asked for an extension.
    i had no time to write this week.

    good shit dill.
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  13. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    yeah i think you shoulda, becuz that verse was very lackluster, which made eyedill's verse seem much better.

    vote- eyedill for having the better verse
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  14. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    fukc fuck fuck fuck lol

    i just re read my verse. and saw how shitty it was.

    whats the fun of an alias if you lose.

    i might just sign out
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    word, 5-0, uppin.
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  16. Stuart Minkis

    Stuart Minkis New Member

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    shitty verse one

    props
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  17. Cane

    Cane Guest

    eydill won. i didn't especially like either verse but eyedill was better. punches especially.

    vote=eyedill
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  18. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    lame battle.


    no quotables.


    dill wins, other cat loses.
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  19. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    vote - eye

    but i didn't enjoy reading this battle fellas...

    stayup
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  20. Incephalon

    Incephalon The Devil's Inner Demon

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    v/eye

    both sucked tho as stated above
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