9. theFRANCHISE 3-1 10. Defcon 5 . 6-3

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    Check 20 str8?
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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    16-20 will work.........

    g'luck....

    just drop whenever - i don't play off verses........
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  4. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    i'm the new breed sit back while i deliver force
    and throw more lines than spiderman and venom on a collision coarse


    beat this wigger red,black and blue if he tests me man
    so bad the coroner'll confuse his body with a pepsi can
    for u we'll get something fruity..like cherry and such
    ya sweet ass is to frail...u couldn't carry ya bluff
    i'll wrinkle his frame while tossing this yamp
    til his face resembles a survivor from a holocuast camp
    u want insults? let's get those poppin
    ur more of a lost calls than sprint phones droppin
    he's an international fag..u don't see me hatin'
    cause he got more arabs in him than BP stations
    u don't play off verses? damn this whore got bolder
    then drops randoms bars like nervous Fort Knox soldiers
    i'm not testin ya gangsta..i'm just sayin ya soft
    even ya LP would make NeYo turn the radio off
    i ain't hatin on ya prowess..but this one's gon' foil
    cause u've sucked on more tracks than them Hunt's point girls
    i beat celeb's too..the show probably gon' can me
    cause i'm cleanin house with Fran..like a co-star on the Nanny

    20 like that
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  5. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    first of all..............

    theFRANCHISE backs up his words while my buddy just talks
    you’ll take a lichen to my verse as if you were studying rocks
    don’t believe the trash you know he speaks.. Defcon’s reached his lowly peaks
    he needs to skate his ass right out this league… quicker than Joey Cheeks
    he’s bitten concepts once or twice …. more than a vandal why he’s
    just a cashier at valet parking… since he can’t handle my keys
    i’ll break up this fake… bury him and then shake up his wake
    i could write my verse in Islam and still not Mecca mistake
    your verse we plumped through it.. win, we won’t see this chump do it
    and since death is the conclusion…. he’s quick to jump to it
    all of your bars are strung out… my best wasn’t brung out
    dude is Jordan since he plays with many balls with his tongue out
    you non-knowin’ thong showin’ R&B song flowin’
    this board thinks you’re a pus s y but the investigation is still on-goin’
    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles
    Defcon 5 is quick to run…you’ll see the votes get sick then plunge
    this dude is more absorbed in his work than a frickin’ sponge
    i’ve dropped bout 18 bars or so…. but already chap’s hurt
    he came to battle with no arms like a spaghetti strap shirt

    and on to the championship i go.........
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  6. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    damn.....def, fresh verse....lil too laid back, but smooth...mixtape -ish.....


    franchise, dope verse....flow was insane, and you had some dope lines, however, im pretty sure you both recycled some ish, maybe not but i suspect so, either way


    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles

    line of the battle

    theFRANCHISE backs up his words while my buddy just talks
    you’ll take a lichen to my verse as if you were studying rocks

    like the wordplay, this is an example of good wordplay

    however, example of bad wordplay

    i’ll break up this fake… bury him and then shake up his wake
    i could write my verse in Islam and still not Mecca mistake


    lol, hard verse with some ill flow and nice lines



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    beat this wigger red,black and blue if he tests me man
    so bad the coroner'll confuse his body with a pepsi can

    nice

    i beat celeb's too..the show probably gon' can me
    cause i'm cleanin house with Fran..like a co-star on the Nanny

    good closer




    vote franchise.....i think he was a little more consistent, however you guys were pretty much even...maybe 2 lines swayed my vote to franchise, and his flow.....also, defcon's ish while smooth as hell was a little weak for TEXT....nice for audio or live battles, like the holocaust line


    either way, both came ill and its a matter of personal preference
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  7. yuppi

    yuppi da raisin

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    um....
    weak battle for a champeenship...

    i think defcon easily took this one... hes flow was more there, and more importantly
    hes punches were less forced.
    all the while only about one line from fran really did anything for me, punches werent direct


    { this dude is more absorbed in his work than a frickin’ sponge}
    like this line.. theres nothing wrong with being absorde in your work not really an insult.

    vote - defcon 5
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  8. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Defcon 5

    TF:

    theFRANCHISE backs up his words while my buddy just talks
    you’ll take a lichen to my verse as if you were studying rocks
    Nah, wasn't feeling the opener.
    don’t believe the trash you know he speaks.. Defcon’s reached his lowly peaks
    he needs to skate his ass right out this league… quicker than Joey Cheeks
    Hmm..
    he’s bitten concepts once or twice …. more than a vandal why he’s
    just a cashier at valet parking… since he can’t handle my keys
    Iiight.
    i’ll break up this fake… bury him and then shake up his wake
    i could write my verse in Islam and still not Mecca mistake
    Feeling this I guess.
    your verse we plumped through it.. win, we won’t see this chump do it
    and since death is the conclusion…. he’s quick to jump to it
    Worded bad.
    all of your bars are strung out… my best wasn’t brung out
    dude is Jordan since he plays with many balls with his tongue out
    Worded bad again... you got with in there twice.
    you non-knowin’ thong showin’ R&B song flowin’
    this board thinks you’re a pus s y but the investigation is still on-goin’
    K.
    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles
    Cool.
    Defcon 5 is quick to run…you’ll see the votes get sick then plunge
    this dude is more absorbed in his work than a frickin’ sponge
    But a sponge doesn't work, they do not have a job.
    i’ve dropped bout 18 bars or so…. but already chap’s hurt
    he came to battle with no arms like a spaghetti strap shirt
    Okay closer.

    I really wasn't feeling your verse a whole lot, it seems like your wording was really off. Your flow was pretty decent, I thought it was good. Your punches really didn't have a huge impact after reading, nothing too funny at all. The best wordplay you had was that Islam/Mecca line and that wasn't really a diss to Defcon 5, you just said that you were not going to screw up while writing. I think you could use a little improvment but you didn't have that bad of a verse in my opinion, stay up man.

    Defcon 5:

    i'm the new breed sit back while i deliver force
    and throw more lines than spiderman and venom on a collision coarse
    Iight..
    beat this wigger red,black and blue if he tests me man
    so bad the coroner'll confuse his body with a pepsi can
    Ha, nice.
    for u we'll get something fruity..like cherry and such
    ya sweet ass is to frail...u couldn't carry ya bluff
    Nah.
    i'll wrinkle his frame while tossing this yamp
    til his face resembles a survivor from a holocuast camp
    Nice.
    u want insults? let's get those poppin
    ur more of a lost calls than sprint phones droppin
    Nah.
    he's an international fag..u don't see me hatin'
    cause he got more arabs in him than BP stations
    Iight.
    u don't play off verses? damn this whore got bolder
    then drops randoms bars like nervous Fort Knox soldiers
    Ha.
    i'm not testin ya gangsta..i'm just sayin ya soft
    even ya LP would make NeYo turn the radio off
    Original shit ha.
    i ain't hatin on ya prowess..but this one's gon' foil
    cause u've sucked on more tracks than them Hunt's point girls
    I wasn't feeling this.
    i beat celeb's too..the show probably gon' can me
    cause i'm cleanin house with Fran..like a co-star on the Nanny
    Nice closer.

    Well, you had some hot original concepts. Some shit I would of never thought flipping, I was feeling that Ne-Yo flip the most, that shit was nicely worded and gave me a chuckle. That Fran Dresher line was hot too. You had some cool bars and you feel off a few times but you came pretty consistant.

    BATTLE BREAKDOWN

    This was a one sided battle. Defcon 5 totally merked theFRANCHISE. FRAN had some weak shit in my opinion, didn't really come up to Defcon 5's par. Defcon 5's punches had a lot more impact on me than theFRANCHISE's and he even made me laugh out loud twice, not something I usually do when I read verses. This was a good battle though, keep it up you guys.
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  9. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    ummm yuppi this isn't a chapionship match.....and i would like a more indepth breakdown...FRAN is a cool dude and i won't have any half assed voted deciding this match...so until u further explain why the tally is 1-1...good shit FRAN
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    I was feelin Franchise's jordan line, & his subtitles line was nice too
    I liked Defcon's arab line, NeYo line, & his sprint calls line too
    Overall, this battle was pretty close.. both had a good verse
    But it's quality over quantity.. & Defcon had better punches

    props to both

    v/ Defcon_5
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  11. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    wow no coincidence to see defcon 5 voting against me in my battle you fuckin faggot.

    i'm the new breed sit back while i deliver force
    and throw more lines than spiderman and venom on a collision coarse

    wack


    beat this wigger red,black and blue if he tests me man
    so bad the coroner'll confuse his body with a pepsi can

    hmm not bad

    for u we'll get something fruity..like cherry and such
    ya sweet ass is to frail...u couldn't carry ya bluff

    hmm
    i'll wrinkle his frame while tossing this yamp
    til his face resembles a survivor from a holocuast camp

    hmmm nah

    u want insults? let's get those poppin
    ur more of a lost calls than sprint phones droppin

    wack

    he's an international fag..u don't see me hatin'
    cause he got more arabs in him than BP stations

    wack

    u don't play off verses? damn this whore got bolder
    then drops randoms bars like nervous Fort Knox soldiers
    wack

    i'm not testin ya gangsta..i'm just sayin ya soft
    even ya LP would make NeYo turn the radio off

    wack
    i ain't hatin on ya prowess..but this one's gon' foil
    cause u've sucked on more tracks than them Hunt's point girls

    wack/played
    i beat celeb's too..the show probably gon' can me
    cause i'm cleanin house with Fran..like a co-star on the Nanny
    wack

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    theFRANCHISE backs up his words while my buddy just talks
    you’ll take a lichen to my verse as if you were studying rocks

    sickkkkk
    don’t believe the trash you know he speaks.. Defcon’s reached his lowly peaks
    he needs to skate his ass right out this league… quicker than Joey Cheeks

    lol
    he’s bitten concepts once or twice …. more than a vandal why he’s
    just a cashier at valet parking… since he can’t handle my keys
    hmmm nah
    i’ll break up this fake… bury him and then shake up his wake
    i could write my verse in Islam and still not Mecca mistake

    lmaoooooooooo sick
    your verse we plumped through it.. win, we won’t see this chump do it
    and since death is the conclusion…. he’s quick to jump to it

    hahahaha
    all of your bars are strung out… my best wasn’t brung out
    dude is Jordan since he plays with many balls with his tongue out

    ahahahahahahahahahha
    you non-knowin’ thong showin’ R&B song flowin’
    this board thinks you’re a pus s y but the investigation is still on-goin’

    hmm
    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles
    ahahahahahaha
    Defcon 5 is quick to run…you’ll see the votes get sick then plunge
    this dude is more absorbed in his work than a frickin’ sponge
    lmao
    i’ve dropped bout 18 bars or so…. but already chap’s hurt
    he came to battle with no arms like a spaghetti strap shirt
    hmmm

    real talk
    Franchise easily got this, defcon was not good at all, maybe one line stood out but the rest was WACK..

    vote - franchise
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  12. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    lmmfao Calibre i never thought i'd see the day u'd pull such a faggotish move as to drop a hate vote..just face it ur verse was terrible
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  13. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    that aint a hate vote its the truth, you SUCK you fuckin faggot
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  14. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    dog look how u fuckin started ya vote off...it's a blatant hate vote...fuck out my battle u wack fuck
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    yea, that did look like a hate vote.
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  16. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    tF...

    Nice drop yo.. was feelin alot of it... mostly the idol(subtitle) line and da jordan ish... mecca line was decent too... Jordan coulda been alil better worded even though was feelin it...

    Def 5....
    closer was decent.. neyo line made me smile alil bit... corona line was aight as well... notin to special but wasn't bad either..

    vote - tF
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  17. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    Vote = theFrancise
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    Defcon
    i'm the new breed sit back while i deliver force
    and throw more lines than spiderman and venom on a collision coarse

    u want insults? let's get those poppin
    ur more of a lost calls than sprint phones droppin
    he's an international fag..u don't see me hatin'
    cause he got more arabs in him than BP stations

    i'm not testin ya gangsta..i'm just sayin ya soft
    even ya LP would make NeYo turn the radio off
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    theFrancise

    first of all..............

    theFRANCHISE backs up his words while my buddy just talks
    you’ll take a lichen to my verse as if you were studying rocks

    he’s bitten concepts once or twice …. more than a vandal why he’s
    just a cashier at valet parking… since he can’t handle my keys
    i’ll break up this fake… bury him and then shake up his wake
    i could write my verse in Islam and still not Mecca mistake

    all of your bars are strung out… my best wasn’t brung out
    dude is Jordan since he plays with many balls with his tongue out

    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles
    Defcon 5 is quick to run…you’ll see the votes get sick then plunge
    this dude is more absorbed in his work than a frickin’ sponge
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    pretty descent battle but Defcon just didn't come hard enough for me
    Francise had wittier shit and came with better punches, while defcon was swing but I'm to sure weather or not he was hittin somethin..

    Both came in with good openers, but Francise's verse keep me woke, Defcons' had to many dead areas it kind of tired me out.

    Overall Francise came with a verse filled with better punch and delivery, while defcons' verse was still ok just a lil bit to dead from time to time...
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  18. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    what corona line?
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  19. Meta Syn

    Meta Syn New Member

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    fu*k serge, oneduh, and user…. i’m cursin’ dubbed “idols”
    you need to watch what you say so write your verse in subtitles

    THAT WAS def line of the battle - I havent seen anything like that before

    Props to both but Fran kept commin way cleaner, fresher, and doper. He dropped heavy on Def, def came hard as well I liked that nanny line. But other than that Fran just swept thru him like the old hurricane that hit NC.

    vote/ Franchise
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  20. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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