9. Star Screen 2-2 vs. 10. Memorie 2-2

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  1. Got Life?

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  2. Stars€reen

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  3. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    In ... been busy ... Dropping ASAP
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  4. Stars€reen

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    PROPHECY (THE GUY WHO TAUGHT MEMORY HOW TO BE AN EMCEE)

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    KEVIN (BACKSTREET BOYS)

    that's funny...



    You could travel the world comfortably, any time of day
    Wherever Mem goes.. he'll Phil at home, cuz thats the guy that he dates
    I'm in sync.. Mem, I thought that You were a chick in the league
    Me Gusta Tu Hija (I like You daughter) U'll love a kick in the teeth
    I'm goin on more than a hunch that Your a dunce, so I'ma top out speed
    Memorie gets beat to the punch..like the music to Knockout Kings
    thought I called out prince..Your sig is feminin in ways
    You went left field, too bad that it's a football game
    I'll beat the daylights out of em'..his lifes an hour ahead
    You'll pause to put on make-up and pluck the hairs outta Ya legs
    Don't hold Ya breath, unless.. Ya gotta nebulizer Mem
    beatin me is like the inspiration network and televised skin
    Ya text is so far behind, I bet that You.. drag Ya feet
    if u try to catch up with my craft, then Im'a have to squeeze
    this boards the only hope you have..your career literally hangs on a thread
    Your the type to lick the wet spot, after You've came in the bed
    Your works cut out for You, but I'm surprised that u can operate scissors
    Star beatin Mem's a rhetorical question..like Will a Nazi Say ••••••?
    I know some real niggas in Miami.. u make it out the hood, look back
    You got beat with an ugly stick.. even the wood looks bad​
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  5. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    I’ll Super Nova this bastard; oust the hot gases out through his asshole
    And after being e-peened by Scene in V-three … discover the next black hole
    This fag has his own colorful constellation … and it’s got him Horny
    You can find him right under Orion’s belt and above where Taurus’ Horn be
    Now they warned me, that Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorning
    But I was just scorching to see what it was that Star Jones was torching
    I just didn’t figure this bitch would be posting up pictures of his amores
    I should bitch slap you with the very Spanish-English Dictionary that you’re whoring
    You may be beyond my world, but in retrospect, I’m beyond yours as well
    Writing vs. Reciting ... I’d have to be Grade-A in the former to be in the LADDER to dwell
    ‘Cuz my only way is up; I done conquered your planet
    So I got a rhetorical question for you ******. Who do you think has the advantage?
    Star Screen is too weak for this meteor shower ... he'll get breached
    I’ll leave you like Velocirapper ... EXTINCT; deep at under 20,000 leagues
    So take ya one-piece with ya, ‘cuz you’re off to Bikini Bottom
    They got Sponges as douches even your Octapussy wouldn’t James Bond ‘em
    Maybe that’ll clean up your act ...
    ‘Cuz you’ve got cannon fodder for lyrics … dismembered pieces at best
    Frankenstein couldn’t resurrect a punch for you to connect ...
    Silly soliloquist, save yourself by saving your breath
    You speak, but no one could give a fuck ... so keep THEM away from the rest (of us)

    Holla'd Back.
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  6. Stars€reen

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    Wow..that was a nice verse until u started feedin off mine..

    burns huh? votes!
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  7. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    It was actually funny how you compared the pics ... i laughed my ass off, rofl ... But he didn't teach me how to do my shit, I don't even rap with him anymore but thats another story for another time ... Nice verse btw.
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  8. Munch

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    ok eitha way...

    screen ur verse was just simple....nothin really stood out to me...u only had maybe one good concept....i honestly dont have a fav...line...

    mem...

    Maybe that’ll clean up your act ...
    ‘Cuz you’ve got cannon fodder for lyrics … dismembered pieces at best
    Frankenstein couldn’t resurrect a punch for you to connect ...

    i only like this line...cuz its tru after reading ur verse....

    btw..mem be happy we didnt battle...lol

    vote mem
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  9. Big Mack

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    It's really close to call...argh...but I would have to give it to star

    Vote-Star
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  10. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    From star

    You could travel the world comfortably, any time of day
    Wherever Mem goes.. he'll Phil at home, cuz thats the guy that he dates

    this was simple but it was the only line I was really feelin' out ya verse

    From Mem

    Now they warned me, that Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorning
    But I was just scorching to see what it was that Star Jones was torching

    this was decent

    so I would have to give it to Memorie
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  11. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    up over no shows.
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  12. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Needs way more votes before sunday nite.
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  13. alphawolf

    alphawolf New Member

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    Starscreen's verse was super super simple, alot of undeveloped concepts


    You could travel the world comfortably, any time of day
    Wherever Mem goes.. he'll Phil at home, cuz thats the guy that he dates

    that was your best line



    Memorie dropped real weak, i wasnt feeling any of his lines...all of your wordplay was super stretched and it just seemed like you were reaching and forcing with all your concepts


    very lackluster battle


    vote goes to star screen
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  14. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    eh. i didn't really enjoy this battle. I thought you would both come better.

    Vote Star

    he had a few decent lines, (KO kings, phil at home)

    Mem.. i wasnt really feelin ya verse especially that bikini bottom/spoongebob/octopussy/ james bond shit
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  15. Starscreen

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  17. Rated-Are

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    screen ..
    the fact u used a pic unnoticed is kinda shaky son..
    i feel the trying to get an edge tip.
    & u dont know how hard it is to type while you're drunk.

    madd swayish son.
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  18. ~*^Abaddon^*~

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    You could travel the world comfortably, any time of day
    Wherever Mem goes.. he'll Phil at home, cuz thats the guy that he dates

    ok opener

    I'm in sync.. Mem, I thought that You were a chick in the league
    Me Gusta Tu Hija (I like You daughter) U'll love a kick in the teeth

    naw

    I'm goin on more than a hunch that Your a dunce, so I'ma top out speed
    Memorie gets beat to the punch..like the music to Knockout Kings

    kinda simple

    thought I called out prince..Your sig is feminin in ways
    You went left field, too bad that it's a football game

    naw

    I'll beat the daylights out of em'..his lifes an hour ahead
    You'll pause to put on make-up and pluck the hairs outta Ya legs

    very basic

    Don't hold Ya breath, unless.. Ya gotta nebulizer Mem
    beatin me is like the inspiration network and televised skin

    nope

    Ya text is so far behind, I bet that You.. drag Ya feet
    if u try to catch up with my craft, then Im'a have to squeeze

    ....

    this boards the only hope you have..your career literally hangs on a thread
    Your the type to lick the wet spot, after You've came in the bed

    nope

    Your works cut out for You, but I'm surprised that u can operate scissors
    Star beatin Mem's a rhetorical question..like Will a Nazi Say ••••••?

    played / poorly worded

    I know some real niggas in Miami.. u make it out the hood, look back
    You got beat with an ugly stick.. even the wood looks bad

    played


    really not too good of a verse from star



    I’ll Super Nova this bastard; oust the hot gases out through his asshole
    And after being e-peened by Scene in V-three … discover the next black hole

    ..bad opener

    This fag has his own colorful constellation … and it’s got him Horny
    You can find him right under Orion’s belt and above where Taurus’ Horn be

    ...nope

    Now they warned me, that Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorning
    But I was just scorching to see what it was that Star Jones was torching

    ok play on his name, but the star jones thing has been done before

    I just didn’t figure this bitch would be posting up pictures of his amores
    I should bitch slap you with the very Spanish-English Dictionary that you’re whoring

    nope

    You may be beyond my world, but in retrospect, I’m beyond yours as well
    Writing vs. Reciting ... I’d have to be Grade-A in the former to be in the LADDER to dwell

    weak

    ‘Cuz my only way is up; I done conquered your planet
    So I got a rhetorical question for you ******. Who do you think has the advantage?

    nope

    Star Screen is too weak for this meteor shower ... he'll get breached
    I’ll leave you like Velocirapper ... EXTINCT; deep at under 20,000 leagues

    what?

    So take ya one-piece with ya, ‘cuz you’re off to Bikini Bottom
    They got Sponges as douches even your Octapussy wouldn’t James Bond ‘em
    Maybe that’ll clean up your act ...

    forced wordplay

    ‘Cuz you’ve got cannon fodder for lyrics … dismembered pieces at best
    Frankenstein couldn’t resurrect a punch for you to connect ...
    Silly soliloquist, save yourself by saving your breath
    You speak, but no one could give a fuck ... so keep THEM away from the rest (of us)

    weak closing sequence


    i didnt like one line from memorie...overall just a bad drop


    im not too big of a fan of memories work, but ive seen star screen drop waaaay better than this

    iono...kind of a disapponting battle


    Vote ~ StarScreen
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  19. xEPITOMEx

    xEPITOMEx The Golden Rule

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    I liked StarScreen's style, and the opener was fire, but the following punches weren't as hard hitting. Still, a fairly solid verse overall.

    I didn't really feel Memorie's verse much. Need to reduce the number of syllables in each line, StarScreen obviously had a much better flow here. Felt that most lines weren't very hard hitting though I did really like this line:

    "I should bitch slap you with the very Spanish-English Dictionary that you’re whoring"

    Still, star took this
    Vote = StarScreen

    "You could travel the world comfortably, any time of day
    Wherever Mem goes.. he'll Phil at home, cuz thats the guy that he dates" - line of the battle, lol!
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  20. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    Mem, the taurus horn line was nice, but the others weren't really that good, but i'm sure you'll elevate your skills in the weeks to come. Star, i thought the verse was pretty solid, had some nice lines and your style and delivery is unique, i like the knockout kings line and the second half of your verse was consistant. vote - starscreen
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