9. Shadows Edge (17-5) vs. 10. Frame (13-3)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  2. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    16?

    Lets pic battle
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  3. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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  5. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    this kids weak, one punch nearly leave this whore dead
    and barely crawling, like those two slugs on your forehead
    facing this wack bitch, im bound ta wreck
    and run away with this, like that shit goin down ya neck
    aint hit puberty, so ya reps taking damage
    so he tried to photoshop in a goatee, but couldn't quite manage
    best be stopping ya drops.. frame a winner? please
    this bitch sees the second coming, like religious ephipanies
    i aint jokin, im known to leave legs missing
    like when you tried to snort a line, and took half the table with it
    and that's still far from worst
    shit, your second nostrils about five times bigger than the first
    got no nice audio verses, kids recordings wont show
    cuz the governments killing free speech, now he can't afford it no more

    blah @ some quick shit, im out with friends, peace.
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  6. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    look at this nerd, tryin to act like he gets some love
    be serious, nig.ga bout to go hang out at a harry potter book club
    i cant belive this kid raps, its realllllly fuckin saddenin
    shouldn`t you be out some where playin magic the gahtering?
    so watch me jab and stab em with ravenous blows
    and leave his chances of winnin thiner than his fuckin nose
    lets stay on that subject, it looks like its been hit a ton bitch
    cuz its bridge of its so long you could land a 747 on it
    lets keep proceedin, dudes looks like he`s takin a beatin
    his fuckin chin slopes so much it could be used for downhill skiing
    and when i first saw ya pic, i was like - why try?
    so i decided to keep it lazy just like ya fuckin left eye
    dudes scared of light, but imma blast hoes
    and since you`re so fuckin pale, i see why you`re named shadows




    BLAH. not a good week
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    upping.
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  9. Kon Quest

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    Shadows Edge

    this kids weak, one punch nearly leave this whore dead
    and barely crawling, like those two slugs on your forehead
    Ehh....not bad. Didn't seem to hit too hard to me

    facing this wack bitch, im bound ta wreck
    and run away with this, like that shit goin down ya neck
    Once again, it was alright, but didn't seem to hit too hard

    aint hit puberty, so ya reps taking damage
    so he tried to photoshop in a goatee, but couldn't quite manage
    This was a little better....

    best be stopping ya drops.. frame a winner? please
    this bitch sees the second coming, like religious ephipanies
    I liked the wordplay in this one...

    i aint jokin, im known to leave legs missing
    like when you tried to snort a line, and took half the table with it
    This one was pretty nice too...

    and that's still far from worst
    shit, your second nostrils about five times bigger than the first
    Ehh.....could have been worded better

    got no nice audio verses, kids recordings wont show
    cuz the governments killing free speech, now he can't afford it no more
    Not really.....


    Frame

    look at this nerd, tryin to act like he gets some love
    be serious, nig.ga bout to go hang out at a harry potter book club
    Ehh.....not really feeling this one

    i cant belive this kid raps, its realllllly fuckin saddenin
    shouldn`t you be out some where playin magic the gahtering?
    Once again....I wasn't really feeling it too much

    so watch me jab and stab em with ravenous blows
    and leave his chances of winnin thiner than his fuckin nose
    A little better, but not by much....

    lets stay on that subject, it looks like its been hit a ton bitch
    cuz its bridge of its so long you could land a 747 on it
    Here we go.....a decent punch

    lets keep proceedin, dudes looks like he`s takin a beatin
    his fuckin chin slopes so much it could be used for downhill skiing
    Ehhh.....maybe if it was worded better

    and when i first saw ya pic, i was like - why try?
    so i decided to keep it lazy just like ya fuckin left eye
    Ok....barely

    dudes scared of light, but imma blast hoes
    and since you`re so fuckin pale, i see why you`re named shadows
    Ehh.....thought you might have come a little harder for the closer

    Overall, I think Shadow took this with wittier punches. Frame wasn't really getting anywhere with most of his punches, while Shadow had a couple nice ones....anyway...

    Vote - shadows edge
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  10. Reflexx

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    shadows edge -- this kids weak, one punch nearly leave this whore dead
    and barely crawling, like those two slugs on your forehead

    lol, didnt hit too hard..

    facing this wack bitch, im bound ta wreck
    and run away with this, like that shit goin down ya neck

    okay.

    aint hit puberty, so ya reps taking damage
    so he tried to photoshop in a goatee, but couldn't quite manage

    lmao nice.

    best be stopping ya drops.. frame a winner? please
    this bitch sees the second coming, like religious ephipanies

    nice

    i aint jokin, im known to leave legs missing
    like when you tried to snort a line, and took half the table with it

    LMAO nice

    and that's still far from worst
    shit, your second nostrils about five times bigger than the first

    LMAO nice..

    got no nice audio verses, kids recordings wont show
    cuz the governments killing free speech, now he can't afford it no more

    lol pretty nice closer..

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    Frame --

    look at this nerd, tryin to act like he gets some love
    be serious, nig.ga bout to go hang out at a harry potter book club

    pretty good..

    i cant belive this kid raps, its realllllly fuckin saddenin
    shouldn`t you be out some where playin magic the gahtering?

    bleh it was ok not too hard hitting

    so watch me jab and stab em with ravenous blows
    and leave his chances of winnin thiner than his fuckin nose

    bleh..falling off a bit

    lets stay on that subject, it looks like its been hit a ton bitch
    cuz its bridge of its so long you could land a 747 on it

    didnt synthesis drop a bridge-nose line? pretty played..

    lets keep proceedin, dudes looks like he`s takin a beatin
    his fuckin chin slopes so much it could be used for downhill skiing

    pretty good..

    and when i first saw ya pic, i was like - why try?
    so i decided to keep it lazy just like ya fuckin left eye

    lmao nice

    dudes scared of light, but imma blast hoes
    and since you`re so fuckin pale, i see why you`re named shadows

    pretty good closer..


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    shadow came with more wittier punches and was a bit more consistent..frame came with some pretty played lines here and there but was pretty good..shadow took it though..

    Vote -- Shadow
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  11. Self-Expression

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    i aint jokin, im known to leave legs missing
    like when you tried to snort a line, and took half the table with it
    and that's still far from worst
    shit, your second nostrils about five times bigger than the first
    got no nice audio verses, kids recordings wont show
    cuz the governments killing free speech, now he can't afford it no more
    lmao, that was just evil

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    lets stay on that subject, it looks like its been hit a ton bitch
    cuz its bridge of its so long you could land a 747 on it
    haha
    harry potter/magic cards lines was funny
    the rst was cool and went smooth, but..


    vote = shadow
    hit stronger, more serious, ummm
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  12. penacILLin

    penacILLin konichiwa

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    v/ shadow...he came stronger and more serious like 2oo5 said..harder hittin punches and came more personal, frame just came with shit he made up in his mind naw mean
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  13. Mr.Perfect

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    i aint jokin, im known to leave legs missing
    like when you tried to snort a line, and took half the table with it


    ive seen this line, or a line alot like it before...
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  14. Super.

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    shadows wins.
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