9. Serge 12-2 vs 10. Joseph Q Castro 14-2

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. serge

    serge Well-Known Member

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    30 it is
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  3. YUNG'hustle

    YUNG'hustle "Hustle Of Castro"

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    the fuck, no ... haha

    im going like 16 tops
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  4. serge

    serge Well-Known Member

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    the god said 30


    ''moooooooooooooooooo''- chelsea
    http://www.iownjoo.com/freeimghost/jqcastro/Cece copy.gif

    i saw the prom pictures n thought i'd seen a trend
    who'da thought enrapture would be datin netcee's again?
    its an assualt thing she did to you too
    when the senior prank was cow tippin, she threatened to sue
    wanna be black so bad, you'll never be african so stuff it, dude
    you KNOW youre tryin too hard when you feed a cow....n fuck it too
    i can tell her size, say if i scored good
    you'd say she's got 5 feet, looks more like 4 hooves
    she's a fuckin dog nígga, her beauty's minisculous
    ive heard of havin a leash for ya bitch but this is ridiculous
    http://www.iownjoo.com/freeimghost/jqcastro/4-joey copy.gif
    ^^that+ ya bitch doesn't make you a hero
    cause you aint 1 in a million when youre followed by 6 zero's
    they say you deliver, so nígga just tell me...
    ....why you aint brought home the bacon since yo momma met chelsea
    but when the great one's done, its quick so dont stress it dude...
    ...when i put my shoe in ya ass n then bring out the best in you
    i thought zoo's didnt let you keep pets
    i'll admit though...
    ya girl looks like a million bucks...couldn't fix all her birth defects
    to think, i thought you were one of gods seeds
    just the son of a bitch...that lets her children crossbreed

    ''WAHHHH, HE BATTLED MY GIRL N NOT ME''

    stop whinin ya scrawny bitch, shes fat as a motha
    so yall only make a perfect 10... by standin next to eachotha


    *after everyone votes for god n dissy's whining has proven useless*

    ''GOOD VERSE YO, PROPS, IT WAS PRETTY CLOSE''

    get the fuck off my dick, release my kids with soft cough
    or serge'll leave ya chest danglin, i took angelics bra's off
    asi que tu te callas cuando sergio se asoma
    serge'll kill in different tongues, like a cancer melanoma
    now play off my verse with a taco bell menu
    the fact'll remain that noone'll ever respect you
    or google mex jokes, it worked for dip n i lossed it
    dissy still says he's a text monster...as an excuse to be in the closet


    [insert pathetic bullshit that isnt lyrics here, this to counter exactly what dissy'll do]
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  5. V E R B

    V E R B Guest

    can i say MEOW?
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  6. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    manic flip catz line.....and u know it too
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  7. micshimmie

    micshimmie New Member

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    Tangible said that line, then Ariz flipped it.

    But it actually works better here than before cause of the pic.

    -Vago
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  8. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  9. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    "Just, open ya mouth & swallow my spear hoe..
    Dont think you 1 in a million, cuz you get followed by zeros.."
    - Tangible

    http://www.urban prowlers.net/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=7617

    way to be original, serge.


    your chelsea disses were ehh, kinda weak, maybe average
    I guess the impact wouldve been more if serge even had a bitch
    im washed up right, so im demandin' the truth
    so its no coincidence that when I fell off, I landed on you
    and son, how the fuck you slangin' threats
    when you the type to feel hard cause your using slang in text
    i'll bang your cheques, never an emcee, your pad'll work
    when you've never did anything outside of an online battle verse
    serge is a jealous wreck, not to mention he sucks
    all this hype over resin and arizcats and they aint mention you once
    with your mod powers gone, the RBL is off of your screen
    cause serge aint have balls since jeff took him off of the league
    you a failure homeboy, so dont boast with the lord
    lets cut one's losses, but for you i'd need to borrow lotus's sword

    "omni gets props for not usin a pic while the greasy hoes he battled founjd the desperate need to usem"
    - serge

    omni got props for no pic and you were stickin' with it
    .....until I read your verse this week and found two pictures in it
    dominican, mexican, cuban....no difference so i'll alter his lip
    castro? yeah I have a dirty name, but you follow the culture and shit
    my work is top, i'll merk your spot
    and congratulations! ... verb thinks your verse is hot (thumbs up)
    you biting ass motherfuckah, i'll blame the forum
    cause not only do I got Serge, but everybody that came before him
    flippin bars like whoa, so i'll bang the steel
    why would I diss your verse? I mean, I always thought Tang was ill
    I mean, I read the zero's line....it just didnt seem right
    ..that they would call it a 'flip' when that shit was a clean bite
    he can use other peoples lyrics, i'll still mangle this whore
    cause his rhymes dont ring a bell....they fuckin bang on the door
    repetitive fuck, seriously.....the same shit, im harder for a reason
    when you called my girl fat so many times I actually started to believe it
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  10. Incredible Hulk

    Incredible Hulk 360

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    im washed up right, so im demandin' the truth
    so its no coincidence that when I fell off, I landed on you
    ^^haha

    shit was tight when Nebulotic used it like 2 years ago
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  11. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    serge

    its an assualt thing she did to you too
    when the senior prank was cow tippin, she threatened to sue
    wanna be black so bad, you'll never be african so stuff it, dude
    you KNOW youre tryin too hard when you feed a cow....n fuck it too

    first line was cool...second line was funny

    ^^that+ ya bitch doesn't make you a hero
    cause you aint 1 in a million when youre followed by 6 zero's
    they say you deliver, so nígga just tell me...
    ....why you aint brought home the bacon since yo momma met chelsea

    nice section

    i thought zoo's didnt let you keep pets
    i'll admit though...
    ya girl looks like a million bucks...couldn't fix all her birth defects

    ok...

    stop whinin ya scrawny bitch, shes fat as a motha
    so yall only make a perfect 10... by standin next to eachotha

    nice flip

    get the fuck off my dick, release my kids with soft cough
    or serge'll leave ya chest danglin, i took angelics bra's off
    asi que tu te callas cuando sergio se asoma
    serge'll kill in different tongues, like a cancer melanoma

    first line was dope...second line was cool

    dissy

    your chelsea disses were ehh, kinda weak, maybe average
    I guess the impact wouldve been more if serge even had a bitch
    im washed up right, so im demandin' the truth
    so its no coincidence that when I fell off, I landed on you

    first line was decent...2nd line was funny

    serge is a jealous wreck, not to mention he sucks
    all this hype over resin and arizcats and they aint mention you once
    with your mod powers gone, the RBL is off of your screen
    cause serge aint have balls since jeff took him off of the league
    you a failure homeboy, so dont boast with the lord
    lets cut one's losses, but for you i'd need to borrow lotus's sword

    nice section

    omni got props for no pic and you were stickin' with it
    .....until I read your verse this week and found two pictures in it
    dominican, mexican, cuban....no difference so i'll alter his lip
    castro? yeah I have a dirty name, but you follow the culture and shit
    my work is top, i'll merk your spot
    and congratulations! ... verb thinks your verse is hot (thumbs up)

    cool section here

    flippin bars like whoa, so i'll bang the steel
    why would I diss your verse? I mean, I always thought Tang was ill

    cool

    he can use other peoples lyrics, i'll still mangle this whore
    cause his rhymes dont ring a bell....they fuckin bang on the door

    haha...dope

    hm...this was close...dissy had more quotes...but the quotes from serge were just a little better...very dope battle tho...props to both..

    vote-Sergay
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  12. Part II

    Part II The next best thing

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    I Called it bitches.. Battle of the week so far in my book, Serge killed that verse an' illuminated his true skill for all to see wit power punches like these:

    Serge
    i saw the prom pictures n thought i'd seen a trend
    who'da thought enrapture would be datin netcee's again?

    ^^After lookin' at the pic this line hit hard as hell.. I fell out lol

    wanna be black so bad, you'll never be african so stuff it, dude
    you KNOW youre tryin too hard when you feed a cow....n fuck it too
    i can tell her size, say if i scored good
    you'd say she's got 5 feet, looks more like 4 hooves

    ^^Such tasteless comedy on woman HAS to be good lol.. A Ill section by the kid

    but when the great one's done, its quick so dont stress it dude...
    ...when i put my shoe in ya ass n then bring out the best in you

    ^^Been flipped lots of times but still fit in here & hit Real nicely

    ''WAHHHH, HE BATTLED MY GIRL N NOT ME''
    stop whinin ya scrawny bitch, shes fat as a motha
    so yall only make a perfect 10... by standin next to eachotha

    ^^Niceness even tho i think I heard the joke before, yet he threw it in there & it came together wit the rest of the verses content, niceness

    Dishonour had no less skill to show after serge's onslaught:

    Joseph Q Castro
    your chelsea disses were ehh, kinda weak, maybe average
    I guess the impact wouldve been more if serge even had a bitch
    im washed up right, so im demandin' the truth
    so its no coincidence that when I fell off, I landed on you
    and son, how the fuck you slangin' threats
    when you the type to feel hard cause your using slang in text
    i'll bang your cheques, never an emcee, your pad'll work
    when you've never did anything outside of an online battle verse

    ^^^came out swingin', lovin' it


    "omni gets props for not usin a pic while the greasy hoes he battled founjd the desperate need to usem"
    - serge

    omni got props for no pic and you were stickin' with it
    .....until I read your verse this week and found two pictures in it
    dominican, mexican, cuban....no difference so i'll alter his lip
    castro? yeah I have a dirty name, but you follow the culture and shit

    ^^ this shit was bangin' wit the personals I really went "Oh shit" here at work lol

    flippin bars like whoa, so i'll bang the steel
    why would I diss your verse? I mean, I always thought Tang was ill
    I mean, I read the zero's line....it just didnt seem right
    ..that they would call it a 'flip' when that shit was a clean bite

    ^^^Ouch, took alot of points from serge's verse wit this line, reminds me of the eyedill days rofl

    repetitive fuck, seriously.....the same shit, im harder for a reason
    when you called my girl fat so many times I actually started to believe it

    ^^^Nice closer way to turn his weapon against him

    Damn damn yall beat eachother bloody here cause BOTH verses were fire, BOTH Kill the Flow & both threw punches aimed to knock the other out.. yet there can be only one to walk out wit the win. I wanted to quote that million/zeros line from serge cause that shit banged out when I first read it.. but damn @ that link.. that & the fact that serge stayed on dissy's girl throughout so much of the verse(Tho some of them shits WERE funny) while Dishonour aimed for serges neck. I might have overlooked the girl thing but when paired wit the effectiveness of Castro's Tang/Clean bite lines the stonger verse was obvious.

    Vote=Dishonour

    Vote=Sticky this battle

    ILL FUCKIN' Ness doggy's, I didn't think serge was this nice but damn dunny prooved me wrong & only lost in terms of Directness of punches which is where dissy capitalized. All-round Hotness Never the less, Keep it bangin' Chea!
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  13. serge

    serge Well-Known Member

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    on top of that, id never calla never was a washup


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  14. LiL KeKe

    LiL KeKe New Member

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    vote = Serge

    this wasnt really close at all.

    Dishounour came ok...but nothing eye poppin


    even tho Nebulotic said the fallin/landing on you line in 2002. its okay...but dont do it again

    any who...

    vote = serge.
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  15. Synthesis

    Synthesis applied

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    i gotta go with serge too...

    i was feelin his verse a LOT more than DH's, and fell off line was played, the closer wasnt even good, if he got you to the point u believed it, he did his job...didnt much reverse his disses...anyway...serge came pretty nasty, liked the cow line..enrapture, cross breed..lmao...

    DH came iight..not a bad verse...but, dissapointing seeing as u posted second, seen what u had to beat...and just couldnt do it...

    props to both..

    vote = serge
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  16. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    fire in verses.... both had tight flow... solid punches and dope personals

    serge kept it personal all the way... got on his girl alot and the lines were funny, but it's being over done... everybody always talking bout his girl now... I think most of you niglets are jealous or something, but anyway... needed more material outside of that... still nice shit tho.. like all the aka names he has or something... but anyway

    Dizzy... decent comebacks and personals, flow was tight and punches mixed and switched it up

    Vote dizzy
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  17. Kanyne

    Kanyne 6x RBL Participant...lol

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    95/30= 3.2

    108/30=3.6

    v/ Castro Ill ass battle my nigs. I had Serge takin it when I came to the thread. Especially after readin his verse. I was pretty surprised at Castro's verse. Then I found it even until I broke it down. I really didn't expect Castro to come this hard, since I wasn't really fellin his shit last week. 1
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  18. Inky D

    Inky D MASH OUT WHITEBOYS

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    v - serge

    i don't think either one had too much good non-pic disses, but serge's pic disses were better than dh's.

    glad to see a good battle though . .shows signs of the ribble improving.
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  19. UserNizzle

    UserNizzle Im baaaaaack

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    vote/serge

    dis's counters were crap when it came to responses to what serge actuall said. he never called dis castro or washed up, he based his verse on dis' girl, and dis' counters for that were mediocre

    i mean if she reads your closer, she'd dump you on the spot.

    serge, that 1 in a million line sucked, rest was comedy

    ''i saw the prom pictures n thought i'd seen a trend
    who'da thought enrapture would be datin netcee's again?
    its an assualt thing she did to you too
    when the senior prank was cow tippin, she threatened to sue
    wanna be black so bad, you'll never be african so stuff it, dude
    you KNOW youre tryin too hard when you feed a cow....n fuck it too
    i can tell her size, say if i scored good
    you'd say she's got 5 feet, looks more like 4 hooves
    she's a fuckin dog nígga, her beauty's minisculous
    ive heard of havin a leash for ya bitch but this is ridiculous''

    ouch. i'd strangle you if you diss my girl like that, or atleast i'll use my 3 day headstart to actually beat you and not freepost, lmao!

    serge wins.
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  20. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    For the record - Dissy's girl is actually pretty hot..


    Anyways - the disses on serge's part were fuckin crazy.. LMAO @ The tongues line.. BEST line of the battle.. Dissy's verse wasnt bad.. That "cut ones losses" line I KNOW I've seen before.. The Castro line was hot.. Hot battle here overall, but I gotta go with serge on it.. It was straight COMEDY, he was clownin every aspect of Dissy.. Hot shit from both of you though..

    Vote = Serge
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