9. Phyrme 9-2 vs 10. Calefaction 4-0

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  1. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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  2. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry.

    rest was avg. a few simple lines

    vs

    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong

    rest was ok, a few corny lines & ehhhness


    v-calefaction, by a hair
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  3. GlassEye

    GlassEye New Member

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    Cal:

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..

    Phryme:

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.

    Cal had a smooth flow w/ some real witty lines, really no major drop off throughout the verse. solid and consistent.

    Phryme had his moments w/ some fresh lines but i thought his bad spots were worse than Cal's. I thought the wordplay was forced in some of his punches.

    Real good battle but....

    vote - Cal
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  4. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    cal:


    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..

    lol nice opener

    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..

    ok

    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..

    lmao

    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..

    lol

    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..

    nice

    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..

    lmmfao

    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..

    ok

    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..

    nah

    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..

    lmao

    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch..

    lmao nice closer

    overall: very nice verse..had a couple of lines i ain't liek but the rest were good



    Phryme:


    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.

    ok opener

    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.

    lol

    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.

    played

    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.

    nah

    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.

    ok

    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.

    nah

    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.

    to forced

    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.

    lol

    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.

    nah

    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.

    decent closer

    overall: this was an average verse..wordplay needs alot of work


    vote=cale
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  5. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..

    v

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.


    v-cale


    battle of the week
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  6. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Holy shit.
    10-10.
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  7. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    Calefaction
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    ^favorite line
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick.
    ^creative
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..
    ^nice

    vs.

    Phryme
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ^haha
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    ^giggle worthy
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    ^witty

    I think Calefaction had a couple more played concepts i.e. the 5-0 ect. but he really didn't match the punchlines thrown, I mean he definately had the creativity to take this battle, but in my opinion Phyrme just had more punchlines, a good battle two of the better heads in this league you can just tell from the perfect wording by both through-out.

    vote- Phryme.
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  8. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    I guess its a tie, since Calibres vote was discounted by Oneduh yesterday, even tho not posted.
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