9. Phyrme 9-2 vs 10. Calefaction 4-0

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    yea im here.
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  3. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    Not for long --

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..
    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch..
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  4. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    lets get it.

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.
    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.


    like that.
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  5. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    Cal...first off i think those little non rhyming reverse format punches are whack...i just had to get that out the way...newho...i liked the proactive line...that was hot...the bush line was hot...but actually theres no lottery in football...but i got what u meant...could have ben worded better...i also liked the 5-0 line...that was str8...


    *Reads other verse*


    Phryme...i liked the diary line...the nobodys bitch line was funny...set up line was cool...desktop line was str8...breezy line was nice...but the setup was ass annd most people dont know what breezys are and wont get that line but...the solid line was funny...


    Vote=Phryme...for a most consistant verse...and more quotable punches...
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  6. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    Cal
    sick and dope

    LOL @ the first line, ahahah @ the last one.

    Phryme
    Vote = Tie, most def...a real hot battle, I can't decide on a winner...a little too close to call.

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  7. -Oz-

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  8. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    LMAO @ this battle

    some fuckin' shiiiiiiiiiiiit in this one

    seriously

    i was ROFLZ for a little while, then i was like daaaaaaaamn, then i went back to ROFLZ'ing

    phryme got edged tho, the french phry line was the line of the battle to me, second up was the Celeron line from phryme, both of those shits were insane but i was feeling the french phry line a little more

    not only that, i only disliked one of cal's lines....that was the bruins one... ionno, i got tired of NCAA punches really...while i didnt like 2 or 3 of phrymes, making it CLOSE, but not so close that i couldn't call a winner

    phryme impressed me tho, i hadnt really read much from him since i signed back in, but now im definately gonna start peepin week in and week out...cuz when he was on, muhfucka was ON lol...celeron line is still dope, and it took me like 20 minutes to vote on this and im still laughing

    but yea, consistancy always plays a factor in close matches, and this was as close as they come...therefore

    vote - Calefaction

    dope ass battle tho, sucks one of yall had to lose
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  9. |-paragon-|

    |-paragon-| The Phoenix

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    Good Battle!!

    Cal:

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..

    Okay opener.

    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..

    Good.

    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..

    This was okay.

    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..

    Lmao!!

    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..

    Nice as hell!

    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..

    I new it was too good to be true. I'll all this a throwback punch. Played then a bitch!

    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..

    Lmao!!

    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..

    Cool.

    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..

    Cool.

    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch

    I hate that fucking style, it takes the power away from a good punch. I know your trying to be clever with style, but don't chose style over a straight punch.

    Prhyme:

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.

    Ehh, it was okay.

    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.

    Good flip on an old concept.

    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.

    Lmao!!

    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.

    Lol.

    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.

    Lmfao!!! So true.

    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.

    Lmao!!

    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.

    Lmao!!

    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.

    God dammit! Yall always fucking up a good streak with played shit! Fucking bitches!!

    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.

    Get back on the horse dammit! Not feeling it.

    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.

    Ehh.. it was okay.


    I must say, this was some good shit. Yall both had me laughing. Most of your concepts were fresh and hard hitting with creativity and good wording. But the only thing that really stood out here was "consitancy". You both had a good verses but.. Cal got at Phryme in little spirts, where Phrymes got at Cal in a sections.

    Cal's Little spirts is < Phryme's sections.

    Vote=Phryme

    Good showing by both.
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  10. Junya

    Junya New Member

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    the miscarriage line had me rollin...not real clever but gully as fuck...solid verse but not off tha chains


    hear to u spine line was niiiiiiiiiiiice...from start to finish a great verse, EXCEPT for the bread makin line which was horrible

    vote - phryme...just plain harder hittin
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  11. Kryptikal

    Kryptikal Soulstice.

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    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..
    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch..

    7 quotables... niec verse

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    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.

    7 quotes again

    v- phryme.... mnre consitency
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  12. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    LOL
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    GOOD
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    NAH DIDNT DIG
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    GOOD
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    DECENT GOOD WORDPLAY
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    NAH
    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..
    NAH
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    SELF GLOFIFY IS NO DISS
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..
    NAH
    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch
    MEHHHHH OKAY GOOD

    THIS WAS HIT OR MISS FOR YOU CAL, GOOD SHIT IN THE BEGINNING
    FELL OFF IN THE MIDDLE PICKED UP. STILL WAS A GOOD VERSE

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    DECENT
    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.
    OKAY
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    LOL GOOD ONE
    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.
    DECENT WORDPLAY
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    OKAY LINE
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    GOOD ONE HERE
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    LOL I FEEL THIS, SOME MIGHT NOT GET THE LINGO THOUGH
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    NAH NO THONG LINES
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.
    LIKING THE KNEAD WORDPLAY
    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.
    EHH NAH NOT REALLY

    OKAY PRYME I THINK YOU HAD A CONSISTENT VERSE, SOME EH STUFF IN THERE BUT
    I DIG THE WORDPLAY AS I DONT PEEP TOO MUCH OF IT IN THIS LEAGUE
    AND CAL YA VERSE WAS A LITTLE LESS CONSISTENT
    I GOTTA GO W/ PRYME
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  13. Brock Sampson

    Brock Sampson Shame on a nigga

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    Cal...

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    ^niice
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    ^cool
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    ^cool again...got confused on the wording but...Im smarter than that;)
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    ^eh...ok at best
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    ^lottery pick? ok
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    ^alright
    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..
    ^niice
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    ^alright...starting not to like record disses
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage.
    ^dope.
    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch..
    ^like the ol'skool sayin here "housed" but alrite here

    Phryme...

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    ^niice
    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.
    ^again
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    ^cool
    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.
    ^NIICE
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ^yup
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    ^alright
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    ^alright
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    ^cool
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.
    ^lol
    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.
    ^niice personal

    V/ Phryme

    Wicked battle...prolly be better than the CHAMP match here...nothing but solidness from both contenders. The punches from Phryme stood out more and connected harder than Cals..But I can't take nothin from either on this one. I don't think it was a tie but mos def close. Just P took it with more consistency and harder hittin spittin.

    VERY NIICE FELLAZ!
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  14. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    Hmm dope battle for sure.. but the first thing I noticed comin out of cals verse was the long ass lines phryme uses.. wich was to me an immediate turn off.. and thass too bad cause the lines were hot...

    both had a lot of hot lines so Ima quote what I didnt like...

    cal

    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..

    this is jus a bit too cliched for everyone who can go 5-0 I did em myself too many times... I understand its sorta ment as filler but I dunno the only thing I really disliked... a few lines like the bruin and replevel line didnt do much for me either but it wasnt ofputtin much...

    phry

    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.

    I get the wordplay but the impact thats suppose to go with it..? I dont see it..the fact that you write sell her on different doesnt add anything to it as far as Im concerned...Same as with cale this is what I didnt really didnt like.. there was more shit I had some thoughts about but nothing real bad...

    so what it comes down to me.. is what gave me a better feeling...
    and cale did as his verse as a whole jus made more sense to me.. the tone the flow the structure... the only department cale did come a bit less in then phryme was punchlines.. I think phry had more ill ones.. even tho cale had the line of the match

    anyways vote cale.. please return a vote on me vs krypt
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  15. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    cale

    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..

    phryme

    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.

    i got phryme winning, cale didnt look to into the battle alot of the concepts werent hard hittin. pro activ has been used alot. still pulled out 2 dope line. french phry is the line of the battle. phryme had a consistent verse though. dell shit was his best line. i coulda quoted like 6 from his verse. he got this battle.

    v/ phryme
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  16. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..

    vs.

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.

    Both had the same amount of punches that I liked, but I felt that Phyrme had some really weak ass concepts that didn't hit at all. Cale's worst punches at least had a minor effect. For example, that all ass like a bitch in a thong was corny/played. The exorcism line wasn't great at all. Had some real cheesy lines, which took away from the consistentcy that could've been present in your verse. Anyway, despite that I thought that this was a cool battle, but my vote goes to Calefaction.

    V/Calefaction
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  17. Philly The Kid

    Philly The Kid New Member

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    Wow, I thought this battle was real good, so much decent or nice shit in both verses. Because of that I had to do the opposite this time and quote the only lines I didn't like...

    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.

    vs

    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..


    Yea, Cale just had less bad lines.
    Phryme, still a good verse from you, thought that solid line jawn was especially hot... but the played concepts like "if I'm nobody, then..." line just killed you.
    Cale, real nice dog, liked the French phry and the Gators/Bruins lines best.
    Hot battle fellas.
    No hate.

    v/Cale
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  18. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    vote - Phryme

    he killed this shit, what I was reading Cales and first few lines i thought haha nice, then he seemed to fall off a bit iono, what was going through his head. I was really expecting Cale to come harder than he did. Im disapointed

    Phryme, Killed shit. Flames in nearly every bar, damn son you notched up a few levels since you've battled me, keep going on like this and youll be champ again in no time. Sick
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  19. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch..

    vs.

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.



    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.

    ^ that took stretched to a whole new level. Namix would be proud

    Well.. I must be reading a different battle than all the other voters.. Cuz to me Cale clearly took this. Not the best verse but pretty solid from top to bottom.. Phryme just came way too stretched for my liking.. Nobody, exorcism, dough, & breezy lines were just bad. Besides that, solid verse from Phryme. Loved the thong line.

    Vote- Calefagtion
    test
  20. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Cal:

    Cal do rhyme sick, shit, I was champ two times kid..
    When the RBL was outta wack..... then u signed in..
    alright
    Fat lazy fuck, all u do is sit in ur place..
    Get in some shape, I'm pro active, u need that shit for ur face..
    played
    This man'll get ruined -- u a true hater..
    So I got new Gators to stomp out any plans that ur Bruin..
    concept was coo', wording was a bit too short, but not bad
    When I spit I'm intense guy, ur clique don't impress mine..
    As for bitches?
    ...ur skins too greezy, no hoes wanna french phry..
    alright
    U dont play football, so just stop with these chicks..
    Pedophile, ur all over young bush like u got the lottery pick..
    niiice, havent seen this flip
    Prick, I'ma bust so many shots, when ur vest settles..
    & u wake up.. ur rank'll look somethin like ur rep level..
    nah
    Expect metal to hit u, step to me & get sonned fast..
    Yeah ur from Cal, but technicaly it was my nut sack..
    alright, pretty good
    I got a dick & u got a pussy if u peep anatomy..
    Plus I'ma be 5-0 so fast, u'd think I aced police academy..
    nahhh
    I got dough so I'm bling'd out, just quit starin..
    If u try & get bread, I hope ur girl has a miscarriage..
    haha
    Oh yeah..
    Oz says, Fuck ur spittin bitch -- Cal is peepin 'em out..
    Battle me & get housed -- worse than the other wicked witch
    alright, fresh

    Prhyme:

    its old school vs. new school..so i'm workin' to retire C
    1 punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like a personal diary.
    seen some spine/book flips, but i liked this one
    text legend? if thats the story of his life he aint had to grind hard
    true story C Murder raps..'n look how far he got rhyming behind bars.
    nah
    fuck what u heard Cale, u know my flows floodin' this shit
    so if u call me a nobody..it makes sense to say u nobodys bitch.
    nah
    it'll be sad when u lose and i competely wreck my victim
    this old timer'll be out re-demon the outcome like a failed exorcism.
    alright
    ur horrible pre-punch wording has got me fed up
    cause the punchlines are supposed to have the force, not ur setups.
    nice hit
    ur bitch is as cheap as ur lines with the way her breasts flop
    shit..chances are we could Celeron the internet like Dell Desktops.
    lol, havent seen that wp
    i pull breezys left 'n right while his game is forever rotten
    cause sleeping in the wind is the only breeze z's Cale's ever gotten.
    ehh
    u losing ur touch..and son u spittin' it wrong
    we only see one solid line and the rest is ass like a bitch in a thong.
    nah
    this bum is a freeloader that leaves my head shaking
    he kneadin' dough like the most important part of bread baking.
    nah
    bragging about his titles when this man aint felt
    ..writing concepts as old as the last time he fucking had the belt.
    ok not bad


    weird battle, two totally different styles. Cale's makes me laugh, but the punches don't hit as consitent with the way he words them. Phryme had some nice wording, some good lines, shoulda went more personal, both had played lines. thong/dough from phryme.. but cale had the fuckin 5-0 line lol... i dunno, i'm votin Phryme here.

    vote- phryme
    test
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