9. Papermate (4-0) vs 10. Komplexx (9-3)

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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  3. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  4. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Island was two heads, for all you know Paper is many more
    So I can see 1 wrong guess in ya verse, times twohundredtwentyfour...

    Word? What is there to say to that many wrong guesses?

    Here ..

    I gotta talk like this dumb Canadian, I'll call it out for you
    'See hoser you getting the L, eh?' - And I aint talkin about your crew
    You got no hope, with garbage text and foolish lines
    So fuck constructive criticism, you'd need bricks & architectural designs
    Heads was sayin Dissy is dope & I'll get booed in defeat
    But believe me, I know that your sick - of constantly losin each week
    I wont ask you to remind me cuz you a dumb ass and its true
    How ya expect to jog my memory when Username runs faster than you?
    And my bullets'll take a while to reach K
    Cuz if the good die young - they'll hit you by the time your Tekneeks age
    Get off Sean Carters dick, you aint hot when you spit
    I don't need the Black Album to tell you 99 Problems wrong with ya shit
    Fiends get served, and DH looks for dealers to see him
    This crackhead got more rocks in his system than archeology museums
    And ya audio, that career was killed hard kid
    Cuz everytime DH was on the mic, it was 'SOUND OFF!' like drill sergeants
    Ya girl & ya verse left you, honestly, Komp you a clown
    Hell, even your white flag is waving - tryin to tell you "See you around"


    .. I`m comin for you Rev
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  5. castro'DAMUS

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    wow, the first 10 lines in your verse were awful, yuck, oh and that intro was horribly done, let the truth be told...

    dear paper,
    if your invert, he's wack, garbage, worthless and a bum
    and if ur pentium, well to save time, refer to whats above
    his verse was honestly wack, so DH is droppin em' early
    i'd play off your verse, but my mother told me not to get dirty
    im crowned to win it, bitch the pound is in it
    i'll cry you a river.....just so I can fucking drown you in it
    people cant stand your verses, they laugh at old steez
    ...so people cut your lines shorter than classic storm-g
    ur bars are stretched, you cant contend, youll get slashed
    ur lines started here, and continued in the contendership match
    nothing to see here, really get up and move it along
    gotta suck ur only here cus aura, ink, aloe & user are gone
    dickriding hoe, if I ran to death he'd prolly follow me to it
    he's not just shit... he's piss, semen, snot, and any other bodily fluid
    your garbage, for thinking your hard, your dumb dude
    fuck wipping the floor,
    ill use you to give my windows and walls a scrub to
    nobody likes mate, im sommin you've never seen before
    when that chip on your shoulder's more like a convinience store
    & as for ur record, you'll forever be ranked the side show
    spittin like struggling security guards, you'll never make the 5-0

    consiiiistency people, consistency
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  6. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    dickriding hoe, if I ran to death he'd prolly follow me to it
    he's not just shit... he's piss, semen, snot, and any other bodily fluid


    I swear to god I saw that exact line last week.



    Oh, thanks Terry
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  7. Terry

    Terry Lost Cause

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    dissy used it last week

    and thx for the mention i think dissy
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  8. castro'DAMUS

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    oh shit lol, I didnt even realize I used that last week, honestly, I couldn't think of anything else so I threw that in that, I truthfully forgot I used it last week, ah well, its still my line...

    ready for votes, this is my up
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  9. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    vote- paper
    both came dope

    Just felt paper edged it

    dissy- some quotables, good flow, just felt you didnt want this as much

    paper- solid verse, opener was gay but the rest was nice
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  10. DYNASTY

    DYNASTY The Last Of The Best

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    Vote - Dissy

    Reason: Paper had a good solid verse..but some lines dropped a lil', Dissy said it all ..he had consistency. All the lines i was feelin..all around nice verse..
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  11. JACKET

    JACKET New Member

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    vote= komplexxx....

    came a little bit more rawer, had me reading more thoroughly too...
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  12. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Heres my last up.

    Can we get some voters who vote HONESTLY, for real though.
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  13. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    and here's my last up,

    how are you making the assumption that the votes so far haven't been HONEST?

    please just let the shit flow....

    2-1 up
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  14. Dat Gangsta

    Dat Gangsta •••••••••••••

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    And my bullets'll take a while to reach K
    Cuz if the good die young - they'll hit you by the time your Tekneeks age
    Get off Sean Carters dick, you aint hot when you spit
    I don't need the Black Album to tell you 99 Problems wrong with ya shit
    Fiends get served, and DH looks for dealers to see him
    This crackhead got more rocks in his system than archeology museums

    nice section by papermate, the best thing i liked about papermates verse actually was the intro, since DH fell right into it with his first 2 lines

    nobody likes mate, im sommin you've never seen before
    when that chip on your shoulder's more like a convinience store
    & as for ur record, you'll forever be ranked the side show
    spittin like struggling security guards, you'll never make the 5-0

    nice there by dissy too

    overall, i think papermate had some more impressive lines, and plus that intro worked well into how dissy did his verse, so

    vote - papermate
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  15. Forculus

    Forculus Registered Winner

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    Papermate`s good was....

    You got no hope, with garbage text and foolish lines
    So fuck constructive criticism, you'd need bricks & architectural designs

    Get off Sean Carters dick, you aint hot when you spit
    I don't need the Black Album to tell you 99 Problems wrong with ya shit
    Fiends get served, and DH looks for dealers to see him
    This crackhead got more rocks in his system than archeology museums

    I was feelin those lines. Pretty good verse.


    Komplexx`s good was....

    his verse was honestly wack, so DH is droppin em' early
    i'd play off your verse, but my mother told me not to get dirty

    dickriding hoe, if I ran to death he'd prolly follow me to it
    he's not just shit... he's piss, semen, snot, and any other bodily fluid

    those were the lines I liked. nice vese.


    v/ Komplexx
    he seemed more thought out/consistent. papermate was good. but, I just felt he didn`t bring enough to the table to take the win. both had good verses tho. props to both. holla.
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  16. Tri Optix

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    hmmm...I really dont see all this hype Paper has made for himself..shit was like...ehhh..Canadian jokes are played..

    "But believe me, I know that your sick - of constantly losin each week"

    that line was his best...other then that..not too much stood out..

    Kom had a decent verse...just like he said, consistency..

    "he's not just shit... he's piss, semen, snot, and any other bodily fluid"

    i dont know if he reused that, or if its played, I dont care really...that line was a burner, straight up and down..closer was nice..could have been re-worded a bit better...

    anyways..

    Paper came okay...ups and downs..seems like his image wanted to spit a verse instead of his skills...

    Kom, nice throughout..not too many flaws..nice style..

    So overall...vote=Komplexx
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  17. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    im voting for Paper

    i feel he took this battle...Dissy had a few lines that were straight...but he also had the one that he used last week in his battle which was not coo...i cant say canadian jokes are played cuz i never seen em used before...so they hit hard to me

    I gotta talk like this dumb Canadian, I'll call it out for you
    'See hoser you getting the L, eh?' - And I aint talkin about your crew
    You got no hope, with garbage text and foolish lines
    So fuck constructive criticism, you'd need bricks & architectural designs

    that was fire right there

    Vote-PaperMate for harder hitting lines and more creativity
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  18. Konfucius

    Konfucius Yah Boy Kon

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    Hmm, very close, very close.

    Kom came pretty nice, not really big on the whole using your line from last week though, even if you didnt mean too, but came with some nice stuff. I also so him use that drown in you in it line, which, Ill admit have used but its played to all hell. Sorry. Paper, came real nice too. Original concepts, a few twist off old ones, but all and all a nice verse. Paper in my eyes came a little more original, and stayed away from the played concepts more.

    Vote = Papermate.
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  19. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    vote = papermate..

    i felt like dissy has came alot better. good battle, dh was just outshined.
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  20. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Paper had the better verse of the two, Komp did a cry me a river/ drown u in it line...done plenty before, same with chip on shoulder still ok shit


    vote-Paper though
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