9. Name play. (3-1) vs. 10. CzarKastRophee (5-3) (Battle results in tie)

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    9. Name play. (3-1) vs. 10. CzarKastRophee (5-3)
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  2. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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  3. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    i WILL be showing.
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  4. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    24 nigga. There's my "agreement."




    This nigga’s sig ACTUALLY says:

    GIVING DEATH TO GODAWFUL RAPPERS



    Top 10? This kid’s far from elite, he hardly competes~
    His sig actually proves that you really ARE what you eat~
    Seriously, dog, your verse’s so stretched no flow could hold it~
    I showed your lines to Bizzy Bone…… his head exploded~
    Czar’s Winnie the Pooh steez, fat dumb and no hunnies~
    #10?!?
    Shit, if you didn’t sway votes last week, you’d be in the low 20’s~
    Bitch, the nigga Taylor’s facin THIS WEEK could defeat you~
    If you didn’t edit after he posted and flex rules, he would’ve beat you~
    Try that shit with me asshole,
    Ill do something to you out the mind of M dot Scorsese~
    See, my whiny little friend, youre what Italians call “Fugazi”~


    ........let that settle for a second. Taste it.




    Should I hold punches, or show'im some more, ‘n show'im the floor~
    If this was some MMA shit, he’d beg me to show'im the door~
    But this the RBL, ‘n he MIA, nah DOA, … ah fuck acronyms~
    It aint letters, it’s numbers F5VE and F4UR this punani’s got after ‘em~
    Does it hurt knowin your flash in the pan moment wasn’t even a flicker?~
    Voters:
    I’ll spill this man’s blood with 1000 words, that’ll paint his pain’s picture~
    Its mice ‘n men, chump… you chase cheese and I pursue cheddar~
    Sorry Cuz,
    I aint seen the words “C.K. won” since I rolled with bootleggers~
    Im headin’ straight for the top, this nigga’s set to run south~
    So take your little bitch-made mediocre record and GET-THE FUCK-OUT~
    I can’t remember the last person you legitly beat, remind me who~
    All the talk about the “Top 10”,
    ..pfft, its actually just the top 9 and... you.~
    Like to watch people become emotionally damaged? Stay tuned kids!~
    This shits so one sided, the voters thought they logged onto RAPeMUSIC~


    Who’s nice kid. Fall back.
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  5. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    name play?
    claims gay
    .. raps the same way.
    check ..



    Ur always bobblin penis. Ur watchin ur weight so u don’t swallow the semen
    When its hot & its steamin .. u like to jump on the treadmill & jog in between it.
    Give this novice a beatin, turn smiles upsidedown, so stop with the cheesin.,
    U aint knockin the sheets in, & ya girl hates u cause u have a popsicle penis.
    U so wack its obvious even u’ll throw up some crap & call it vomiting squeamish
    U jockin & even rockin & leanin so stop with the beefin, sorry .. u prolly a vegan.
    Enter ur thread .. ROFL & leave it, that crap that u’ve droppeds getten weakend
    I make it so u get beaten hard .. U just make it hard for u not to get beaten.
    U obstacle leaping with all ya line flippin, but while im rippin .. I flame queens.
    Ur name seems that ur going to fill ur verse up with a lot of the same thing
    Im aiming & ur brains lean to be dangling, u know the pistols loving to blast.
    U can get clubbed, bars taking shots & the coroner ell pick u up with the tab.
    Get stuck with a jab & uppercuttin ya ass, knockout ya dreams of being doper.
    Ur place in battle rap is right next to last, elevating .. still seeming mediocre.
    U broke .. & everyone on ya team is even broker ..
    Ur a type of poverty that needs just 50 cents to even need a hope for.
    Ur a broke bore that needs its correction, so u’ll get beat & dissected.
    This battle wont be a close call .. but I’ll be sure to leave u a message.
    U can get dents till ya stifled .. & if u wanna blast u can get hit with the rifle.
    Crucifying & intending to Christ u, Bullets Leave u holy right into the bible.
    I know women just like u .. using tampons, & pretend that they like to.
    Goin thru life wondering y washing machines won’t adjust to a menstrual cycle.
    stifle before i smack u so hard, u'll forego the filler & post some actual bars.
    .. the world just how bad of a rapper u are.
    act as u are.. a fucking bitch .. so the fact that ur a male is irrelevant.
    & this wigga's so white .. he'd even pale in comparison.

    die peasant .. dont flip birds .. try pheasant.
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  6. SACK RI PHICE

    SACK RI PHICE Mister Fister

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    Top 10? This kid’s far from elite, he hardly competes~
    His sig actually proves that you really ARE what you eat~

    naw

    Seriously, dog, your verse’s so stretched no flow could hold it~
    I showed your lines to Bizzy Bone…… his head exploded~

    ..no

    Czar’s Winnie the Pooh steez, fat dumb and no hunnies~
    #10?!?
    Shit, if you didn’t sway votes last week, you’d be in the low 20’s~

    lol

    Bitch, the nigga Taylor’s facin THIS WEEK could defeat you~
    If you didn’t edit after he posted and flex rules, he would’ve beat you~

    lol

    Try that shit with me asshole,
    Ill do something to you out the mind of M dot Scorsese~
    See, my whiny little friend, youre what Italians call “Fugazi”~

    nope

    Should I hold punches, or show'im some more, ‘n show'im the floor~
    If this was some MMA shit, he’d beg me to show'im the door~

    not feeling

    But this the RBL, ‘n he MIA, nah DOA, … ah fuck acronyms~
    It aint letters, it’s numbers F5VE and F4UR this punani’s got after ‘em~

    ...naw

    Does it hurt knowin your flash in the pan moment wasn’t even a flicker?~
    Voters:
    I’ll spill this man’s blood with 1000 words, that’ll paint his pain’s picture~

    meh

    Its mice ‘n men, chump… you chase cheese and I pursue cheddar~
    Sorry Cuz,
    I aint seen the words “C.K. won” since I rolled with bootleggers~

    nice

    Im headin’ straight for the top, this nigga’s set to run south~
    So take your little bitch-made mediocre record and GET-THE FUCK-OUT~

    kinda weak

    I can’t remember the last person you legitly beat, remind me who~
    All the talk about the “Top 10”,
    ..pfft, its actually just the top 9 and... you.~

    loool

    Like to watch people become emotionally damaged? Stay tuned kids!~
    This shits so one sided, the voters thought they logged onto RAPeMUSIC~

    plaaaaaayed

    wow....name play has come so much doper than this....ion' understand it







    Ur always bobblin penis. Ur watchin ur weight so u don’t swallow the semen
    When its hot & its steamin .. u like to jump on the treadmill & jog in between it.

    good flow, but lame punch

    Give this novice a beatin, turn smiles upsidedown, so stop with the cheesin.,
    U aint knockin the sheets in, & ya girl hates u cause u have a popsicle penis.

    naw

    U so wack its obvious even u’ll throw up some crap & call it vomiting squeamish
    U jockin & even rockin & leanin so stop with the beefin, sorry .. u prolly a vegan.

    meh

    Enter ur thread .. ROFL & leave it, that crap that u’ve droppeds getten weakend
    I make it so u get beaten hard .. U just make it hard for u not to get beaten.

    better

    U obstacle leaping with all ya line flippin, but while im rippin .. I flame queens.
    Ur name seems that ur going to fill ur verse up with a lot of the same thing

    dope

    Im aiming & ur brains lean to be dangling, u know the pistols loving to blast.
    U can get clubbed, bars taking shots & the coroner ell pick u up with the tab.

    dope

    Get stuck with a jab & uppercuttin ya ass, knockout ya dreams of being doper.
    Ur place in battle rap is right next to last, elevating .. still seeming mediocre.

    cool

    U broke .. & everyone on ya team is even broker ..
    Ur a type of poverty that needs just 50 cents to even need a hope for.

    naw

    Ur a broke bore that needs its correction, so u’ll get beat & dissected.
    This battle wont wont be a close call, but I’ll be sure to leave u a message.

    nice

    U can get dents till ya stifled .. & if u wanna blast u can get hit with the rifle.
    Crucifying & intending to Christ u, Bullets Leave u holy right into the bible.

    played

    I know women just like u .. using tampons, & pretend that they like to.
    Goin thru life wondering y washing machines won’t adjust to a menstrual cycle.

    lol

    stifle before i smack u so hard, u'll forego the filler & post some actual bars.
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by nameplay
    i WILL be showing.
    .. the world just how bad of a rapper u are.

    lame

    act as u are.. a fucking bitch .. so the fact that ur a male is irrelevant.
    & this wigga's so white .. he'd even pale in comparison.

    plaaaayed


    both kinda took the week off here man....name plays best lines were kinda meh and his bad lines were baaad

    czar def had some stinkers in his verse too, but the better lines he had were pretty dope

    so i vote for Czar


    pz yall
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  7. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    freeposting.
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  8. SACK RI PHICE

    SACK RI PHICE Mister Fister

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    freeposting.
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  9. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    freeposting.
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  10. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    Top 10? This kid’s far from elite, he hardly competes~
    His sig actually proves that you really ARE what you eat~
    Seriously, dog, your verse’s so stretched no flow could hold it~
    I showed your lines to Bizzy Bone…… his head exploded~


    this sums up the entire battle.

    i read both verses. honestly, ive never seen lines so stretched in my life.

    its like each line from Czar was a whole bar.

    Czar, seriously, stop forcing your rhymes man. u have an ill flow, but 75% of your rhymes are just forced and lacking substance or punch.
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  11. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    Damn, this was a depressingly even battle, I had to read it like three times or something. NP started well with a few nicely placed punches to the gut: the opener and follow-up were both pretty funny. But after those two lines it all goes down hill, the only line I was feeling was the 'bootleggers', a lackluster showing. On to Czar and his oddball wording again, most of your lines were way too long-winded, but I ws feeling a few, like the play you put on 'hard beaten', the opner was decent, I like you version of a 'nameplay' and theat 'bar-tab' line was probably your best. Sadly the most was weak and/or boring. Overall both could and have come harder before, but since I don't believe in ties I'd give that edge to Czar just cause I do dig his style, although it need some refinement, Vote - Czarkastrophee.
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  12. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    I can’t remember the last person you legitly beat, remind me who~
    All the talk about the “Top 10”,
    ..pfft, its actually just the top 9 and... you.~

    ^ Dope line from Nameplay.


    This battle was kind of weird, Czar's style can throw people off but he has alot of swagger, and Lol @ Czar using a different font to make his lines seem smaller. Nameplay had a couple good lines and he rest were close but didn't hit. In the end i think Czar was a little bit more consistant, both had some lines that seemed like filler but Czar's verse just seemed to be more effective. I could see this going either way though.

    Vote goes to Czar.
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  13. Stardumb

    Stardumb will BODY you

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    Czar’s Winnie the Pooh steez, fat dumb and no hunnies~
    #10?!?
    Shit, if you didn’t sway votes last week, you’d be in the low 20’s~
    Its mice ‘n men, chump… you chase cheese and I pursue cheddar~
    Sorry Cuz,
    I aint seen the words “C.K. won” since I rolled with bootleggers~

    those were ok, but were the only lines i liked from Name play




    Enter ur thread .. ROFL & leave it, that crap that u’ve droppeds getten weakend
    I make it so u get beaten hard .. U just make it hard for u not to get beaten.
    U obstacle leaping with all ya line flippin, but while im rippin .. I flame queens.
    Ur name seems that ur going to fill ur verse up with a lot of the same thing
    Im aiming & ur brains lean to be dangling, u know the pistols loving to blast.
    U can get clubbed, bars taking shots & the coroner ell pick u up with the tab.
    Ur a broke bore that needs its correction, so u’ll get beat & dissected.
    This battle wont wont be a close call, but I’ll be sure to leave u a message.

    Czar wasnt exactly the rebirth of text with his verse either, but he had enough to get the job done

    but sweet lord man you need to work on the length of those lines


    my vote goes to CzarKastRophee
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  14. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    i kinda dig Czar's flow, thats pretty much part of his style and it work's for him. alot of subtle disses that mix in well with his bar structure. NP opened up nicely, if he kept consistant this battle would be a little more harder to judge. two different styles here in a battle that could go either way depending on what you look for, but i think Czar edged it out overall. vote - CzarKastRophee.
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  15. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    Czar was definetely the better battler here. Name play started off rather nicely but lost any sort of momentum he had built up by about half way through his verse. not to get beaten, alot of the same thing and close call were all real dope from Czar. Name play's bright spot was the top 9 line....but nothing else was really quotable


    Vote Czar
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    Vote = Name Play
    I was feelin his verse more. He came out with some intensity and I was feelin it until the middle of his verse... where he fell off a little bit. However, I felt like this line summed the battle up:



    Seriously, dog, your verse’s so stretched no flow could hold it~
    I showed your lines to Bizzy Bone…… his head exploded~


    I really dislike Czar's style. I think his beginning was just as bad as Name's ending. His lines are very stretched to the point of exhaustion. It gives me a damn headache just reading it. I feel like alot of your lines are just multis on top of multis, which is dope when you drop an ill punchline, but the rest of it is just pointless if you can't make a decent punch out of it.

    However, some of your clever lines are like a breath of fresh air. For example "Leave you a Message" and "Pick up the Tab" were both dope but I don't think they made of for the rest of your verse.


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  17. Rated-Are

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    i wish u people would stop putting
    so much emphasis on shortness or length of lines.
    u really dont know how stupid u sound.
    alot of people way doper in text lines r the same length as mine.
    & if u read their verse seeing their
    username u drool on the keys & beat off.

    but i guess u rap just like everyone else huh? lol.
    whatever nigga.

    ya mama's a recovering drug addict.
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  18. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    good battle

    edit: stop bitching. you won.
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  19. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    NICE FREEPOSTING BITCHES.

    jesus. u people whine.




    well, voting right now is 6-1, cuz my vote dont count. i dont think.

    but since Czar wants to be a crybaby instead of doing what hes supposed to do (which is post links in the voting thread and VOTE ON BATTLES), i deduct one vote for every missing link.

    and since name play DID post his links, we got ourselves a tie. nicely done.
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