9. Living Proof 6-0 vs. 10. Regret. 5-0

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  1. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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  2. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    go 12

    word@you being starstudded
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  3. .Ess-Ess.

    .Ess-Ess. a lost cause

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    ima go 12 or 16.

    word @ being akademik.
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  4. .Ess-Ess.

    .Ess-Ess. a lost cause

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    so Proof..lets make a wager..

    if u win,im knocked down & u stay on the belts path
    but if i win..
    you hook me up with Eminems autograph
    .
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    kid,im fearless,& u dont have what it takes to win it
    so Regret'll drop an LP,without going over 60 minutes.
    obvious regret takes the votes, while no1's seen ya
    cuz Proofs percentage of votes..
    havnt got past a bottle of zima
    he's hyped up i heard...might even be the best,yo?
    but yea?...kid was off the chains...after i let go.
    ya still cant write..while women wont flock yer needs
    cuz the last move a girl made on u..
    involved some boxes & a set of keys
    yer name is truth,its a shame,yet i hope u prayed long
    cuz kid is Living Proof...of why textcees get hated on
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  5. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    i rather liked that moving line, however one line cant win a battle


    kudos




    You're not worth my time, for a win you'll needa be stealin dude
    & only when I think bout the lines i wasted ill be feelin you
    Underestimated? or plain bad...i really gotta go with the latter
    personals on you? well...i would
    but theyd just be a bunch of punches bout losin on sites that dont matter
    not a ladies man, to think you could smile at a bitch, please
    expose you with ease, kodak could prolly market the fuckin film on your teeth
    Stuck when battlin mines its simple, your flowin sucks
    Now your lines are stuck in limbo..
    But even that sport cant set the bar low enough
    summer break has gradeschoolers loggin on & postin, to me its worse
    so before even tossin a jab at me..hit puberty first



    gluck friend
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  6. LuMiNåRy -X-

    LuMiNåRy -X- hi

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    i liked the last four lines of your stuff regret, but that's it. the rest did not tickle my fancy. living proof, i liked your one line about personals.. but the flow was terrible, absolutely awful, heh. but still, i enjoyed it i suppose. the film on ur teeth line was ok, limbo line was decent.

    vote - living proof

    regret had you on flow, thats about it.
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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    lp line is played...zima wuz ehh...feelin u wuz ehh...limbo wuz ehh...pubery is played...


    vote=regret/star/wuteva

    1Ne
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  8. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    yea i got regret takin this 1 slightly
    i thought lp woulda came a lil harder
    flow was really forced and choppy
    and a few of his concepts werent appealing
    the last 4 lines of regrets verse were cool
    lp had a decent opener and thats all i felt
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  9. Serge dot T

    Serge dot T Guest

    i think proof got this

    shit was close, but that film on teeth line won it for me. regret, props on the LP, shit was gully
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  10. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    dont touch my shit
    i said he was on some bullshit
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  11. Junya

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    fellas!!!...glad to see some familiar names...especially Star!..


    <===Junya!

    won't vote cuz of connection to Star...but you guys both dropped killer verses...Limbo line and Move line we top notch...don't have AIM anymore and only have the net at work...so we'll have catch up later Star
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  12. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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    Truth got this..

    but theyd just be a bunch of punches bout losin on sites that dont matter
    not a ladies man, to think you could smile at a bitch, please
    expose you with ease, kodak could prolly market the fuckin film on your teeth
    Stuck when battlin mines its simple, your flowin sucks

    that was nice^. you both had a few played lines like the puberty line and the living proof why textcees...

    Proof just came better.

    V/Demik
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  13. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Regret
    verse was consistent, didnt like the eminem & zima lines rest was koo, last 6 were good

    Living Proof
    the bunch of punches bout losin on sites diss was good & film line was good too, but what followed that is what took away from ue verse

    vote-Regret
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  14. Razah Aiyo

    Razah Aiyo New Member

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    Regret's verse wasn't that good. Actually, it bored me.

    Demik's wasn't that great, but this was dope.

    not a ladies man, to think you could smile at a bitch, please
    expose you with ease, kodak could prolly market the fuckin film on your teeth


    You need'a shorten up your lines though

    vLivingProof
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  15. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    Demik:
    flow was fuckin offf man...you have to realize that though...still, the kodak line was strong...and the personals line was good...the wording could have been better, not even counting the excess of words...it was a back and forth verse...could have been better, definitely.

    Regret:
    the moving line was really dope, i thought...the LP line was nice too...the rest wasn't great...your flow was much better than Demik's...your wording was about even...the last line was pretty bad though.

    vote=Demik
    both only had 2 lines i was really feeling
    but his other punches were better
    Demik's flow wasn't as good, though
    however, Regret didn't capitalize on that, and only had an average flow
    i' guessing both can do better
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  16. *NativeTongue*

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    v - lp

    that kodak / teeth line was brutal

    star had a cool moving line


    star wasnt i supposed to battle you? maybe some day. pz.
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  17. Anchor.

    Anchor. Holdin' It Down

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    How is Living Proof getting any votes?

    Regret's verse was average to me. The LP line was nice, and the last four couplets were good as well. Average verse, Regret.

    LP's lines were way long and boring. The kodak line was all right, the rest wasn't too good. Bad verse in my opinion.


    Regret earns my vote due to consistancy and a better overall verse.

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  18. Another Demik

    Another Demik Go Blue Jays!!

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    Another Demik Go Blue Jays!!

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  20. Con God

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    vote Demik
    kid,im fearless,& u dont have what it takes to win it
    so Regret'll drop an LP,without going over 60 minutes.
    lol... coo
    obvious regret takes the votes, while no1's seen ya
    cuz Proofs percentage of votes..
    havnt got past a bottle of zima
    ehhh
    he's hyped up i heard...might even be the best,yo?
    but yea?...kid was off the chains...after i let go.
    no
    ya still cant write..while women wont flock yer needs
    cuz the last move a girl made on u..
    involved some boxes & a set of keys
    ehhh
    yer name is truth,its a shame,yet i hope u prayed long
    cuz kid is Living Proof...of why textcees get hated on
    ehhh

    You're not worth my time, for a win you'll needa be stealin dude
    & only when I think bout the lines i wasted ill be feelin you
    ehhh
    Underestimated? or plain bad...i really gotta go with the latter
    personals on you? well...i would
    but theyd just be a bunch of punches bout losin on sites that dont matter
    lmao
    not a ladies man, to think you could smile at a bitch, please
    expose you with ease, kodak could prolly market the fuckin film on your teeth
    that was fuckin flames
    Stuck when battlin mines its simple, your flowin sucks
    Now your lines are stuck in limbo..
    But even that sport cant set the bar low enough
    lmao... nice
    summer break has gradeschoolers loggin on & postin, to me its worse
    so before even tossin a jab at me..hit puberty first
    coo

    Vote = Demik

    he fuckin killed this... flim line is really what took it for me. wasnt really anything to apealing from Regret. coo match. you two stay up
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