9. John Hensley 11-2 vs. 10. Oneduh 2-0

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  1. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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  2. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    20 sounds good.
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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13278842#post13278842
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13283350#post13283350
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13283389#post13283389
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13283422#post13283422



    Shit aint word for word but you love my style son.


    No I take that back, You love Resin's style, & my concepts.




    I don’t deserve an Oz. of appreciation..
    ... but you should probably give him some for signing out.- Hensley

    You'll never get an oz. of respect, when not even oz respects you- Oneduh

    I came off the bench in sports...
    ..you do that whenever you wake up. -Hensley

    You been stayin on a bench longer than grant hill- Oneduh


    When your bank balance wouldn't pass a sobriety test.- Hensley

    You're lines are hard to follow,
    like the ones drunks walk for sobriety tests - Oneduh



    Watch me turn ya spinal Column into a fuckin fragmented sentence.-Hensley

    If you're the best,period.. I'm a sentence fragment- Silentt

    Audio heads too? I guess noone's safe


    Shit; even ya verses are considered freeposts...
    ...cuz ain't nobody buyin that shit.- Hensley

    Your verse was a frestyle? good cuz I'm not buyin it- Warbux



    You're just an Alias...
    ...that Jennifer Garner wouldn't even pretend to be.- Hensley

    It's really me, im not an alias like the chick in the daredevil flick- Ave



    Cuz my punches cause whiplash. .
    . . that could remind you of slavery.- Hensley

    The whip give you whiplash, takin it back to slavery- Fabolous



    Do I got a bone to pick? Hell nah…I’ll be snappin em’ all.- Hensley

    I don't have a line to quote but who the fuck hasn't used a bone to pick line?


    Kid ya Sway so much....you could replace him on MTV.- Hensley

    Same thing. Shit was too played to use back in 02'.. Now it's dope?

    Just a big coincidence right? I guess Serge got away with flipping, why shouldn't you.

    Lets go Pussy....
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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Some originality for ya.

    Comin to Rm with that ego, I'll bitchslap this faggots teeth
    I'd say go back to bboys..
    but they deleted it again just to prevent that from happening
    If your ideas are so fresh, & you're the hottest
    Why does it take you an extra half a line to word the garbage?
    11 wins gets you respect now? this shit has to stop kids
    I went 24-3 when John couldn't even crack the top 10
    You don't deserve my effort, look at this punks accomplishments
    Only time I need to concentrate on facin john is when im drunk & gotta piss
    But my aim's not a question, I tote that beam
    That'll put big holes in ya chest until ya shirt look like a snowman tee
    This losers still a virgin, he can't get a date
    Bitches only chase Hen if they can't drink it straight
    Without the riders.. you could never win a match, dude's garbage
    So he has to draw on others for support, like tattoo artists
    This biter used my concepts but I can't be compared to him
    You see I'm One.. & that's just where he ranks on a scale of ten
    We can take it to the streets, I'm stompin this clown
    My mood swings alone could lift you offa the ground
    He was scared to go the line limit, to me it seems fishy
    Maybe he knew it would just give the voters 10 more reasons to pick me

    & that's how a real legend does it kiddo.
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  5. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    wow, needed some help huh? lolol



    peep the quotes.. talk about irony


    Hypocrite. Ok, originality is why John is wack?
    I've battled here for years..
    .. and you don't think anybody's ever thought of that?
    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?
    Digggging for punches, i mean it just shows your gay.
    Thought you'd win this?.. but had to use a whole fucking post to sway.
    Forget the excuses: '' you'll win cuz your prone ta riders ''.
    Either way, i'll bring ya the NextEl like ya switched phone providers.
    Got the wack claims of flippin, but i'll be ignorin the damage.
    Read the convo: that's what i call ' yea, i had ta do somethin' for an advantage '.
    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.
    You ain't that dope, and i'll bring the tension back.
    Say ya wrote for Island..
    ... funny everyone else who did always forgets to mention that.
    Bitches don't hitcha cell, i'd even bet on it boy.
    No joke, you'd havea tough time gettin a call from a ref in Detroit.
    Wack since ya came back, i know watcha fear, coward.
    Ya either rusty, or ya Slack enough to bungee from the Sears Tower.
    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.

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  6. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    wow, needed some help huh? lolol






    peep the quotes.. talk about irony





    Forget the excuses: '' you'll win cuz your prone ta riders ''.
    Either way, i'll bring ya the NextEl like ya switched phone providers.

    illlll

    Got the wack claims of flippin, but i'll be ignorin the damage.
    Read the convo: that's what i call ' yea, i had ta do somethin' for an advantage '.

    hahaha

    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.

    hahahahahaha





    Wack since ya came back, i know watcha fear, coward.
    Ya either rusty, or ya Slack enough to bungee from the Sears Tower.

    lol

    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.


    flipped on dude NICELY, hahaha....lol @ oneduh shooting himself in the foot





    You don't deserve my effort, look at this punks accomplishments
    Only time I need to concentrate on facin john is when im drunk & gotta piss

    lol, nice and i'm there pretty much nightly


    This losers still a virgin, he can't get a date
    Bitches only chase Hen if they can't drink it straight

    DOPE FUCING LINE

    Without the riders.. you could never win a match, dude's garbage
    So he has to draw on others for support, like tattoo artists

    WHAT?! fuck you






    yall brought some shit this time.


    ima vote John Hensley, when you break a battle down, the idea is to CLOWN somebody, and he fuckin flipped oneduh's post like crazy into the biggest punchline in this thread. he also had the nextel line which was a good punchline

    HOWEVER< Oneduh had 2 dope punchlines, the draw on you for support line easily the best of the week and best in the last couple MONTHS easily....you've been saving that shit huh, lol


    however, not enough. hens straight murdered dude, but in a good way





    great read fella's[/HIDE]
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  7. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Lol yeah cuz playing off my shit through the entire verse was dope as fuck.

    I hope you die headless

    EDIT: Don't let me forget the L line.. Cuz god knows noone's ever had a Next L line

    BURN IN FUCKING HELL
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  8. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    i told it like i saw it man, shit i even HID The vote, cuz i know it could go either way and i didnt wanny give him a 5 vote head start by newbies just copying what i said


    what the fuck you want from me man? stop whining
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  9. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    ^Lmao, that's hot.
    How do I do it?

    Comin to Rm with that ego, I'll bitchslap this faggots teeth
    I'd say go back to bboys..
    but they deleted it again just to prevent that from happening
    But my aim's not a question, I tote that beam
    That'll put big holes in ya chest until ya shirt look like a snowman tee

    ^Nice lines from Oneduh,
    some of the other shit was just too basic.
    Mood swings line was cool but I seen variations.

    Btw, umm... the check in thing didn't really do much for me.
    Cuz the Oz. line was the only close TEXT one...
    and that's one of the most played lines with a persons name in it.
    Some weren't even close at all.
    Lmao

    Watch me turn ya spinal Column into a fuckin fragmented sentence.-Hensley

    If you're the best,period.. I'm a sentence fragment- Silentt

    Yea, not similar...at all.
    Lol.


    Anyway, not a great verse.
    I guess you were planning on winning off the check in.
    but none of those were too close to bitten.
    And they didn't really seemed flipped for the most part.
    So yea, decent I guess.



    John..
    with some of the beggining shit I thought you were gonna lose.

    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?

    ^Only decent line up to the quote.
    I did like that one though...

    Got the wack claims of flippin, but i'll be ignorin the damage.
    Read the convo: that's what i call ' yea, i had ta do somethin' for an advantage '.
    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.
    You ain't that dope, and i'll bring the tension back.
    Say ya wrote for Island..
    ... funny everyone else who did always forgets to mention that.
    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.

    ^LMFAO.
    Killed the evidence yo.
    Damn, some hot ass shit.
    The funny thing is it seemed like the only personal shit Hensley had...
    came from Oneduh's check in.
    HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA

    Anyway, I thought it wasn't too close.

    V/Hensley
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  10. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    post so i can see headless vote
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  11. The Gawdfather

    The Gawdfather Bow Down

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    vote = Oneduh

    I was feelin' his whole verse. Hensley had a pretty cool verse too, but his punches just weren't effective the way he was feedin' off Oneduh's verse the whole time. Maybe it's just me, i dunno; but i seen Oneduh takin' this pretty easy. Props to both though.

    chea
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  12. Spit That

    Spit That aka ST

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    i wanna know why his vote is hidden anyway
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  13. Banned Name

    Banned Name Rebel From The Waist Down

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    Comin to Rm with that ego, I'll bitchslap this faggots teeth
    I'd say go back to bboys..
    but they deleted it again just to prevent that from happening
    If your ideas are so fresh, & you're the hottest
    Why does it take you an extra half a line to word the garbage?
    11 wins gets you respect now? this shit has to stop kids
    I went 24-3 when John couldn't even crack the top 10
    This biter used my concepts but I can't be compared to him
    You see I'm One.. & that's just where he ranks on a scale of ten
    We can take it to the streets, I'm stompin this clown
    My mood swings alone could lift you offa the ground

    v

    Hypocrite. Ok, originality is why John is wack?
    I've battled here for years..
    .. and you don't think anybody's ever thought of that?
    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?
    Digggging for punches, i mean it just shows your gay.
    Thought you'd win this?.. but had to use a whole fucking post to sway.
    You ain't that dope, and i'll bring the tension back.
    Say ya wrote for Island..
    ... funny everyone else who did always forgets to mention that.
    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.


    this was easily the battle of the week, both dudes came with FLAAAAMES


    i think one's opening 6 or 8 lines won it for him, but hens island line was the line of the battle

    V- Oneduh
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  14. Meta Syn

    Meta Syn New Member

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    this was clearly the best fucking battle of the week most def. Beef battles are the best no matter where and im truely beggining to love this league lolz.

    Anyways Oneduh did pull a mega bitch move, the only close punches were the whiplash and maybe the Oz if it wasnt so godamn played.

    but back to the verses.

    Lots and Lots of good punches, If i had to quote good punches i'd say One had
    the opener, the 3 line style garbage, the snowman tee, and definately the scale of one to ten that was hot also that nice ass tattoo artist

    Hens had
    the swaying punch <- ouch , the island punch < - tight, the saving my lines was hilarious, and the slack one was fucking dope and a really nice closer.

    Definately battle of the week no bullshit. And this is a battle the league needed. As for my vote, shit was extremely close I had to read it a few times before I was sure of it. Oneduh had several quoatables as did Hens. But Hens's punches were a lot harder. This shit was definately nice tho. Props to both, lovin it.

    v/Hens
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  15. Dom P

    Dom P Get Crunk!

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    v/ hensley and headless verse is a fake vet.
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  16. Exon

    Exon That brand new shit

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    Damn, nice battle. Better than the champ match lol
    Ok, lemme break it down.

    Oneduh

    Comin to Rm with that ego, I'll bitchslap this faggots teeth
    I'd say go back to bboys..
    but they deleted it again just to prevent that from happening
    Ok

    If your ideas are so fresh, & you're the hottest
    Why does it take you an extra half a line to word the garbage?
    Lol

    11 wins gets you respect now? this shit has to stop kids
    I went 24-3 when John couldn't even crack the top 10
    Woord.

    You don't deserve my effort, look at this punks accomplishments
    Only time I need to concentrate on facin john is when im drunk & gotta piss
    Lmao
    But my aim's not a question, I tote that beam
    That'll put big holes in ya chest until ya shirt look like a snowman tee
    Ok, not too good

    This losers still a virgin, he can't get a date
    Bitches only chase Hen if they can't drink it straight
    ok line here

    Without the riders.. you could never win a match, dude's garbage
    So he has to draw on others for support, like tattoo artists
    This shit was firre, line of the match 4 sho

    This biter used my concepts but I can't be compared to him
    You see I'm One.. & that's just where he ranks on a scale of ten
    ok, kinda bland

    We can take it to the streets, I'm stompin this clown
    My mood swings alone could lift you offa the ground
    Done alot, kinda played

    He was scared to go the line limit, to me it seems fishy
    Maybe he knew it would just give the voters 10 more reasons to pick me
    Nice closer

    Over: Nice ass verse one, the beggining was dope, especially the tatoo artist line.
    Toward the end you started to loose firepower but it was still nice overall

    John H.

    Hypocrite. Ok, originality is why John is wack?
    I've battled here for years..
    .. and you don't think anybody's ever thought of that?
    Lol, good opener

    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?
    Yep, good shit

    Digggging for punches, i mean it just shows your gay.
    Thought you'd win this?.. but had to use a whole fucking post to sway.
    lol, true.

    Forget the excuses: '' you'll win cuz your prone ta riders ''.
    Either way, i'll bring ya the NextEl like ya switched phone providers.
    Nah, played shit here.

    Got the wack claims of flippin, but i'll be ignorin the damage.
    Read the convo: that's what i call ' yea, i had ta do somethin' for an advantage '.
    woord, decent

    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.
    ok line
    You ain't that dope, and i'll bring the tension back.
    Say ya wrote for Island..
    ... funny everyone else who did always forgets to mention that.
    LMAO, wrd.

    Bitches don't hitcha cell, i'd even bet on it boy.
    No joke, you'd havea tough time gettin a call from a ref in Detroit.
    Nice line here

    Wack since ya came back, i know watcha fear, coward.
    Ya either rusty, or ya Slack enough to bungee from the Sears Tower.
    lol, ok

    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.
    Nice closer


    Overall:Dope verse here too, kinda hard to decide because yall went neck & neck.
    Your verse was just as strong as One's though. Good shit on both ends

    I would say tie, but who likes those?..ima say V.Oneduh, nice verse bro. Flow was there, punches were there, and personals. John, you still were just as consistant, it came down to the best lines of the match, & ima give it to one.

    yeah, good shit fella's.

    out
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  17. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    oneduh -
    "But my aim's not a question, I tote that beam
    That'll put big holes in ya chest until ya shirt look like a snowman tee"
    good
    "We can take it to the streets, I'm stompin this clown
    My mood swings alone could lift you offa the ground"
    pretty cool

    I felt like alot of your verse wasn't that creative, it was you talking about how he flips lines and how he isn't as good as you. then you went and flipped the hens and the john/toilet line, that was wack imo. Ive seen good battls from you and I think you are capable of doing damage, I just wasn't feelin too much from this especially with the EXTREME swaying, if you are so much beter than him, you should have beat him straight up with punches adn creativity.

    Hensley
    "Hypocrite. Ok, originality is why John is wack?
    I've battled here for years..
    .. and you don't think anybody's ever thought of that?
    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?
    Digggging for punches, i mean it just shows your gay.
    Thought you'd win this?.. but had to use a whole fucking post to sway."
    this was all cool, not hard hitting but you explain the reason that you won this battle. It's very true.
    I don't really need to quote anymore, the rest of the versewas cool, the nextL was decent, I haven't heard it, and you pretty much just reversed his whole verse on him, which is what battling is all about. I found it a bit dull at times that you had to explain yourself the whole verse, but in my opinion it worked. Simple and to the point verse.

    This battle would have been 10X better if One didn't pull that swaying shit, it just turned it into an explanation battle, and with that said, Hensley had the better verse.

    Vote - Hensley[/HIDE]
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  18. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    this is so hard to vote on, u both came sick



    awwwwwwwww

    VOTE - hensley

    Because of the way he flipped it back on Oneduh, I had to read this like 5 times to get who was better cos there were even all the way through but, I say hens by the skin mof his teeth i was feeling his flow a little more..
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  19. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    this was a good battle...

    Vote-John Hensley

    this wasn't that close to me, but it was close, both had some good, ok and some bad lines, but Hensley had less bad lines, and a more stronger verse....Oneduh verse was good but better than John Hensley's verse.

    Fav. Line
    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.
    ^^this personal was nice
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  20. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Oneduh

    John Hensley:

    Hypocrite. Ok, originality is why John is wack?
    I've battled here for years..
    .. and you don't think anybody's ever thought of that?
    Okay opener.
    Honestly, verse vs. verse i don't think this dude's contending.
    Ya call me unoriginal, then use the 2 nameplays EVERYONE'S used against me?
    Nice.
    Digggging for punches, i mean it just shows your gay.
    Thought you'd win this?.. but had to use a whole fucking post to sway.
    Yah. Personal.
    Forget the excuses: '' you'll win cuz your prone ta riders ''.
    Either way, i'll bring ya the NextEl like ya switched phone providers.
    This is cool.
    Got the wack claims of flippin, but i'll be ignorin the damage.
    Read the convo: that's what i call ' yea, i had ta do somethin' for an advantage '.
    I see.
    That shit exposed YOU: act like ya can hide ya fears.
    haha.. ya know.. all it did was show you've been savin my lines for years.
    This is boring.
    You ain't that dope, and i'll bring the tension back.
    Say ya wrote for Island..
    ... funny everyone else who did always forgets to mention that.
    Hmm.
    Bitches don't hitcha cell, i'd even bet on it boy.
    No joke, you'd havea tough time gettin a call from a ref in Detroit.
    2nd time I've seen something like this, besides myself.
    Wack since ya came back, i know watcha fear, coward.
    Ya either rusty, or ya Slack enough to bungee from the Sears Tower.
    Nice.
    Bitchmoves galore, i won't even pretend this herbs dope.
    Can tell ya fell off, cuz all your dope lines were in the FIRST post.
    Ha.

    Let's see, your verse was pretty nice. There was a lot of stuff you were doing that I liked. For instance, to be honest, I think my favorite bar in the whole verse was the Slack/Sears Tower bars. I don't know why, seemed like it hit the hardest for me. You had a lot of personals and shit in this, they kind of seemed boring even though they were worded nicely. I think your verse was a nice drop this week.

    Oneduh:

    Comin to Rm with that ego, I'll bitchslap this faggots teeth
    I'd say go back to bboys..
    but they deleted it again just to prevent that from happening
    Personal opener.
    If your ideas are so fresh, & you're the hottest
    Why does it take you an extra half a line to word the garbage?
    I loved this.
    11 wins gets you respect now? this shit has to stop kids
    I went 24-3 when John couldn't even crack the top 10
    I didn't like this at all.
    You don't deserve my effort, look at this punks accomplishments
    Only time I need to concentrate on facin john is when im drunk & gotta piss
    That's hilarious.
    But my aim's not a question, I tote that beam
    That'll put big holes in ya chest until ya shirt look like a snowman tee
    Hmm.. I'm feeling it..
    This losers still a virgin, he can't get a date
    Bitches only chase Hen if they can't drink it straight
    This was nice also..Feeling it.
    Without the riders.. you could never win a match, dude's garbage
    So he has to draw on others for support, like tattoo artists
    I don't think this was worded right.
    This biter used my concepts but I can't be compared to him
    You see I'm One.. & that's just where he ranks on a scale of ten
    That's tight.
    We can take it to the streets, I'm stompin this clown
    My mood swings alone could lift you offa the ground
    Nah.
    He was scared to go the line limit, to me it seems fishy
    Maybe he knew it would just give the voters 10 more reasons to pick me
    Nah.

    You had a nice verse also, I was feeling some of the ideas. I like all of the nameplays that you used. The Chase Hen and the John/drunk line was fire. I really liked that. The bboys lines was alright, I got it because I am from bboys also. Not a bad verse.

    BATTLE BREAKDOWN

    Yah, this was a pretty close battle. I think Oneduh edged John out by two punches. I think Oneduh had nameplays that were hot. John Hensely was a little off in my opinion. This shit was close though. The flows were alright for both of you, nothing jaw dropping. The punches were nice through out this though. Not to mention I was really feeling that 3 bar/garbage line that Oneduh brought. That shit had me rolling. Close battle though. Pz.
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