9 In Awe 10-4 vs 10 Faceless 6-2

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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  3. in awe

    in awe solo

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  4. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro
    I once thought In awe Could step His Game up and Contend
    But his room for improvement's gone..guess he couldnt pay tha Rent
    I Give a new meaning to Tha Shit Hits tha Fan
    I know i'm tha Shit..Thats why i Slaped tha fuck outta this Man
    Isnt it quite Obvious my Number One Surporters In Awe..
    Just ask any of my fans what they think of Face..they'll say..I'm In Awe
    If your Father coulda Saw tha future he woulda Took Procaution
    and if the condom broke he would of certinly Bought the Abortion
    This kid's never been in a Black Comunity..and known as a Weak Chump
    That Only gets Ran over in Ritch White neighborhoods like SpeedBumps
    In awe's far from Creative and Brings Nothing new 2 tha Counter
    Coined No New Concepts just Borrowed from tha Founders
    But it's Ok..I know ya Wack and far from Hot so Bite
    And i got a Patton on Original concepts and u cant even Copy Write
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  5. in awe

    in awe solo

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    I feel sorry for face and im not even bein deceivin
    cuz in real life he has less friends then NBC next season
    but raps not for you man so get it off your mind
    cuz if I broke your bones and you had casts all over
    you still wouldnt get signed
    afta readin ya lines please, face aint got me rattled
    im so confident, I promise I wont vote on any battles
    cuz ill stomp you, ya neck will be needin braces
    I feel bad for your girl tho cuz now she has two messed up faces
    cuz dude will be hurtin if he gets me ta fight hard
    your pool of blood will be so big its gonna need a lifeguard
    fuck this
    im gettin blazed right now and for face that spells doom
    cuz my eyes are bloodshot...and his beating the fuck out of you
    ^then you cried about the votes but now thats got ta change
    but why should we expect you not ta bitch
    even ya verses complain
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  6. Bad News™

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    I feel sorry for face and im not even bein deceivin
    cuz in real life he has less friends then NBC next season
    lol
    but raps not for you man so get it off your mind
    cuz if I broke your bones and you had casts all over
    you still wouldnt get signed
    played
    afta readin ya lines please, face aint got me rattled
    im so confident, I promise I wont vote on any battles
    coulda had better wordin
    cuz ill stomp you, ya neck will be needin braces
    I feel bad for your girl tho cuz now she has two messed up faces
    ehhh
    cuz dude will be hurtin if he gets me ta fight hard
    your pool of blood will be so big its gonna need a lifeguard
    nice use
    fuck this
    im gettin blazed right now and for face that spells doom
    cuz my eyes are bloodshot...and his beating the fuck out of you
    choppy flow
    ^then you cried about the votes but now thats got ta change
    but why should we expect you not ta bitch
    even ya verses complain
    not strong closer


    After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro
    bad wordin
    I once thought In awe Could step His Game up and Contend
    But his room for improvement's gone..guess he couldnt pay tha Rent
    played
    I Give a new meaning to Tha Shit Hits tha Fan
    I know i'm tha Shit..Thats why i Slaped tha fuck outta this Man
    nah
    Isnt it quite Obvious my Number One Surporters In Awe..
    Just ask any of my fans what they think of Face..they'll say..I'm In Awe
    bad wordin
    If your Father coulda Saw tha future he woulda Took Procaution
    and if the condom broke he would of certinly Bought the Abortion
    ehhh
    This kid's never been in a Black Comunity..and known as a Weak Chump
    That Only gets Ran over in Ritch White neighborhoods like SpeedBumps
    lol
    In awe's far from Creative and Brings Nothing new 2 tha Counter
    Coined No New Concepts just Borrowed from tha Founders
    ehhh
    But it's Ok..I know ya Wack and far from Hot so Bite
    And i got a Patton on Original concepts and u cant even Copy Write
    not strong closer

    was expectin better from both 'specially in awe, but he had enough to take this by a good margin, even though i didnt really like a lot in this battle
    vote-In Awe
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  7. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    same as above... the friends line ive seen similiar, but still nice flow on it, then awes verse fell. the girl / two messed up faces line was nice, rest not so much.

    face... not your best effort. flowed poorly, rhymed akwardly, concepts played... blah.

    "After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro
    I once thought In awe Could step His Game up and Contend
    But his room for improvement's gone..guess he couldnt pay tha Rent"

    that was decent. rest sucked.

    v/ in awe.
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  8. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    i thought face's opener was pretyt dope, coulda been worded better, the rest of your shit was whack, sereiously no flow you just happened to rhyme a few words


    In awe, he was straight... some coo lines i guess... good flow though, better verse overall... PERIOD


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  9. Tony Elbow

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    After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro
    ^^hahaha...bitch as muthafucka, if you had more stuff like this I would of voted for you dawg but you didn't, sorry

    in awe I like: pool/lifegaurd & two faces..both have been worded better..I've seen friends line before a couple times..and the Come plain/complain lines was nice but I'm pretty sure its' been done


    overall tho In Awe brought more heat to the table

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  10. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    I rushed this to get it in early. but it's cool..Nice verse in awe

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  11. Rygar's Penis

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    dope lines:

    After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro
    This kid's never been in a Black Comunity..and known as a Weak Chump
    That Only gets Ran over in Ritch White neighborhoods like SpeedBumps

    I feel sorry for face and im not even bein deceivin
    cuz in real life he has less friends then NBC next season
    afta readin ya lines please, face aint got me rattled
    im so confident, I promise I wont vote on any battles
    cuz dude will be hurtin if he gets me ta fight hard
    your pool of blood will be so big its gonna need a lifeguard


    vote = In Awe

    Faceless came decent, but had a few more played concepts.
    Nice battle though.
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  12. MC² Êxô®çì§m

    MC² Êxô®çì§m New Member

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    Face -

    But his room for improvement's gone..guess he couldnt pay tha Rent
    -lol funny..

    If your Father coulda Saw tha future he woulda Took Procaution
    and if the condom broke he would of certinly Bought the Abortion
    -ill concept..

    That Only gets Ran over in Ritch White neighborhoods like SpeedBumps
    -was feelin this a lot..

    In awe's far from Creative and Brings Nothing new 2 tha Counter
    Coined No New Concepts just Borrowed from tha Founders
    But it's Ok..I know ya Wack and far from Hot so Bite
    And i got a Patton on Original concepts and u cant even Copy Write
    -proper ending
    OVERALL= came ill overall, well-rounded verse thruout..


    Awe-

    cuz ill stomp you, ya neck will be needin braces
    I feel bad for your girl tho cuz now she has two messed up faces
    cuz dude will be hurtin if he gets me ta fight hard
    your pool of blood will be so big its gonna need a lifeguard
    -close to hot..but not quite..most decent lines in ya verse..

    vote- Face - came proper thru the whole verse, Awe didnt seem to hungary for this one..good battle..
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  13. Torch1

    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    face needs to work on that flow, first like....6 lines were cool, after that you fell the fuck off, iono, you say you rushed...and it shows

    awe was consistent, harder hitting punches, just straight throughout the verse


    Vote= In Awe
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  14. Solar~Eclipse

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    FaceLesss


    After this Polaroids will be the only way to Remember this Wack Ho
    Have his Family crying over Pictures more than RBL's Joseph Q. Castro

    Nice Solid Opener

    I once thought In awe Could step His Game up and Contend
    But his room for improvement's gone..guess he couldnt pay tha Rent

    Nice Solid Punch,

    I Give a new meaning to Tha Shit Hits tha Fan
    I know i'm tha Shit..Thats why i Slaped tha fuck outta this Man

    Wasn't as good as the others

    Isnt it quite Obvious my Number One Surporters In Awe..
    Just ask any of my fans what they think of Face..they'll say..I'm In Awe

    Nice Funny Line

    If your Father coulda Saw tha future he woulda Took Procaution
    and if the condom broke he would of certinly Bought the Abortion

    Not Bad, Good Concept

    This kid's never been in a Black Comunity..and known as a Weak Chump
    That Only gets Ran over in Ritch White neighborhoods like SpeedBumps

    I've Heard This Concept Before, Not Bad

    In awe's far from Creative and Brings Nothing new 2 tha Counter
    Coined No New Concepts just Borrowed from tha Founders

    Solid

    But it's Ok..I know ya Wack and far from Hot so Bite
    And i got a Patton on Original concepts and u cant even Copy Write

    Nice Solid Ending

    Overall, Flow was good, had some nice concepts, punches were solid had nice attack, a couple weeker lines,



    in awe


    I feel sorry for face and im not even bein deceivin
    cuz in real life he has less friends then NBC next season

    Not A Bad Opener

    but raps not for you man so get it off your mind
    cuz if I broke your bones and you had casts all over
    you still wouldnt get signed

    Not The Best, Read The Concept Before

    afta readin ya lines please, face aint got me rattled
    im so confident, I promise I wont vote on any battles

    Nice Solid Line

    cuz ill stomp you, ya neck will be needin braces
    I feel bad for your girl tho cuz now she has two messed up faces

    Another Solid Punch!

    cuz dude will be hurtin if he gets me ta fight hard
    your pool of blood will be so big its gonna need a lifeguard

    Not The Best,

    fuck this
    im gettin blazed right now and for face that spells doom
    cuz my eyes are bloodshot...and his beating the fuck out of you

    Not Bad,

    ^then you cried about the votes but now thats got ta change
    but why should we expect you not ta bitch
    even ya verses complain


    Solid Ending

    Overall,

    Had Some Nice Concepts, had some nice solid punches/personals, also had some week filler stuff,

    "cuz ill stomp you, ya neck will be needin braces
    I feel bad for your girl tho cuz now she has two messed up faces"

    More like that and you would have won it,


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  15. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    hhhmmm... guess I'll have to go with In Awe in this one

    Faceless had some choppy flows and watered down lyrics... some good lines in the verse, but not consistent at all

    In Awe
    flow was ok, punches were cool to, but overall the content was just better in my opinion

    Vote In Awe
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  16. Carnifex

    Carnifex Legendary

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    face-that rent lie would of been dope if you worded it a lil bit differnt

    Lol@the speed bump line

    opener was dope

    closer wassnt bad
    other lines was weak or played
    not a bad verse at all tho...


    in awe haha

    i liked the opener...yet its played

    afta readin ya lines please, face aint got me rattled
    im so confident, I promise I wont vote on any battles

    i had a line thought up like this but you played it dope

    not a bad verse...

    iuno to me in awe had more played lines then faceless but it was a hard battle for me to call

    vote-faceless even tho it doesnt matter lol
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  17. Part II

    Part II The next best thing

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    Overall this was a Rather uneven battle in terms of Punchlines & Flow.

    Faceless defnitly had the Nice Concepts comming, yet his lines were very long.
    Long lines take away the effect of the punchline & makes the line read like a "Sentence" instead of a "Lyric". This took away ALOT from your verse for me Face.. I got the lines & understood them, yet I didn't feel them like you wanted me you. You Gotta read your verse out loud without speeding up the way you speak the words & make sure it flows to you(& maby a friend).
    Punchline + Smooth Flow= Banging verse

    Vote= In Awe

    In awe understood the Importance of a Smooth flow & good punchlines. Even if the lines are Played the Flow you Spit them in makes them all the more Effective(I also use this technique). Thats good skill.. a Nessessary skill when battling a Emcee who uses it.

    Nice Battle tho, Keep banging
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  18. -Oz-

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  19. The Second Comming

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    vote = In Awe

    Faceless' verse had some played shit in it.
    Like the room for improvement line for example, that was a big NONO.
    In Awe had some pretty decent lines, and was alot more fresher.
    So he gets the win for being more consistent.
    Faceless needs to try harder,
    I've only seen one dope verse from him since he's been in the league.

    holla
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  20. Super.

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    vote in awe
    he had alot more fresh lines, shit was all around just more interesting and appealing this week. i usually like faceless stuff, but this week he was subpar.
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