9. headless verseman 2-0 vs. 10. theFRANCHISE 2-0

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  1. David Lama

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  2. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    lol, well well mr franchise.....16-24? somewhere within?
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  3. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    He doesnt bite, but what he writes ya might know
    its just added slang and a tight flow with headlines off of the tonight show
    Was that line aight bro? you should see him with a tight hoe
    In a bed wet, bitch yawnin- cuz his contents delivered quicker then Fed Ex
    Yes- Next, ya beat StigmEta, so whats in a name eh?
    Well im headless with no brain but I'll win cuz i wont forget my 'A' game
    An he tunes to the news for lines, isnt that silly black?
    Ironic though, cuz like a true Anchorman your gonna finish LAST
    Step on stage you'll bomb and freeze, while im calm from tree's
    So my punchlines always connect with good reception, like XM comedies
    Your more bitch than man, regrets? None, i do nothing but damage sets
    And dont need to post a verse, cuz you'd son yourself like tanning beds
    Honestly, nobodies feelin ya steeze, well fill the B
    I'ma salute ya just to ___, give up yet,.... KILL YOU AT EASE
    What I can do? best ya newest because I'm fresh and fluid
    do so much damage with this "Magic Round"-
    afterwards they'll look towards the grassy knoll for evidence of a second shooter
    The Franchise? its not subtle that your pitiful-
    Just break down your name, an it proves exactly why your unoriginal
    My shit is backed up, always, so I boast aweful cocky
    Even if you wrote ya shit played off my post like a close shot in hockey
    I wanna write mean bars, to the point this fag cries
    he's 40 plus, so besides van gundy its the worst anybodies sold out the franchise
    I'm a warrior, used to killing sick emcee's with talent
    So I'ma just drive through franchise, like the original mickey d's from cali
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  4. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    aight....... here it is!

    theFRANCHISE will leave this kid a beaten bald sasquatch
    headless verseman is a Pirate …should be Seton Hall’s mascot
    every wedding he attends.. this kid barks in pursuit of the groom
    only streak u’re really on… are the skidmarks in u’re fruit of the loom
    it seems he failed as a novelist… so this silly tried art
    and honestly he’s not that bald it’s just a really wide part
    i’m hittin’ headless with my punchlines now your blue in your face
    i ain’t a real estate agent…. but I’ll still put you in your place
    head got the no show shine last week since this bald fool went Mr. Clean
    but this verseman gives more oral care than cool mint Listerine
    you see I’m questioning your skill… as if you’re in a probe
    beating theFRANCHISE means the world to you…more than a globe
    i’ll leave the voters laughin’ with a soiled leg…. send the warning
    this verse is harder to beat than a boiled egg…. in the morning
    he’ll drop out of the RBL since headless verseman’s a fleeing teen
    see this kid is just average… and I’m not just being mean
    my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
    while your verse rubs us the wrong way like a bad masseuse
    you think you stand a chance… better open a vast jar of hope
    after I win I’ll rub it in…… more than your last bar of soap

    and up the ranks I go........
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  5. ~*dAiLy-SiNs*~

    ~*dAiLy-SiNs*~ GraphiK LyricS

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    34/50 pretty nice verse i liked the van gundy franchise line and the anchorman line and the xm comedies line... the rest just seemed average in impact



    29/50 pretty consistent verse here. i liked the listerine line but everything else just didnt hit as hard as i thought it would.. maybe i expected to much but it just seemed like you may have rushed a lil bit and the opener i didnt get unless it was a butt pirate play which is disappointing because it was kind of a played concept being it was a fag line

    vote=headless because he had a few more quotables although a good battle i just thought HV's werdplay pulled off his punches a lil more effectively
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  6. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    vote - headless

    mermked him

    He doesnt bite, but what he writes ya might know
    its just added slang and a tight flow with headlines off of the tonight show

    ahahah that line just killed it..

    the rest of the verse was coool too

    My shit is backed up, always, so I boast aweful cocky
    Even if you wrote ya shit played off my post like a close shot in hockey

    liked that also..


    franchise was wack as fuck

    everything was blah..
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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    franchise had sum played lines...headless had more original witty punches...


    vote=headless
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  8. Will Nevalose

    Will Nevalose only win

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    Step on stage you'll bomb and freeze, while im calm from tree's
    So my punchlines always connect with good reception, like XM comedies
    I'm a warrior, used to killing sick emcee's with talent
    So I'ma just drive through franchise, like the original mickey d's from cali
    Honestly, nobodies feelin ya steeze, well fill the B
    I'ma salute ya just to ___, give up yet,.... KILL YOU AT EASE
    Yes- Next, ya beat StigmEta, so whats in a name eh?
    Well im headless with no brain but I'll win cuz i wont forget my 'A' game

    vs.

    you see I’m questioning your skill… as if you’re in a probe
    beating theFRANCHISE means the world to you…more than a globe

    i thought this was a bit one sided, fran had some decent stuff, but alot of it didnt really hit hard, headless didnt hit too hard either but he had some cool lines that were better than anything in frans verse.

    vote - headless verseman
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  9. Willie Dickgood

    Willie Dickgood New Member

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    V- Headless Verseman



    Franchise almost seemed like he didnt even wanna win this one, and if he was.....bad effort...everything just seemed maad effortless, makin his verse kinda booty...Verseman's shit was kinda fresher, had some nice witty punchlines and a cool nameplay in his verse that i thought was kinda original..But yea verseman gets this based on the fact it didnt even seem like his opponent even tried
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  10. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    up over no shows
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  11. Who Kares

    Who Kares not even your mother

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    HEADLESS VERSEMAN

    He doesnt bite, but what he writes ya might know
    its just added slang and a tight flow with headlines off of the tonight show
    Was that line aight bro? you should see him with a tight hoe
    In a bed wet, bitch yawnin- cuz his contents delivered quicker then Fed Ex
    Your more bitch than man, regrets? None, i do nothing but damage sets
    And dont need to post a verse, cuz you'd son yourself like tanning beds

    What I can do? best ya newest because I'm fresh and fluid
    do so much damage with this "Magic Round"-
    afterwards they'll look towards the grassy knoll for evidence of a second shooter
    The Franchise? its not subtle that your pitiful-
    Just break down your name, an it proves exactly why your unoriginal

    Good shit.

    FRANCHISE



    head got the no show shine last week since this bald fool went Mr. Clean
    but this verseman gives more oral care than cool mint Listerine
    you see I’m questioning your skill… as if you’re in a probe
    beating theFRANCHISE means the world to you…more than a globe

    VOTE headless

    Franchise seems like he was on an audio tip with some of his lines, headless had alot of fresh material.
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  12. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    WACK battle


    headless shit was so stretched and drawn out it was annoyin, and alot of his shit may not have been played but it was still corny, but he came raw with the personals and still out did franny

    franchise's verse was played, sounded like an early 01 verse when textcees jus started gettin good, but his flow was easier to follow


    so vote, headless
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  13. -Oz-

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    Vote Headless

    Franchise just wasnt creative or original enough. Your shit wasnt bad, but you werent breaking any new ground.

    Headless took a chance and tried something new, maybe im the only one who appreciates that shit, but I liked his verse.

    He doesnt bite, but what he writes ya might know
    its just added slang and a tight flow with headlines off of the tonight show
    Was that line aight bro? you should see him with a tight hoe
    In a bed wet, bitch yawnin- cuz his contents delivered quicker then Fed Ex

    I liked that shit, plus a few others like the grassy knole and tanning bed lines.
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  14. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    daily sins, how does that line not rhyme?

    in a bed wet- quicker then fed Ex??????


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  15. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    i know, huh....

    he also doesn't know how to add........ based on his scoring system you should have a 34/59 which is a few percentage points less than he gave me so i really should have had his vote.... haha

    what an idiot......

    oh well, guess i shouldn't have keyed that verse... g'luck next week.

    nobody here understood my verse.....

    i've already voted on 5+ battles, not droppin' links but it doesn't matter...
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  16. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Headless shit was kinda corny.
    Some of his punches were just dumb.
    But he DID have a few good ones.

    Franchise's shit was 100% comparison punches.
    And none were even witty.
    Shit was aweful.
    Goddamn.

    So yea, Head got it with his few cool punches.

    V/Headless
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  17. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    ^i understood it



    but the concepts were old and the execution was too simplistic
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  18. ~*dAiLy-SiNs*~

    ~*dAiLy-SiNs*~ GraphiK LyricS

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    well then your just a retard to see i miskeyed the 4 instead of a 5 since all the bars where based on 5 points a peice... so come drop another hate vote in my thread to make yourelf feel better cupcake


    the line rhymed the bar didnt unless i read it wrong... nope i didnt because the way you did it made the flow choppy
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  19. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    ^na


    that second line wasnt supposed to rhyme wit the first one

    you gotta be open minded dog, there are millions of different rhyme schemes

    that was like an AABB type shit
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  20. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    THANK YOU, lol.


    but yea, more votes, good match franch. its all love
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