9. Dahlohner 33-12 Vs 10. Patriarch 15-3

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Oct 5, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST
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    VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!!


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    This week and following we will enforce this rule



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    Your Topics are here
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    if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!!


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  2. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    Umm...
    Ok.

    SIGNING in

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  3. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    Um 4 lines..

    Angie caught the ball as the rain would fall
    And she heeded the needed play call
    It was a friendly game of flagfootball
    And Latinos Unidos showed they had balls..

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  4. visualize

    visualize ..........

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    (fixing for Nebs)
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  5. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    *sigh*
    lol

    Damn, Patriarch you could have AT LEAST signed in.


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  6. visualize

    visualize ..........

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    why the sign lohny?
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  7. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Over No Shows
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  8. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    7.Your on the verge of death in the hospital.
    Your friends, family, ect are there.
    What do you say to them as a group or individually?
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    the drip of the IV silently echo's like thunder
    underneath the covers i struggle.. and steadily wonder
    what to say to my mother, her stare tares at my insides
    alive, watchin her cry makes me wish that id' die
    why must i say goodbye? so young and so scared of death
    i believe in God, but no-one actually knows where we'll end
    eyes scatter thruout the room, friends and family listen
    room is a pool of tears that the onlookers are drippin
    feelin like a freakshow, but their all there cause the care
    waiting for me to say somethin, so i start with a prayer..
    dear Lord, i beg your protection.. of all in this room
    watch over them closely, for they know not what they do
    bless them as they rest, and bless their food before they eat
    bless their children and their familys, for life is so sweet
    you gave us this chance, and most of us take it for granted
    planted the seed of life in one, and then made it a habit
    thank you Lord, for the time you let me enjoy on this Earth
    ill search for you in heaven, as we all have from birth.. Amen
    opening my eyes, glance around and see streams down faces
    lace my hands into my mothers, can almost feel death chase'n
    placed my head back in the pillow, tears ran down my cheeks
    i feel weak but its too soon, let a smile and started to speak
    think not that im dying, but being born into a life of the new
    do as you wish in this world, remember times we've gone thru
    remember the arguments and fights, also the hatred and wrath
    along with the happy and joyous we all encounterd on this path
    my love is equal for all, each of you hold a place in my soul
    hold me at high regard, knowing one day, again we will stroll
    but not thru the alleys, the malls or neighbors back yards
    but ontop of clouds in heaven, where we're not running from guards
    memories are sacred, never forget anyone standing before me
    whats weird is, i'll still be twenty, and you all will look forty
    all in all, i love you all, mom dad.. i'll miss you the most
    youll be pissed at my pranks now, especially since ill be a ghost
    close'n your cabinets, and postin obscene gestures on the wall
    i recall you both sayin.. that id out live both of yall...
    ...but HA! as it turns it was a flaw and i proved you both wrong...

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  9. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    dam lohner.. hate to see him go out like that
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  10. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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  11. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    oh FUCK NO!! I don't even want to vote on this shit... Was Patriarch's in time?! That's not right at all...
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  12. 0u+k@$+

    0u+k@$+ J Budden=G.O.A.T & Im Gay

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    lol...vote=patriarch...for obvious reasons...
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  13. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    He was, HE posted as Visualize....then in the hookups....i said next time u should post under ur real name cause i didnt kno his alias so he changed it....why i dont know...but he was Here On time....

    U must always post a Verse....always
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  14. Maddest of Men

    Maddest of Men Just Call Me Madman

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    Seeing Patriarch gets the obvious votes, I'll just treat this like an open mic. Your writing was very good. I think personally, you took the subject a little too humoursly, especially towards the end, but I guess if I was dieing, I'd wanna look on the bright side. Great visuals, and an overall great verse.

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  15. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    LMAO, yes I posted on time...

    and Dah, I like how ou edited to put how I could have checked in... come on now.

    Yeah, I suppose I could have.. but I didnt see the point when I was going to post in 30 mins, I hardly ever goto the threads until im actually going to post. But oh well.
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  16. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    Hence the (fixing for Nebs) reply at 12:51..
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  17. WiSDoM

    WiSDoM I t0k yer wifes virginity

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    damn..that hurts..
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  18. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Pat Wins
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