9. Black Writer (4-0) vs. 10. Rhymenstein (7-0)

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by Super., Dec 20, 2004.

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  1. -ChOppA STyLE-

    -ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA

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    c'mon skippy... ur from scotland, how fuckin gay is that
    pfft..trust, i would diss da shit outta it, if i knew where it's located at


    thats that clown shit man lmao


    enough to win it


    black just came funny as hell


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  2. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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  3. Super.

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  4. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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  5. Iceberg X

    Iceberg X Registered Drug-User

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    Black got this on some other shit. Rhyme had some nice lines too, but black's verse just had somethin about it that made u wanna keep readin. I dunno, but i'm votin for black. The broken english shit was hott too so that helps.
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  6. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    whoaa Black dropped some mad nice shit as rhymestein did too..black took this though lololol, harder hittin punches..flow was nice, you came more witty & fresher...nice..

    vote -- black writer
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  7. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    i liked readin this battle, both had nice flow and punches....i dunno tho man...


    Rhyme: cool lines for the most part, the closer to me was kinda ehh i thought, but overall not bad. i liked ur creativity, ur flow was cool, and u had some punches

    Black: i liked ur flow alot, the multis were nice as hell, the punches were hittin but nothin really too creative in this verse.....i dunno, i liked ur holy spirit line and talking head line

    i dunno....ima vote for Black, but it really wasn't a blowout like everyone said it was.
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  8. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Rhyme -

    callin urself black writer? u must be the blackest from ur set
    hangin with the ku klux klan while bein a crac.ker on the net

    (Alright opener. Concept was there, everything else wasnt)
    .........

    that says it all for me, but i'm known for knuckle n more dusters
    to have ur eyes stay puffed longer, than the marshmallow from ghostbusters

    (Nice line.)

    see u dont know me son, abbreviate rhyme & know ur punishment
    just to guivera standing ovation like the columbian government

    (Not bad, not bad.)

    & as ya verse is treated like ur death bed, rm'll yell this...
    why is black diggin his own grave? when no one fucking else is..

    (Concept was cool, execution was off.)

    rhyme's batman shits termendous, but fuck the new humor
    i'll show so many Biffs* to black, he'll think it's back to the future

    (Nope. The hell is a biff?)

    kids are sleeping on that army or battalion of urs, to tame the hearse
    but with so many zzz's u'd think battalion was an explanation for ya verse

    (Not feeling it.)

    honestly negro, the buck stops here, the voters response'll beat ya
    ur Wow replies are more unexplained than charlie browns teacher

    (Idea was there, ehh @ everything else.)

    ur finished u loser, rhymes known for bombin kids
    while takin BK off the food chain quicker than Mc Donalds did

    (Nice name play, sort of. Good line.)

    cuz to me homie u aint nothin, u can drop shit as ill as u like b...
    aint nobody peepin ya verse besides me,
    serious, nobodys peepin that fuckin verse beside me.

    (I think the idea is cool, but poorly written.)

    i dont care if ur angry either, as ur gonna see with this next shit.
    when nobody can see ur snap or finger clicks through text, bitch

    (Haha, nice closer.
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    Black Writer -

    ur not 7-0, fuck what this blowing ho thinks
    so fuck that alias unless ur da only deity that forgets to vote and post links

    (Nice opener, good personal.)

    i spit ferocious lyrics plus my flow's tighter
    known fiyah, while this god needs da holy spirit as a ghost writer

    (Alright line. Idea was good, but written weird.)

    u dope? liar..if u got steam to lose, then ill beef with ur crew too
    that nicca black holds iron thats tailor-made... but da heat doesn't suit u

    (Ehh, gun lines are played.)

    c'mon skippy... ur from scotland, how fuckin gay is that
    pfft..trust, i would diss da shit outta it, if i knew where it's located at

    (Personal idea was cool, could've been written better though.)

    claim u ain't scurred, but that thread was jus so funny
    this nicca went on his knees and fucking begged me to post 20

    (Alright personal.)

    doubt me? my words are truth, cuh.. ur failing instead
    so watch me put da hammer to ur face and hit da nail on da head

    (Good line. Idea was nice, but could be written a little better.)

    nig PLEASE.. im gettin sick of this weak bitch steez
    act sour
    & i'll let da fo-fifth squeeze till clips turn ur body ta swiss cheese

    (No!)

    stab ur crew too, whoever the fuck those faggots be
    nicca im sharp, handling my knife game wit a cut-throat strategy

    (Probably your best line.)

    this is war, how are u supposed ta win it?
    if ur a talking head, ill turn ur body language into broken english

    (Ehh, concept was cool. Wording was a little off.)

    peep this mismatch...& see a clueless dude lose it
    even wit a voting ring big enough for u to hoola hoop through it!

    (Nice closer. I think fake personals are dumb, but nice none the less.)


    Breakdown: Both were pretty evenly matched. Nice punches from both. Maybe 1 or 2 original nice lines from both. A lot of nice concepts, but not written well. In the end though Black Writer was a little more consistent. A couple more good lines than Rhyme. Both need to a little more original though, and not so corny as well.

    Vote - Black Writer
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  9. Super.

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    blacky wins.
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