9. Black Writer (4-0) vs. 10. Rhymenstein (7-0)

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  1. Super.

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    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
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    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
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    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
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    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


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  2. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    g'luck doggie, ill let u post first if u post tonight.
    if not, were going 30.
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  3. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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    callin urself black writer? u must be the blackest from ur set
    hangin with the ku klux klan while bein a crac.ker on the net

    .........

    that says it all for me, but i'm known for knuckle n more dusters
    to have ur eyes stay puffed longer, than the marshmallow from ghostbusters
    see u dont know me son, abbreviate rhyme & know ur punishment
    just to guivera standing ovation like the columbian government
    & as ya verse is treated like ur death bed, rm'll yell this...
    why is black diggin his own grave? when no one fucking else is..
    rhyme's batman shits termendous, but fuck the new humor
    i'll show so many Biffs* to black, he'll think it's back to the future
    kids are sleeping on that army or battalion of urs, to tame the hearse
    but with so many zzz's u'd think battalion was an explanation for ya verse
    honestly negro, the buck stops here, the voters response'll beat ya
    ur Wow replies are more unexplained than charlie browns teacher
    ur finished u loser, rhymes known for bombin kids
    while takin BK off the food chain quicker than Mc Donalds did
    cuz to me homie u aint nothin, u can drop shit as ill as u like b...
    aint nobody peepin ya verse besides me,
    serious, nobodys peepin that fuckin verse beside me.
    i dont care if ur angry either, as ur gonna see with this next shit.
    when nobody can see ur snap or finger clicks through text, bitch
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  4. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=808865

    ur not 7-0, fuck what this blowing ho thinks
    so fuck that alias unless ur da only deity that forgets to vote and post links
    i spit ferocious lyrics plus my flow's tighter
    known fiyah, while this god needs da holy spirit as a ghost writer
    u dope? liar..if u got steam to lose, then ill beef with ur crew too
    that nicca black holds iron thats tailor-made... but da heat doesn't suit u
    c'mon skippy... ur from scotland, how fuckin gay is that
    pfft..trust, i would diss da shit outta it, if i knew where it's located at
    claim u ain't scurred, but that thread was jus so funny
    this nicca went on his knees and fucking begged me to post 20
    doubt me? my words are truth, cuh.. ur failing instead
    so watch me put da hammer to ur face and hit da nail on da head
    nig PLEASE.. im gettin sick of this weak bitch steez
    act sour
    & i'll let da fo-fifth squeeze till clips turn ur body ta swiss cheese
    stab ur crew too, whoever the fuck those faggots be
    nicca im sharp, handling my knife game wit a cut-throat strategy
    this is war, how are u supposed ta win it?
    if ur a talking head, ill turn ur body language into broken english
    peep this mismatch...& see a clueless dude lose it
    even wit a voting ring big enough for u to hoola hoop through it!
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  5. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    damn Black who know ya throw fiyah like that

    black ya had way better punches and flow

    Rhymenstein verse was boring it didn't standout punchwize

    but new Black writer is gonna do some things

    vote=Black Writer---------hands down
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  6. D.A.N.G.E.R.

    D.A.N.G.E.R. Fresh Emcee!

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    i agree with yung

    damn black was won this with ease.....

    i liked nearly all blacks verse

    he had nice punches n nicce flow

    but rymenstein....wasnt very good this time, didnt like anythin

    Vote-Black
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  7. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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    nice verse black.... props.
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  8. hotboy

    hotboy Guest

    rhyme had the guevara, ghostbuster, bif, and bk line

    blackwriter had allright concepts that were worded pretty poorly
    alot of forced multis stretched ur lines too
    your heat line was cool, broken english line was cool
    too many crash ya ribs with adlibs type gangster gay lines though

    pretty close battle that came down to wording
    rhyme edged out the win, flowed smoothly

    vote rhyme
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  9. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    c'mon doggie, u been hating da whole time & now this? ill leave it up to da mods.

    nice verse rhyme.

    edit to comment on what rhyme said below me:
    aight, will do.
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  10. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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    thx, but let the votes come in.



    my last comment. i expect the same from you.
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  11. hotboy

    hotboy Guest

    i dunno what your saying but
    i just read the verses and voted
    this is actually the first verse i read 1 of your verses, and it had cool concepts
    i just thought alot were stretches,
    lol im not, w/e, i dont think ive ever hated
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  12. hotboy

    hotboy Guest

    vote rhyme
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  13. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    dickriders.
    Blackwriter is fucking garbage.
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  14. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    plz, Oz or whoever the fuck u are, take this to hookups.
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  15. penacILLin

    penacILLin konichiwa

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    blackwriter dropped fire along with the other dude..nice shit from both of you but rhymestein your verse was a bit stretched and not all too good flowing.. im going with black on this for hard hittin punches, better flow and all the above basiaclly..nice stuff

    vote: blackwriter
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  16. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    eh.. i wasnt feeling this battle as much as some other people.

    feel black got it though.. rhyme might have been a little fresher but i see a lot of stretches (on both sides, actually), some poorly worded punches, some random shit.. but black was just more consistent.
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  17. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    c'mon skippy... ur from scotland, how fuckin gay is that
    pfft..trust, i would diss da shit outta it, if i knew where it's located at
    ^ made me laugh.

    vote- Black .. cool battle here, Black has a Gangster Net rapper Mentality though .. he'll kill you with a keyboard, literally. i wasnt really feeling Rhymes verse & ontop of that he had alot of stretched lines & the flow was shitty.
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  18. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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  19. iLLweezy

    iLLweezy ILLWeeMaN

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    RHYMENSTEIN - Shit was nice. Your flow is crystal, and it was easy to follow and spit to a slow beat. Your punches came at him, one after another, and you hit hard just about every time. Consistency is key in battles, and you had it for 90% of the time.
    Some hot lines.
    "see u dont know me son, abbreviate rhyme & know ur punishment
    just to guivera standing ovation like the columbian government" - That was nasty. Flowed nice, and the punch was sick. Very original, indeed.
    "ur finished u loser, rhymes known for bombin kids
    while takin BK off the food chain quicker than Mc Donalds did" - This had me like "WHOA" in a way. That concept is fresh as hell, nameplay was disgusting, and all in all that was the line of your verse IMO.
    Overall, your verse was solid, and a 'HARD TO BEAT' verse at that. Very nice.

    BLACK WRITER - I never peeped you before, either. Verse was solid as well. You tried to come with humerous punches instead of some hard hitting ones, and I wasn't feelin' that. That SCOTLAND/LOCATION line was humerous, but wasn't that hard hitting. I'm thinking you put it in there for filler, or 'cause you wanted to get a quota of lines. Could've done without, though. I hope you get what I'm saying. here's what I felt from you, though.
    "i spit ferocious lyrics plus my flow's tighter
    known fiyah, while this god needs da holy spirit as a ghost writer" - I was feelin' the concept, but the setup was bad, and so was the wording..
    "this is war, how are u supposed ta win it?
    if ur a talking head, ill turn ur body language into broken english" - LINE OF THE MATCH! Easy. Shit was fire.

    Best Line Of The Match
    "this is war, how are u supposed ta win it?
    if ur a talking head, ill turn ur body language into broken english" - Black Writer
    .. tied with

    "ur finished u loser, rhymes known for bombin kids
    while takin BK off the food chain quicker than Mc Donalds did" - Rhymenstein

    Worst Line Of That Match
    "nig PLEASE.. im gettin sick of this weak bitch steez
    act sour
    & i'll let da fo-fifth squeeze till clips turn ur body ta swiss cheese" - Black Writer

    Harder Hitting Punches - Rhymenstein
    Consistancy - Rhymenstein
    Personals - Rhymenstein - (BK line was fuckin' nasty)

    Vote - Rhyme


    Peep My Battle When It Goes Up. 29. Know Skills vs. 30. ILLWeeZy

    Pz
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  20. A-bomb inabowl

    A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman

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    short and simple


    vote-black
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