9. Aura(9-2) vs 10. Charles(6-2)

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  4. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
    Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign
    Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
    I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
    Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
    ..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me
    All ya punches are stretches, no one can follow ya shit
    ..only good writer I know named Charles wrote Oliver Twist
    He's the fakest with his spits y'all, him winnin ain't likely
    cuz battlin me.. that's takin on a big job like Bruce Almighty
    I'll shoot at ya legs, with the gun layin in ma pocket
    ..blowin out a knee like Barkley playin for the Rockets
    Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
    Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..
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  5. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    craft/
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    you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
    so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
    be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
    cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
    aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
    if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
    saw ya champ match..that shit had me wetting in stitches../
    cuz ya got left out the 3-way..like a man wit two lesbian bitches/
    fuck who ghosts for you..your own shit is too played to write../
    plus your verses like women..they pussy and aint your type../
    dont follow me about..this stan shud start ta drown in cars.../
    n' this stalker aint bin jailed yet..but still holdin' prowlers bars../
    midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
    funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../
    the shit you come up with..that aint considered rappin at all../
    aint like ya ghosts..but you still gonna be passin through walls../
    your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
    i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../
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  6. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    you done 18?
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  7. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    Charles is good....

    but aura is better..:)
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  8. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    vote = aura

    by a hair tho, I felt aura was a little more creative
    Not takin nothin away from charles but I felt more energy in aura's verse for some reason
    good battle yall, it WAS close.. props to both!
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  9. Tang.

    Tang. The One & Only.

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    you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
    so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
    be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
    cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
    aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
    if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../



    hot ^
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  10. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Aura...

    I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
    Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign
    --koolio
    Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
    I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
    --heh
    Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
    ..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me
    --kool
    All ya punches are stretches, no one can follow ya shit
    ..only good writer I know named Charles wrote Oliver Twist
    --ok
    He's the fakest with his spits y'all, him winnin ain't likely
    cuz battlin me.. that's takin on a big job like Bruce Almighty
    --not feeling
    I'll shoot at ya legs, with the gun layin in ma pocket
    ..blowin out a knee like Barkley playin for the Rockets
    --nah old also
    Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
    Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..
    --done before, ok

    Charles...

    you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
    so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
    --ha
    be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
    cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
    --heh
    aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
    if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
    --haha
    saw ya champ match..that shit had me wetting in stitches../
    cuz ya got left out the 3-way..like a man wit two lesbian bitches/
    --nah, killed concept
    fuck who ghosts for you..your own shit is too played to write../
    plus your verses like women..they pussy and aint your type../
    --wording is bad, couldve been better
    dont follow me about..this stan shud start ta drown in cars.../
    n' this stalker aint bin jailed yet..but still holdin' prowlers bars../
    --no
    midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
    funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../--nah
    the shit you come up with..that aint considered rappin at all../
    aint like ya ghosts..but you still gonna be passin through walls../
    --k
    your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
    i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../
    --kool

    this is too close to call but I'mma have to take Charles with a couple of harder hits (beginning was nice), this is a flip a coin match, kool battle fellas

    vote-Charles
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  11. euphemism

    euphemism .

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    why have u dropped more than the the other guy.. ?!

    anyways,

    aura, nice consistent verse. No filler shit.. few lines in there made me lol.

    Charles had an ok verse.. I didn't like the rhymes though. cars/bars, all/wall, stitches/bitches..
    decent content, but IMO.. not as much as aura

    niceness..

    Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
    I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
    Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
    ..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me

    vote - aura
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  12. Omnific

    Omnific your head here...

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    Aura

    aura ya had a nice decent verse, although nothin too speacial this week....heres a few lines of yours i liked.....

    I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
    Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign

    Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
    Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..


    Charles

    havent really seen much from you but this verse was pretty nice....pretty consistant heres your best lines......

    you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
    so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../

    aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
    if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../

    midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
    funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../

    your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
    i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../


    both had nice shit but i think charles takes this one, aura was had some dope shit but charles just had more......

    vote-charles
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  13. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    aura should win
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  14. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    aura: nice solid verse..sum real nice hits throughout

    charles: koo verse sum nice hits....just didnt feel as many lines as i did wit aura

    so V/aura

    pZ
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  15. Venomus

    Venomus Spit Sick

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    this was a pretty good read, both verses were good, but I felt that Charles brought a little more to the table in this one, aura was good but could've been more thought out and more wittier, charles was just harder and more thought out.

    v/ Charles
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  16. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    V - Aura

    Solid verses by both, but Aura came nicer with the punches. Charles had some cool ones, but Aura brought consistency throughout his verse. I liked that homeless line.

    Cool battle
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  17. niquist

    niquist New Member

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    V - Aura

    Aura was consistance throughout, but Charles had the best start. If Charles had saved another good line for the end of his verse, I think he would have won this one. As of now, it looks like you drifted out of the win...
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  18. spooky tooth

    spooky tooth nigglet

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    No hate but Aura came on some played shit. He had a few straight lines.. these are the only ones im diggin,

    Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
    I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
    Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
    ..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me

    the water break line was ill.


    Charles - ya first 6 bars killed it.. pretty nice concepts.. the rest was solid.

    im givin it to charles.. overall more enjoyable.. stronger verse
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  19. Picasso Shyne

    Picasso Shyne .. Abstract ..

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    aura - the only lines i was really feelin' from aura was 'homeless' opener, and the 'water breaks' line. otherwise, the lines just didn't have a full effect, and a couple were played.

    charles - your opener was ill. not just the first bar, but the whole first 6-8 lines.
    you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
    so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
    be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
    cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
    aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
    if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
    that was hot as hell.

    vote - Charles.
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  20. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    lmfao..

    v/ Aura

    better verse by far, better wordings, concepts, punchesm, everything. And a better flow as well.
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