89. Smoke Trail 2-3 vs 90. RAM 1-3

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    checkin in, going around 12 - 16 lines ( 6-8bars).......agree?
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  3. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    G Luck

    ayo man, you a one time winner like them damn skittles
    dawg you couldnt be ill if u was straight out the hospital ||
    we both have the same number of losses, oh well
    put us up on scale, and watch Ram's side straight fail ||
    that line was easy....now its time for me to come sleezy
    but oh wait, your gurl done that, she gave me a freebe ||
    haha...i know yall laughin, but this rap shyt isnt a joke
    look at what this fool wrote, wouldnt u hate to be his folks ||
    " Im a fag, i love guys and dicks up my fuckin ass" he said
    ayo yall know he's readin this shyt with his face turnin red ||
    so like a pimple man, im gunna pop this cat quikly
    he likes to keep it simple..........hes keepin ti straight dickly ||
    i declare Law and Order on your fuckin ass, sit the fuck down
    every dude out here has a case on your ass, casue u get around||
    so fuck abunch of faggots, i know you probably really straight
    the only debate, is your technique, what a registeration waist ||
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  4. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    *edit in votes*
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7472780
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7468358
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=649850
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=649911

    peep the technique...

    all jokes aside youre far from large to challenge me
    uppercut so hard-
    the bright spots in ya verse are now stars in the galaxy
    showin how i ride, tight on the mic when i spray
    i put my poetry in motion and side swipe you on the highway
    i batter his bladder, blast ya weak shit
    Im hot. smokes just the aftermath of the heat i spit
    keep ya grit, ram's an animal as well as a vandal
    ya tried to be manly got played like mandy and hit wit moore than you can handle
    so take ya tokes, im intangible to this jerk
    put an end to smoke-like a handful of dirt
    i seen ya steez tho, ya not even in my league bro
    matter of fact you 20,000 below like cap'n nemo ho
    you couldnt hurt ram with a virus, i bend females
    and dont need leftover meat to fuckin end trails

    watch these rap ûûûûûs get all up in your guts!!!!!111111111
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  5. M.H.

    M.H. New Member

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    my vote = R.A.M.

    came with consistent punches from beginning to end. Smoke Trail didn't bring anything really noticable.
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  6. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Smoke's best
    ayo man, you a one time winner like them damn skittles
    dawg you couldnt be ill if u was straight out the hospital ||
    Even still, this was too simple to have any impact.

    RAM's best
    i batter his bladder, blast ya weak shit
    Im hot. smokes just the aftermath of the heat i spit

    so take ya tokes, im intangible to this jerk
    put an end to smoke-like a handful of dirt

    you couldnt hurt ram with a virus, i bend females
    and dont need leftover meat to fuckin end trails
    Entrails was sick.

    I got RAM taking this easily. Smoke, you gotta come more clever in your disses. Ram takes this.
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  7. DA SAINT

    DA SAINT New Member

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    Vote =R.A.M

    smoke ur opener was played as hell,not very nice with the punches

    R.A.M nice opener nice with punches,nice ender
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  8. spanky freedom

    spanky freedom ora tour

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    i got RAM on account of wordplay (playd smoke a few times)
    smokes vocab didnt match up, as didnt the flow
    and ram came more imaginative with metaphors and imagery.
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  9. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    i fuckin suck at battlin or somethin i cant win shyt, ..........4/0 to this otha dude
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  10. Aerophobia.

    Aerophobia. Your Afraid

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    vote-ram

    ram just had more witty punches and better concepts & he was more consistant
    all jokes aside youre far from large to challenge me
    uppercut so hard-
    the bright spots in ya verse are now stars in the galaxy
    I liked this. Nice.

    so take ya tokes, im intangible to this jerk
    put an end to smoke-like a handful of dirt
    Nice play off name.

    smoke trail came pretty wack with wack concepts and bad attempts at punches and he needs to elevate
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  11. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    v/ ram

    he took this throughout... harder-hitting punches, better flow and concepts etc.

    smoke came with played concepts
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  12. Yukon & Eyeon.

    Yukon & Eyeon. New Member

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    Vote = R.A.M

    Smoke Trail's punches were mostly play'd, nothin that kept me interested. R.A.M stay'd on point with his punches, a few nice disses, nice flow.
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  13. ILLASTYX

    ILLASTYX SHINNING FINGER !!!!!!!!!

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    vote=ram made it more personal and he had good consistancy
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  14. Pacific

    Pacific your epidermis is showing

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    SmokeTrail

    ayo man, you a one time winner like them damn skittles
    dawg you couldnt be ill if u was straight out the hospital ||
    5/10
    we both have the same number of losses, oh well
    put us up on scale, and watch Ram's side straight fail ||
    6/10
    that line was easy....now its time for me to come sleezy
    but oh wait, your gurl done that, she gave me a freebe ||
    5/10
    haha...i know yall laughin, but this rap shyt isnt a joke
    look at what this fool wrote, wouldnt u hate to be his folks ||
    5/10
    " Im a fag, i love guys and dicks up my fuckin ass" he said
    ayo yall know he's readin this shyt with his face turnin red ||
    5/10
    so like a pimple man, im gunna pop this cat quikly
    he likes to keep it simple..........hes keepin ti straight dickly ||
    6/10
    i declare Law and Order on your fuckin ass, sit the fuck down
    every dude out here has a case on your ass, casue u get around||
    6/10
    so fuck abunch of faggots, i know you probably really straight
    the only debate, is your technique, what a registeration waist ||
    5/10

    final= 43/80


    R.A.M.

    peep the technique...

    all jokes aside youre far from large to challenge me
    uppercut so hard-
    the bright spots in ya verse are now stars in the galaxy
    7.5/10
    showin how i ride, tight on the mic when i spray
    i put my poetry in motion and side swipe you on the highway
    7/10
    i batter his bladder, blast ya weak shit
    Im hot. smokes just the aftermath of the heat i spit
    7/10
    keep ya grit, ram's an animal as well as a vandal
    ya tried to be manly got played like mandy and hit wit moore than you can handle
    6.5/10
    so take ya tokes, im intangible to this jerk
    put an end to smoke-like a handful of dirt
    6.5/10
    i seen ya steez tho, ya not even in my league bro
    matter of fact you 20,000 below like cap'n nemo ho
    8/10
    you couldnt hurt ram with a virus, i bend females
    and dont need leftover meat to fuckin end trails
    8/10

    final= 50.5/70

    vote=RAM. He had better wordplay and flow. I wasn't really feeling any of SmokeTrail's verse, it seemed to have rather basic concepts and lacked the hard hitting punches like RAM had. Favorite line from RAM was the closer probably.
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  15. Roy Jonez

    Roy Jonez 100% Sucka-Free

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    vote=Ram


    that first galaxy line pretty much raped the other cat...no offense....

    and Ram wasnt you in the pba? how the fuck you get 1-3 in the Rbl?? lol
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  16. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Sorry too say smoke...this league isnt in your skill range, you need too elevate more before you can expect to win here....lots of highly skilled emcees here. Not to hate, cuz we all started like that....just keep elevating :)

    V/Ram pretty consistent shit
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  17. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    Well put Oz^^^

    Ram took this easy..just a mismatch..Rams improving,no doubt..came pretty decent..clearly the winner.."The "End Trails" closer was nice...

    Vote=RAM

    PZ..
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  18. L-shade

    L-shade New Member

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    Smoke was way too basic, the basis of a good battler is there but time in the dojo is definetly required, dont worry homes, everyones been there.

    RAM easily the more complex mc here, was especially into the "smokes the aftermath of when i spit" or whatever it was, dat was nice.

    vote = RAM
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  20. BIG-L

    BIG-L My member is platinum

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    bote=ram...nicer punches..keep up at it smoke
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