87 TheBell_Hop 1-0 vs 88 Cassanova Storm 1-0

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yeah aight, whenever u ready dunny

yeah and who the fuck are you supposed to be?


10 lines


get it up quick

When the flame throws…
I’ll torch Cass and his lame prose
For even thinkin about actually tryin to claim those^^
Hops first to brawl…
I’ll prove it to you cuz ya verse appalls
And for what it’s all worth you’re the worst of all
So grit’cha teeth…
It only gets rougher as I grip the piece
Breath stolen you realize your in this bitch for keeps
I’ll mask ya face…
Violate your girl and trash the place
Then pound you till you’re a brainless basket case
Now match the pace…
Shit, just keep up if that’s the case
Proves I’ll do the World a favor puttin Cass to waste
It’s hopeless dude…
I’m so focused I’ll roast ya crew
Put lead through distant Fam’ and those Close to you
Hops smack this slut…
Shatter his ego till it cracks him up
Tortured to the grave, same day that his casket shuts
I’m brutal indeed…
Flows so dope they ruin ya steeze
Ya losin with ease, sad when I’m just shootin the breeze
Straight from the start…
Bullets strip confidence’n’break it apart
So when the heater pops, catch feelings and take em to heart

who am i? if u don't know u better ask somebody.........


what's good with all this tough talk? when your flesh is so delicate and your heart? marshmellow soft//
got the coroner carrying you off, checking your pulse, if life's a bitch then i just filed for your divorce//

get out of line and i'll smack you, bitch take 2, matter fact four cuz i don't want either hand thinking that i favor the other more//

a child should stay in a child's place, therefore when i CHUC my KIE it's child's play all over your face//

you must be blessed, cuz only god got u living with his supportin,
yet and still with my 49er's to ya grill you meet the same fate as ken norton//

dog your ass will always meet defeat, i'm a shoe in.....
have your legs bandaged and battered just like pat ewing//

you trying to make a come up? but it's wrong everything you doing...
you ain't shit, plus bowels is the only thing you moving//

true indeed i really ain't want to hurt her, but like marino i shoot fur (chauffer), the nostril for your demise, swallow each pupil if u don't believe your eyes//

o no thebell_hop bullshit u selling please stop, fo show....cuz i can show you exactly how that shi ca go//

the win that you applying for you just can't get it, niccuh you not a murderer the world all knows that the butler did it//

mutha fucka

clip empty..........

get out of line and i'll smack you, bitch take 2, matter fact four cuz i don't want either hand thinking that i favor the other more//

haha that shit was funny... but


vote-TheBell_hop quite easily

coo battle i guess

peace

ok, this was an average battle, and i dont mean any offence guys when i say that, there is a lot of improving to be done..

Bell hop - that verse was like some shit that would have sounded alright as an audio or an open mic, but it really just has the wrong content for a battle. There were no punches at all, not one.
You have a nice vocab and rhyme scheme, but u have to come with some punches, personals, wordplay etc. to win battles.

Cassanova - stretched lines like a mu'fucka at the start and finsh, that middle section is around the length u want your lines.
You had some punches in there, and they were kinda creative, so props on that, but they were badly worded at the same time.
Your closer was funny, lol.
You just need a hell of a lot of refining..

vote = Cassanova, just because he had some punches..

^this was all intended as constructive criticism guys, no beef or anything stupid like that, im not dope at battles, and dont claim to be, but i know how to write them, so hopefully u can learn and take advice and get better..

if u would like to drop a vote on my battle hit this up

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=646155

pz dooks

LoL....Ummm

Cas got this, I guess he had a punch or two, where as Hop I didnt see one.

Vote - Cas.

funny you say I have no punches and then i can point out 5

btw, i know how to write battle verses, i've been doing this a while. so X Sample, honestly, you should be taking notes, not trying to teach

Sabath VII, go fucking hang yourself


2-1 Cassanova, because people are fucking morons

this is my one UP

..............

My bad IV.

Wow, I must be reading a different battle then the rest of you... cause I got TBH takin this easy.

Cass came with some stretched lines.. nothing really caught my eye

TBH's multi's did it alone

vote- The Bell_Hop

yea

Bell did win


but he acts like such a net thug

Well this wasnt one of my favorite battles to read.. TheBell-Hop's style isnt really what I'm used to readin, I just cant get into it.. plus the punches arent really focused on hard hittin shit, more just multis and shit.. Cassanova, I dunno how is winning.. the favor you more line was pretty dope actually.. Bell's verse had a few played out concepts.. Shootin the breeze has been used by everybody and their mother, take em to heart lines, and basket case lines are all old - and you didnt flip em nicely..

Anyways, I wasnt feelin either verse really.. but TheBell-Hop definately did win..

Vote = TheBell-Hop

I like TBH's style for some reason. Good shit

Bell's style is sick, I love the flow. He took this easily. I don't know what the fuck battle ya'll were reading, his shit was pretty nice.

Vote - Bell

fuck that shit, let me be the first to say ain't none of that dickriding shit going on cuz this bell hop niccuh getting mad and shit, second warloxx what the fuck is wrong with u. son u say my brotha had a ill verse and u aint feeling tbh then u give him the vote. lmao i ain't swaying but i do look out for mine's. sorry bruh but i know u wasn't gon' say shit. only ill cat that voted so far i know of is copy anyways. up this shit.

good lord u are ignorant..i was trying to help u and u still take offence, fuckin netcee thugs..

and they were NOT punches, wack ass...fuck being nice, ill say it straight, you basically have no chance of ever succeding here ...

there we go....loser

btws, im one of the most honest voters u will find in the RBL and i always appraise both verses fairly....... and yet u still hate,

damn

The Bell Hop wins

TheBell Hop 2-0
C. Storm 1-1