87. Da Dime 0-2 vs 88. Thuglove 0-2

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Da Dime

    Da Dime 'Da' 'D'evils 'I'n 'ME'

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    iight...i'm here , i'll drop tha links to tha votez on other battlez once they get started
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  3. Da Dime

    Da Dime 'Da' 'D'evils 'I'n 'ME'

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    Fuck It...Let Me Drop , since I'm here , 10 bars 20 lines..call it wuteva

    Dime run up on you like "BITCH" gimmie tha cash 'n' ya ID , or result to slugs restin in ya gut while you strapped to tha IV

    iight , nuff playin...

    You can diss on my name to score-threads , but can't call Dime a homo...cuz ya moms give me more 'dome' than 'fore-heads'//1
    mistaken a Dyme for Dime?? get tha word-right , how i'm a chick when my name fills tha 'father slot' on ya birth-right//2
    suckin a dick wit tha rubber on is tha only time you spit-text(laytex condem) , on this site yah gonna 'C'(see) me , like join'in a 'crip-set'//3
    Dogz...you a faggot and i'm tha type to abuse-dikes , this homo done 'tossed his salad' worst than 'vegaterian food-fights'//4
    me droppin these flows is equal to lava and magma-fills , you a thug?? pleaseee!!! you only 'hard' from a lotta 'viagra-pills'//5
    got 2 losses cuz Dime had to handle beef in tha pro's , while this fake thug only handles his beef on tha stove//6
    Dahm!!! all these MC battlez i'm glad to read , cuz i proves yah 'couldn't smoke Dime' if i was a 'bag of weed'//7
    its alwayz me BITCH hype'in the track , wit punchlines so hard...you would think Tyson could rap//8
    Dime a player...its easy I jus let tha mac get-them , ask ya girl..how my nut 'blessed her forehead' like 'Baptism'//9

    But to top it off...this little n.igg.a is still involved in school-grades , while Dime's give'in 'hard-punches' like 'pourin liquor in Kool-aid'//10

    MUTHAFUCKAZ
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  4. Thuglove

    Thuglove Set it up Bitch....

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    lol funny stuff
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  5. Thuglove

    Thuglove Set it up Bitch....

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    Put the Snub to Your Mug, And Watch your Face Aviate//
    Decapitate you and use your remains for shark bait//
    If your Looking for the Next Kevorkian im the perfect candidate//
    You've seen me in battle you gotta admit my works impressive//
    Pull out the "Rocket" launcher so i keep the mood Fesitive//
    Find your Neck Fractured, You Liver torn out by a pack of Hungry Raptors//
    Naw on your Neck, till your blood vessels rupture//
    Watch the Buzzards and Vultures Circle around this rappers Cadaver//
    This Mc's Is a Square, Take that Dick Out your Ear so you can Hear My Clear//
    Im tha Pharoh of tha desert, call me Annibus, My blows will be all over you so call me the tatooist//
    Your Rhymes is Irrelevent, Put the Canon To your dome so i could give you spacial intelligence//
    Rip out your wind pipe, With swiss knife, Wrap a Rubber Band Around it so you can Flow (Blood Circulation) Tight//
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  6. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Full breakdown.

    Dime
    You can diss on my name to score-threads , but can't call Dime a homo...cuz ya moms give me more 'dome' than 'fore-heads'//1
    Elementary but a decent diss.
    mistaken a Dyme for Dime?? get tha word-right , how i'm a chick when my name fills tha 'father slot' on ya birth-right//2
    Same as before but a solid diss.
    suckin a dick wit tha rubber on is tha only time you spit-text(laytex condem) , on this site yah gonna 'C'(see) me , like join'in a 'crip-set'//3
    Don't explauin stuff in parenthesis. Should just put C there and don't do stuff like Laytex=text. It'll never score points.
    Dogz...you a faggot and i'm tha type to abuse-dikes , this homo done 'tossed his salad' worst than 'vegaterian food-fights'//4
    That was hot. Lose the ' marks though. Dope flow.
    me droppin these flows is equal to lava and magma-fills , you a thug?? pleaseee!!! you only 'hard' from a lotta 'viagra-pills'//5
    Again. Dope flow. Punch is kinda elementary here with hard. But it has a rawness to it. Works.
    got 2 losses cuz Dime had to handle beef in tha pro's , while this fake thug only handles his beef on tha stove//6
    Beef is starting to get played. But this has a little rawness to it.
    Dahm!!! all these MC battlez i'm glad to read , cuz i proves yah 'couldn't smoke Dime' if i was a 'bag of weed'//7
    Fire right there. Great brag line.
    its alwayz me BITCH hype'in the track , wit punchlines so hard...you would think Tyson could rap//8
    Coo. Kinda simple but effective.
    Dime a player...its easy I jus let tha mac get-them , ask ya girl..how my nut 'blessed her forehead' like 'Baptism'//9
    Dope flow. Funny diss to his girl.
    But to top it off...this little n.igg.a is still involved in school-grades , while Dime's give'in 'hard-punches' like 'pourin liquor in Kool-aid'//10
    This is horrible only because you used a "punch" punch 2 lines ago. Decent as a closer.

    Thuglove
    Put the Snub to Your Mug, And Watch your Face Aviate//
    Decapitate you and use your remains for shark bait//
    Decent flow. No real diss.
    If your Looking for the Next Kevorkian im the perfect candidate//
    Decent brag line. Nothing spectacular.
    You've seen me in battle you gotta admit my works impressive//
    Pull out the "Rocket" launcher so i keep the mood Fesitive//
    Nothing special here. How does a rocket launcher keep stuff festive?
    Find your Neck Fractured, You Liver torn out by a pack of Hungry Raptors//
    Naw on your Neck, till your blood vessels rupture//
    You gonna diss him or eat him?
    Watch the Buzzards and Vultures Circle around this rappers Cadaver//
    This Mc's Is a Square, Take that Dick Out your Ear so you can Hear My Clear//
    This doesn't work. What are you doing?
    Im tha Pharoh of tha desert, call me Annibus, My blows will be all over you so call me the tatooist//
    Your Rhymes is Irrelevent, Put the Canon To your dome so i could give you spacial intelligence//
    None of this even rhymes.
    Rip out your wind pipe, With swiss knife, Wrap a Rubber Band Around it so you can Flow (Blood Circulation) Tight//
    This doesn't work.

    Dime took this blindfolded. Thug, you got a lot of work to do. Need to focus more on dissing your opponent instead of braggadocio and violence...that stuff is only good for like 4-8 lines.
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  7. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    I cant vote on this, sorry, but somehow i read both verses,

    Dyme, ya whole verse is to 1995 punchline wise, all that shit has been said an flipped a million times.

    thuglove, man, that was horrible, Ariz gave u a decnt breakdown for the most part, ima leave it at that.
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  8. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    Da Dime - "Fore-head" line was an ok opener. The flow was nice throughout, the "vegetarian" line was one I was feeling too. All in all a pretty decent verse.

    Thuglove - Wasn't really feeling this, some of it didn't rhyme which threw off the flow. The concepts weren't too complex n' just didn't grab my attention. Try adding some wordplay n' like Catz mentioned not so much bragging and violence.


    Goodluck to you both. My vote = Dime
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  9. MiStA aRsOnIsT

    MiStA aRsOnIsT New Member

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    Vote: Dime

    Dime: you're horrible...u'll prolly never win another battle in RBL, ur just luck IV matches u up against the WAckest kid in here

    ThugLuv: u just plain out suck homie..im sorry to be so rude but its true

    And neither of u used IV in ur verse
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  10. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    v- dime

    he through punches, even though his scheme was terrible
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  11. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    Vote= Dime

    Dime's shit was poor..but Thugs verse was downout homeless.
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  12. in awe

    in awe solo

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    most of dimes shit has been said fifty times over, but thugs verse sounded like a topical it was all imagery no real hard hitting punches.

    vote-dime
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  13. MuDFo0t

    MuDFo0t GooseBumps

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    both of you suck im not gonna sugar coat it but dyme sucks the least bit and has decent flow, so my vote goes to the many with a females name.

    Dyme
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  14. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Dime got it wit structure alone, but also had better punches..

    vote - dime
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  15. HighPawTheCyst

    HighPawTheCyst New Member

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    vote dime easily, his verse was well structured and had some nice lines as well, flow shaky at times but i liked it, thug, was rather simplistic, all i can say is keep practicing, you'll get better, but you were out-matched here


    vote - dime
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  16. klobb sixteen

    klobb sixteen New Member

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    Vote dime


    ooverall he had the better verse
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  17. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    vote = da dime
    overmatched his opponent.

    thuglove u could use some work. homey had a good breakdown of ya verse, hit me up if you want to work on some things...

    peace.
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  18. Yuno Alwin

    Yuno Alwin ..as usual

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    it was horrible to read these stretched ass bars niccas but....i vote for dime....I saw at leasnt 1 or 2 attempts at a punch

    vote-da Dime
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  19. hazmat.

    hazmat. New Member

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    vote-dime

    both structures were very horrible and both peoples punches have been played for the longest..but dime had this with more of an effort at punches and everything else
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    dime had betetr everything

    thuglove is just wack..he didnt come with anything..
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  20. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Da Dime had a couple coo lines, but a lot of em were real played. The concepts were weak, but at least you came clever. You might wanna switch up ya structure though.

    Thuglove jus didnt come witty enough. His lines werent funny. Dime takes this for bein more witty.

    Vote: Da Dime
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