85. Czarkastrophee 6-4 vs. 86. Orthodox

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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  3. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    who's your daddy?
    im doing 16 sonny.
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  4. Rated-Are

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    i went a lil overboard & did 18 .. sue me.

    This shit could make or break u, but honest son I hate fronting.
    But if you try & get in front .. I’ll just make u break something.
    On ur way u take lunches in pokemon boxes as u hop to skool.
    I bet Ur one of them kids who’s in it so much ..
    .. u think the inside of a lockers cool.
    ur pops a fool .. & you’re just a year off of the pre-teen topics.
    & I bet money the chick from team rocket ..
    .. makes ur little thing rocket.
    lil teen stop it .. im godly, it’s strange these heathens ell enter.
    But son you’re so young .. I bet you’re still breathing placenta.
    The kid is so proper too .. always ready to rock & sock a fool.
    I play to pocket funds .. while you’re busy playing pocket pool.
    stop it fool - but on a side note .. I get high as the rockets do.
    I got it locked & proved, it’ll take a lot to win ..
    - cause u got a lot to lose.
    & yeah ..
    - I got it locked but dude, ur my bitch .. Im sposed to hump ya.
    But if u play me I’ll have every other fish in the ocean jump ya.
    You dance to a different tune .. but it’s clever you spoke clown.
    But my melodies will hokey pokey on whatever you wrote down.
    U broke clown just sit back while I wreak dismay on ur writtens.
    Cause ..
    - it’s harder to beat me than it is to say my name in a sentence.
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  5. Calorie

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    My boy Orth will merk that
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  6. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    Yea, I'm gonna start keying now.
    Lol.
    Don't expect 18.
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  7. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    riiiiight .. & you are?
    i thought so .. back in line panzie.

    & just for the record,
    your vote wont count.
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  8. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    Yea, Cal, don't vote..damn groupies :)

    That's your best? You need to try harder for tight
    Czar's talent is life-like, and Orth is larger than life
    With some fake ass personals and ya punches ain't doin shit
    My skill towers over yours so much I got a birds eye view of it
    Coming with a verse like that, you ain't fit to wage war dude
    Voters came to see the best, but they might read yours too
    ^And that's if you're lucky bitch, your shit ain't grimey son
    You got that throwback style though, punches I saw in '91
    I'm here to merk you, now you know my calling is deep
    Not just voters, even your style looks like its falling asleep
    What can I say about this, I guess you're beating was due
    You shoulda stopped at the 2nd line like people reading will do

    No need to waste 18.
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  9. 730..

    730.. Hi.....

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    Vote Orthadox....

    Czar had a very simple type way of rhyming your punches were all over the place and really weren't connecting, you had the flow and some wordplay but you weren't hittin with anything

    Orthadox came with some nice clean hit, the best-Might line was nice...the closer was koo but there's also a few concepts in ya verse i seen flipped alot......

    overall it was a koo battle but kinda onesided in Orthadox's position.....
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  10. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    so the generic punch groupies strike again .. whatever.

    0 - 1 Orth
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  11. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    LOL
    How can I get personal when I don't know who you are??
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  12. DIVINITY FLOWZ

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    This shit could make or break u, but honest son I hate fronting.
    But if you try & get in front .. I’ll just make u break something.
    eehh

    On ur way u take lunches in pokemon boxes as u hop to skool.
    I bet Ur one of them kids who’s in it so much ..
    .. u think the inside of a lockers cool.
    nice...

    ur pops a fool .. & you’re just a year off of the pre-teen topics.
    & I bet money the chick from team rocket ..
    .. makes ur little thing rocket.
    that was weak and stupid, but still had me laughing

    lil teen stop it .. im godly, it’s strange these heathens ell enter.
    But son you’re so young .. I bet you’re still breathing placenta.
    nice one... you need to move past the youngsta lines tho

    The kid is so proper too .. always ready to rock & sock a fool.
    I play to pocket funds .. while you’re busy playing pocket pool.
    eeehhh

    stop it fool - but on a side note .. I get high as the rockets do.
    I got it locked & proved, it’ll take a lot to win ..
    - cause u got a lot to lose.
    nice flow... no punch

    & yeah ..
    - I got it locked but dude, ur my bitch .. Im sposed to hump ya.
    But if u play me I’ll have every other fish in the ocean jump ya.
    eehhh

    You dance to a different tune .. but it’s clever you spoke clown.
    But my melodies will hokey pokey on whatever you wrote down.
    that was kinda weak

    U broke clown just sit back while I wreak dismay on ur writtens.
    Cause ..
    - it’s harder to beat me than it is to say my name in a sentence.
    nice closer

    ok verse overall... a couple of funny lines, but mostly filler


    Orth

    That's your best? You need to try harder for tight
    Czar's talent is life-like, and Orth is larger than life
    eehh opener

    With some fake ass personals and ya punches ain't doin shit
    My skill towers over yours so much I got a birds eye view of it
    cool

    Coming with a verse like that, you ain't fit to wage war dude
    Voters came to see the best, but they might read yours too
    lol... nice

    ^And that's if you're lucky bitch, your shit ain't grimey son
    You got that throwback style though, punches I saw in '91
    niceness

    I'm here to merk you, now you know my calling is deep
    Not just voters, even your style looks like its falling asleep
    cool

    What can I say about this, I guess you're beating was due
    You shoulda stopped at the 2nd line like people reading will do
    cool closer

    Vote Orth... way more direct punches and they hit a lot harder
    Czar... needed more content.. good flow and nice lines and word play, but too much filler
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  13. PHOSSIL

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    czarkastrophee - wasn't feelin any of the little kid disses. "placenta" line was cool, i could be a smart ass about that line though. "a lot to win/lose" is worthy. the idea of fish jumping him is funny to a disadvantage. czarkastrophee had an average verse <--sentence.

    orthodoxx - kept it simple. don't feel like listin punchlines, but there were 4 lines that seperated you from winning by a hair and winning. every other line didn't do much to detract my vote.


    vote - orthodoxx
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  14. Dzyone.

    Dzyone. the fresh prints

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    V/Orthodox.
    Just came better with some cool hits.
    Czarkastrophee didnt have much of anything.
    Most of his verse was just filler.
    So i got Orthodox hee.
    pz.
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  15. Just Rich

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    VOTE=Orthodox

    i duno if it was just his style but i wasnt feelin Cz's verse as much, ok it was 18lines, but it was mostly filler, maybe u tried too hard? jst let it flow nxt time, quit wit the multis, its a battle, go for the personal punches, u had a couple of nice lines...but orths was more readable n even tho he used wayyy less lines, he pretty much killed it. nice shit.
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  16. QUEEN ICESIKill

    QUEEN ICESIKill Wet Dream/Worst Nightmare

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    damn.................

    CZAR your shit was to long for me. it seemed as though u were just talking. your punches werent really strong, they were just regular. you could have easily just cut that shit to 10 lines, got right to the point, with nothing but hot shit, and u could have one. i just wasnt feelin it. and to tell u the truth, after reading ur opening, i didnt want to read the rest.

    ORTHODOXX nice shit. u kept it short and 2 the point. u said what u had to say, threw ur punches, and got the shit over with. also, ur ending was tyte, i could relate to it. cause i cant even lie, i didnt wanna finish reading his verse, but i did. nice shit

    vote - ORTHODOXX
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  17. Rated-Are

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    damn .. first time for everything huh?

    never been shut out before

    good shit Orth, i wont be a dick about it
    you killed me, i thought u were wack .. oh well.

    until next time.
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  18. Touch1

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    vote ortho
    flow was better
    and he dropped punchs
    czar was just throwing nothing
    nio reall solid lines came from him
    zp
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  19. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    I guess you don't battle much then.
    ;)
    Anyway, yea atleast you're not a sore loser.
    Expect to see me in top 30 soon.
    Nice battle..
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  20. KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican

    KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican B L a C k A tt I C u S

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    some noteable lines in both verses, but Czar's joint just didn't "flow well".

    Orth came to merk and did so:
    Coming with a verse like that, you ain't fit to wage war dude
    Voters came to see the best, but they might read yours too
    ^And that's if you're lucky bitch, your shit ain't grimey son
    You got that throwback style though, punches I saw in '91

    Those lines had me rollin'.....good way to sweep it out.

    vote - orth
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