81 Ribonclease 0-1 vs 82 Ring

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  2. Ring

    Ring ...

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    in, 10-12 good homie?
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  3. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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  4. Ring

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    You an ugly bitch..beauty rest? cuz really dawg, you need it
    No wonder you're always gettin' slept on, like a sealy posturpedic
    You're lost see bitch, look like ya writing in pure fear
    This battles gonna be as slanted, as the dudes eyes in korea
    Not to mention i'm witty with words, i'm the hardest as well
    I saw your punchless verse last week..
    And you'd have a much better chance in the RSTL
    I'm quick to bust clips, ya see trails
    I'll bring death in one click, like i'm sendin' an e-mail
    No point in tryin' here, shoulda just let this ho-go verse
    Fuck it, I coulda posted 4 lines to his 10, and beat him with a no-show verse
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  5. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    No show? Fuck that homo, watch me steal the ring like Froto
    Ill surround~this~guy, bitch check astoundin~rhymes,
    my 'punch lines' are the reason for the 'ring's around~his~eyes
    Crossing~me? not even with skates on a hockey~team
    the way that rocky~swings you get fucked up in boxing~rings
    This fagget~leans, check the things that hazard~brings
    you wouldn't be up on me if hanging from saturns~rings
    You order~the~mean, you should know its sort~of~obscene,
    your cheaper than the rings people cop out of quarter~machines
    Your rhymes are weak as fuck, my spits just drowned~him~mostly
    He couldn't win if this shit was 'ring'~around~the~rosey,
    You bring~a~sound~thats phoney, I swing~n~pound~Gabronis
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  6. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    Ring --

    You an ugly bitch..beauty rest? cuz really dawg, you need it
    No wonder you're always gettin' slept on, like a sealy posturpedic

    oh shit that was nice lol

    You're lost see bitch, look like ya writing in pure fear
    This battles gonna be as slanted, as the dudes eyes in korea

    lmfao nice

    Not to mention i'm witty with words, i'm the hardest as well
    I saw your punchless verse last week..
    And you'd have a much better chance in the RSTL

    okay

    I'm quick to bust clips, ya see trails
    I'll bring death in one click, like i'm sendin' an e-mail

    pretty nice

    No point in tryin' here, shoulda just let this ho-go verse
    Fuck it, I coulda posted 4 lines to his 10, and beat him with a no-show verse

    meh...not too good of a closer...





    Rib --

    No show? Fuck that homo, watch me steal the ring like Froto
    Ill surround~this~guy, bitch check astoundin~rhymes,

    started off good but meh..

    my 'punch lines' are the reason for the 'ring's around~his~eyes
    Crossing~me? not even with skates on a hockey~team

    first line was good, second meh.

    the way that rocky~swings you get fucked up in boxing~rings
    This fagget~leans, check the things that hazard~brings

    pretty decent...

    you wouldn't be up on me if hanging from saturns~rings
    You order~the~mean, you should know its sort~of~obscene,

    okay..

    your cheaper than the rings people cop out of quarter~machines
    Your rhymes are weak as fuck, my spits just drowned~him~mostly

    the ring shit's getting old...meh

    He couldn't win if this shit was 'ring'~around~the~rosey,
    You bring~a~sound~thats phoney, I swing~n~pound~Gabronis

    that made no sense really... the ending lol made no sense dude

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    This was pretty funny since I think Ring got it... and all Rib could come at him with were ring lines lmaaaao. And the fact that ring went 11 lines and rib went 12... it shoulda been a DQ match, but none-the-less Ring took this easily. Better flow and all with harder punches... meh nothing too good. And all rib had were useless multies. Keep up the good work.

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  7. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Unimpressive match, a lot of played concepts back and forth. But, Ring was more creative than Rib. Rib you gotta come wittier than that, and don't use any dashes or squigglies, we know what multies are. You need to concentrate less on the multies and more on bringin a hard punch. Don't ever sacrifice content for flow, the punches are more important than anything.

    vote - Ring
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  8. Roddy

    Roddy Well-Known Member

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    vote rib

    reason..iliked the constant ring comments.. they were clever... and he had soooooooooomany of them..lol... it impressed me..

    goodbattleoverall..entertaining yes
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  9. -silencer-

    -silencer- shut up

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    I read Ring's verse...I automatically assumed he was gonna lose...until I read Rib's verse, it was even duller...there were no quotables in this battle. Pretty weak, but I guess you both are just starting out, so I'm not gonna hate. Keep at it.

    Vote - Ring
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  10. vote-ring

    he had some witty lines
    and he came at you stronger

    i feel dat you focused on the ring subject just a little to much

    good shyt tho

    i just felt that he kinda knocked you out a bit in most catogories

    vote-ring
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  11. MC Uncle Jesse

    MC Uncle Jesse Better rapper than joey

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    err. ribo had it .thats a verse man. good shit. this is what i'm talking about. he used multies and punched. Its like people can't understand a concept verse .the way you switched the "ring" meanings...great. never got old for me cuz he used it so differently. That was the point but nevermind. pfft kids
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  12. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    Vote - Ring


    both had some some shots, unfortunately a lot that I saw was ish that I recently wrote myself and others have flipped a lot of done already. So creativeness was defiantely lacking on both sides... But, wasn't feeling the rhyme scheme Ribo was going for.....

    Stay up both.
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  13. Im Pissed

    Im Pissed No Your Not

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    Vote - Ring

    He just came a little better in my eyes. Both had an ok flow.. but Ring was just connecting more than Rib and I think he just came harder. I mean nothing impressive by both but. Ring def won this one.
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  14. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    You an ugly bitch..beauty rest? cuz really dawg, you need it
    No wonder you're always gettin' slept on, like a sealy posturpedic


    I see you brung out the extended lines..Had to think of that word huh...

    anyway good enough to win...the slanted eye line was okay but basic..


    The other guy was eh to me...might of sound good in audio but nothing special

    my vote Ring
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  15. Super.

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    rofl that was horrible rib, newbie fuck. ya need to elevate on the real, none of that verse was real good, or remotely decent


    You an ugly bitch..beauty rest? cuz really dawg, you need it
    No wonder you're always gettin' slept on, like a sealy posturpedic

    hah....that was pretty clever and nice ring. rest was straight..


    v/ring
    he was on another level. he wasnt a newbie, like rib. rib used ~ in his verse..sad.
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  16. CaLiRiFiiC

    CaLiRiFiiC New Member

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    this was a blah battle... didnt really like niether verse that much...ring got this one tho

    V/ring
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  17. -Oz-

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    Ring Wins
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