81. Mr. Ego 1-0 vs 82. Smelly Dude 1-0

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Serge dot T, Sep 23, 2003.

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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  3. Mr. Ego

    Mr. Ego Swallow my Kids

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  4. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    quik key for ya...decided to go 12

    This newbie thought he knew me….focus
    N this herb gags at the guts shots, like newbie smokers


    Dear Mr. Ego…
    I hate newbies, go ahead and spit ure Blanding flows, and
    His punches are wack,
    N when he drops his pants, the only time he gets standing oh’s man..
    Think he owns man?, then step to me boldly
    n I heard he was wack, that’s even wut his verse told me..
    Let’s get the dice rolling, 81st and bout to get a 1 in the loss column?
    Dayum son,
    I don’t even got to battle him, looks like the odds got ‘um..
    I’m plottin’ at the thread door, go in, but this
    Gay can’t catch a joke,
    So u won’t find him throwin’ punches..
    This bitch just can’t catch a break, n no buddy knows
    His punches are wack, period,
    But it seems this bitch can bloody flow..
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  5. Mr. Ego

    Mr. Ego Swallow my Kids

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    you can't be serious, c'mon now..



    you'll be plottin to leave as Im coppin the lead
    with your skills,
    you should act as IV n just battle in the topical league
    ugly bitch, you aint worth 1 noun that's used
    so grusome, even the face of the earth frowned at you
    get it? you're a noone and noone wants to peep yours
    your verses got me wishing they made a stop button for keyboards
    got guns wit infas - leave you on the d/l, G
    cause ya head'll get the red light special like TLC
    now he know, Im arrogant for certain
    but we both got egos, difference is I actually deserve it
    remember Solecism Destiny? bitch dont front no mo'
    You cant live up to ya threats since SD died months ago


    2-0, that easy.
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  6. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    this was close i thought..

    smelly u came aiight, but that style is holding u down, some of the top vets even have trouble making that shit work..
    your 'odds' line was prolly your best, keep working at it you'll get better..

    Mr ego, decent verse, you came with some good punches and basically kept the disses coming at a better rate than smelly, i think you took this..

    vote = Mr. Ego

    and we're having trouble gettting votes in our battle so if u could drop an honest vote it would be appreciated

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=642299

    thanks
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  7. Mr. Ego

    Mr. Ego Swallow my Kids

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  8. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    good battle man
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  9. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    Vote Mr. Ego His Shit was Put together Better.
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  10. Acanthus

    Acanthus Member

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    Ego-
    your verses got me wishing they made a stop button for keyboards

    got guns wit infas - leave you on the d/l, G
    cause ya head'll get the red light special like TLC

    verse full of disses... not much metaphors or similies... had better concrete disses tho...flow was ok.... i didn't like some stuff u used to rhyme like

    you'll be plottin to leave as Im coppin the lead
    with your skills,
    you should act as IV n just battle in the topical league<< what rhymed.. i'm guessin lead/league...

    Smelly Dude-

    some of ur lines are really stretched and throws the flow away. You used wack to many times in your verse.

    Gay can’t catch a joke,
    So u won’t find him throwin’ punches..<< dope concept, but would of been more effective if you reworded it better...

    had alot of fillers in there...

    vote: Mr. Ego


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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7374062
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  11. Tony Elbow

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    mr. ego killed the smelly dude..mostly coz most of his punches were straightforward and witty, smelly seemed like he could do better, had most of the concepts of battlin down, needs to work on punches....Ego I liked a lot of your lines:
    got guns wit infas - leave you on the d/l, G
    cause ya head'll get the red light special like TLC
    ^^I like that gun shit even if everyone else thinks it's played

    Vote: Mr. Ego
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  12. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    Ego wins

    Ego 2-0
    Smelly 1-1
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