81. J- Nice 1-1 vs 82. Smelly Dude 1-1

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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  4. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    ..coming to a store near you soon.(in his sig)
    ^^^LMAO

    ure wack; im bout to end this
    n cuz of you.
    the store nearest me; just went outta business
    this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
    but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
    he knock'd out; cuz he's a gay mess
    n it'll be a streatch if he wins; wit the way he lay text
    he can't handle me; walk all over him, i kill people
    n he's gay; that's why j-walkin's illegal
    it end's bad; leave this rebel dead
    n wit all these bullets.
    make u say no to rap; n make you a metal head


    sumphin i key'd real fast
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  5. i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
    and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
    get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
    cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
    you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
    but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
    of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
    but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
    crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
    'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
    leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
    and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk..

    blah.
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  6. let's get some votes..
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  7. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    Uh, ooooohkaaaay..


    J-Nyce got this pretty easy. This was even more of a murder than that Nintendo battle. He had already won with that second line. But yo, I'm getting a bit tired of seeing this RM punchline setup: "You are (or ain't) this.. or this, or this or this.." Shit gets old.. And if you do use it, don't do it more than once in your verse man. But I like the second line a lot.
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  8. DA SAINT

    DA SAINT New Member

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    nice battle it was ot a murder cuz they both had nice punches

    Favorites:

    j nyce=i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
    and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..

    get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
    cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys

    omg those two were nice

    Smelly dude=ure wack; im bout to end this
    n cuz of you.
    the store nearest me; just went outta business

    this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
    but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me

    it end's bad; leave this rebel dead
    n wit all these bullets.
    make u say no to rap; n make you a metal head

    niiiice

    vote smelly due to more punches but your flow wasnt as nice as j nyce
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  9. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    j's niceness:
    get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
    cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
    you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
    but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
    of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
    but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
    leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
    and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk..

    nice flow and use of multi's...

    smelly's niceness:
    he knock'd out; cuz he's a gay mess
    n it'll be a streatch if he wins; wit the way he lay text
    it end's bad; leave this rebel dead
    n wit all these bullets.
    make u say no to rap; n make you a metal head

    vote - j nyce

    return the favor and vote on theFRANCHISE v. Post Office
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  10. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    SMELLY DUDE

    ure wack; im bout to end this
    n cuz of you.
    the store nearest me; just went outta business
    (ok line, coulda come up wit a better 1)

    this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
    but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
    (weak)

    he knock'd out; cuz he's a gay mess
    n it'll be a streatch if he wins; wit the way he lay text
    (weak)

    he can't handle me; walk all over him, i kill people
    n he's gay; that's why j-walkin's illegal
    it end's bad; leave this rebel dead
    n wit all these bullets.
    make u say no to rap; n make you a metal head
    (nope, very weak)
    3/10

    J-NYCE

    i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
    and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
    (you already won. nice opener)

    get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
    cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
    (ehh, didnt like this)

    you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
    but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
    (nah, this either)

    of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
    but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
    crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
    'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
    leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
    and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk..
    (your first 2 lines were iiight, the rest was pretty weak)

    5/10

    vote/ J-Nyce
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  11. Hells Angel

    Hells Angel New Member

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    vote - j nice

    he took this battle overall with just better lines...

    it was by no means a blowout, but i was just feelin j more. i liked the jordan line though ive seen it done before with different players. and i liked his opener.

    by contrast, smelly's opener was cool, but i wasnt feelin the other lines more than i felt J's



    return the favor

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=649899
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  12. uppin for votes..
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  13. Pretty Missez

    Pretty Missez way better than ROC-C

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    both of you could of been better, but i think that J had the overall better verse in this one

    vote= J nice
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  14. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  15. Mr. Nice Guy

    Mr. Nice Guy New Member

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    imma vote for smelly dude simply cuz J-Nice's style is so fuckin outplayed it's not even funny.

    but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
    and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk..
    ^I'm so fuckin sick of lines like that. U would think people would've stopped that by now but obviously not. 1 of em is ok, when u use 2 in a verse you have no creativity at all. Anyone can think up that bullshit

    V-Smelly Dude, not good, but J-Nice is wack.
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    X sample New Member

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  17. Edgar. Poe

    Edgar. Poe New Member

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    This was easily J Nice-

    Smelly Dude u shouldnt of keyed ur verse.

    he had better everything
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  18. get the fuck outta here, you wack piece of shit.

    my entire verse was better than anything you've ever keyed in the rbl, and you're just angered because you lack any creativity to come with any of those type of lines..

    rofl at you voting against me cause i voted against your garbage ass in your battle..

    get a grip, you wack fuck.
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  19. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    smelly:
    metal head ok,l store nice... had aa decent verse

    I got a disagree, all I saw was played shit in J's verse

    v- smelly
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  20. Sidneh Bihar

    Sidneh Bihar New Member

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    Ill lines underlined

    ..coming to a store near you soon.(in his sig)
    ^^^LMAO

    ure wack; im bout to end this
    n cuz of you.
    the store nearest me; just went outta business
    this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
    but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
    he knock'd out; cuz he's a gay mess
    n it'll be a streatch if he wins; wit the way he lay text
    he can't handle me; walk all over him, i kill people
    n he's gay; that's why j-walkin's illegal
    it end's bad; leave this rebel dead
    n wit all these bullets.
    make u say no to rap; n make you a metal head


    sumphin i key'd real fast


    i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
    and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
    get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
    cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
    you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
    but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
    of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
    but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
    crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
    'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
    leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
    and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk..

    blah.

    VOTE=J-nice
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