79. Narcotic 0-1 vs. 80. Al Murder U 0-1

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  2. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    who the fuck is narcotic?


    eh


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  3. NSD da Psycho Assassin

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  4. Al Murder U

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    verse goes here 10/6




    this muhfucka think's he's smart, well i've got my thang aim'd and cocked
    gonna fill his brain with shots just to derail his train of thought
    dog, you aint that hot, nodody's feelin ya flows, dude...
    we lookin for skills and can't see you, or feel you, cause you're gonna be O-2
    i'll leave a whole in ya skull dude, you dont wanna test me with gats
    i'm the type to watch you rap on stage, and then when ya done proceed to clap
    this geek is wack, he's awful, but i'm awful violent
    the type to jus flip and hide narcotics where the dogs cant find him
    that was an awful rhyme man, you aint skilled well with the flows
    how the fuck you gonna name yaself narcotics and still fail to be dope?


    muhfucka..
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  5. NSD da Psycho Assassin

    NSD da Psycho Assassin New Member

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    mine

    *cocks the gun

    *uncocks

    I'm scared pissless of this killer behinde the glass
    What's he gonna do, shove a cpu virus up my ass?
    Killer? Alice is dead once his computer is turned off
    The only 9mm he busts his when he jerks off
    Al you don't have any fans, so of course your hot
    But still afraid to cross me like a left only orthodox (right hand boxing stance)
    And it's ok, you can tell us your homosexual secret
    The cardboard box doesn't have any closets for you to keep it
    And your aloud to quit bragg'n of the magnum on ya shelf
    Cuz you only popped shit the first time you fingered ya self

    *boy friend screams and calls cops
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  6. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    up 4 votes...


    links here...
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  7. Jot Flames

    Jot Flames I Wish I Was Al Murder U

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    both closers were ill......anyway both rappers came pretty tight...both came at each other talking about how fake they are..but Narcotics verse was funnier....Al murder isn't going to shoot anybody.....so my

    Vote/ Narc
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  8. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  9. Reflexx

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    Narc took this one easily...i've seen al murder u come a bit harder then this, you just gotta come more consistent. The punches were mediocre on both sides, but narc came with more consistancy.

    Vote -- Narc
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  10. Roddy

    Roddy Well-Known Member

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    vote - al murder you

    reason - i just felt his verse more.. all that gun shit bored me and i wasnt impressed at all..i like the 0-2 line, that was pretty clever, nice play on the name... i just enjoyed this verse better..1
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  11. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    if i cant vote on ur battle w/ mike, u cant vote on any of mine.


    i aint gonna count that.



    1-1, up.
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  12. NSD da Psycho Assassin

    NSD da Psycho Assassin New Member

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    ^---what in great blue fuck?
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  13. GammoN

    GammoN Sole Survivor of the DOJO

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    Hark! A vote is swayed!!!!
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  14. NSD da Psycho Assassin

    NSD da Psycho Assassin New Member

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    Hold up... am I missing something here?
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  15. Jot Flames

    Jot Flames I Wish I Was Al Murder U

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    i didn't say you couldn't vote on ma shit that was your gay friend Mike that posted that....i don't give a fuck who you vote for as long as it's a serious vote....not like that bullshit you pulled on yo tourney.......anyway



    Vote/ Narcotic


    He got you son.......Stop Bitchen!!!!!!!!
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  16. The Royal Penis

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    yea, i got narcotic taking this one with quite a bit more consistancy in the punches... some solid lines, very humorous.. al murder u had a coupe decent rhymes but narcotic came with a nice flow.. and slick delivery....



    vote-Narcotic
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  17. Stalis Orion

    Stalis Orion DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    Narcotic took this one here, and the only reason I feel that way is because of his closer/cardboard box line. Shit was pretty creative...otherwise, both were neck and neck to me in this match up.
    But ya fan line was noooooo, the CPU virus line got a chuckle outta me, and the closer was, well nasty but decent.
    Overall, shit was ok...no pun intended and you brought enough consistency in this one and a pretty dope line to take the match up.

    Al Murder U,
    the opener was eh, I liked that O-2 lien/concept, you just worded it badly...the clap line was eh, the hiding narcotics line was pretty good though, I got a laugh outta that one and then I thought the closer coulda been spruced up some, it was a generic narcotic/dope nameplay...if you woulda had ya nameplays as nice as that hiding narcotics line, you prolly woulda taken this but as it stands, you were neck and neck until Narcotic dropped his cardboard box line.

    Decent shit though, good job here guys.

    Vote=Narcotic in this one.
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  18. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Narcotic Wins ^^^

    Al Murder U Loses vvv
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