73. A Dubb 1-1 v. 74. Krysto 1-2

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  2. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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  3. krysto

    krysto Chris Robba

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  4. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    yo yo yo
    krys frontin like this text shit isnt his life, cuz the only time your
    spit is serving me is through the window on your mcdonalds mic//
    so go ahead krysto add my lettuce, listen to the customer
    please clean up that piss my retard wife made im not touchin her
    lookin like a cyclop cuz I bashed both of your optics together
    I drop hits to break bones, your hits feel like pillow feathers//
    Yea I read your wack shit and I voted for you last week
    but even fags in Frisco tellin you that your is ass is weak//
    that verse put me sleep I woke up to hairy donkey kong,it
    was his fat girl I thought it was night cuz she blocked the dawn//
    that bitch is shady I wonder how she could be creepin around
    until I seen Krys picture's, tryn to mug with an un even frown//
    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?//
    Krys that same thug always lying like he on that violent scheme
    kids laughin at him cuz he was cryin at the end of the lion king//
    and your feeble lines not phasin with what this tyrant brings
    cuz I drop giant punches like Frodo Im the lord of the ring...
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  5. krysto

    krysto Chris Robba

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    are you serious?

    holy fuck kid....you are fucked...i GUESS ill go 18...cuz i GUESS thats how many you thought youd go..but its hard as fuck to tell

    I feel like a bandit..this victory is just too easy Bub
    I drop jaws single handedly everytime i steal A Dub
    FAG...even with ur ADD that still grabs ya attention Sir
    No pussy, cuz gays never have lines like "I openhers"
    OMG@ ur stool sample, I'll never run out of ways to say YOU SUCK
    With structure so damn sloppy..i dont know whether to laugh or fuck
    To suck is one thing..but your verse introduced me to new heights
    When i read i feel like im in a strip club.....with no working lights
    I feel obligated, trapped, and punished..to be in the same place
    Id much rather roll on Dubs.....fuck a gun to the face
    You was just kiddin right?..you was hopin to wack a newb?
    I got more skill in my pinky..excuse me while i poke a boob
    Your like the kid @school with purple socks that never thinks
    I'll nail them bitches to the ground..and tell u your shit stinks
    How can you be consistant if u dont know what a battle consists of ?
    Shit looks like the stockmaket crash..and i pray it dont trickle down cuz
    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?

    yeah..bassicly my first couplet or so took this..but i felt in the fatherly mood today[funny]

    and how the hell you gonna vote for me last week and say you wasent feelin me A Dub?

    good battle
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  6. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    A_Dubb -

    krys frontin like this text shit isnt his life, cuz the only time your
    spit is serving me is through the window on your mcdonalds mic//
    no...
    so go ahead krysto add my lettuce, listen to the customer
    please clean up that piss my retard wife made im not touchin her
    wtf? no...
    lookin like a cyclop cuz I bashed both of your optics together
    I drop hits to break bones, your hits feel like pillow feathers//
    nah...
    Yea I read your wack shit and I voted for you last week
    but even fags in Frisco tellin you that your is ass is weak//
    lolz...a diss but funny...
    that verse put me sleep I woke up to hairy donkey kong,it
    was his fat girl I thought it was night cuz she blocked the dawn//
    nah...
    that bitch is shady I wonder how she could be creepin around
    until I seen Krys picture's, tryn to mug with an un even frown//
    nah...
    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?//
    nah...
    Krys that same thug always lying like he on that violent scheme
    kids laughin at him cuz he was cryin at the end of the lion king//
    nah...
    and your feeble lines not phasin with what this tyrant brings
    cuz I drop giant punches like Frodo Im the lord of the ring...
    ehh...weak closer...



    Krysto -

    I feel like a bandit..this victory is just too easy Bub
    I drop jaws single handedly everytime i steal A Dub
    ok opener...
    FAG...even with ur ADD that still grabs ya attention Sir
    No pussy, cuz gays never have lines like "I openhers"
    needs rewerdin...
    OMG@ ur stool sample, I'll never run out of ways to say YOU SUCK
    With structure so damn sloppy..i dont know whether to laugh or fuck
    nah...
    To suck is one thing..but your verse introduced me to new heights
    When i read i feel like im in a strip club.....with no working lights
    ehh...
    I feel obligated, trapped, and punished..to be in the same place
    Id much rather roll on Dubs.....fuck a gun to the face
    ok...
    You was just kiddin right?..you was hopin to wack a newb?
    I got more skill in my pinky..excuse me while i poke a boob
    nah...
    Your like the kid @school with purple socks that never thinks
    I'll nail them bitches to the ground..and tell u your shit stinks
    nah...
    How can you be consistant if u dont know what a battle consists of ?
    Shit looks like the stockmaket crash..and i pray it dont trickle down cuz
    nah...
    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?
    ok closer...



    overall -

    I got krys winnin this...he had 3 ok lines...dub only had 1...and it wuz jus a diss...not really a punch...blah @ both of these verse tho...

    vote=krysto

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  7. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    its simple your verse was sucked last week and so did your opponents and i had to vote for someone'

    "yeah..bassicly my first couplet or so took this ......lmao@ that, you cant be serious
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  8. Alphabet

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    A Dubb-

    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns?
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?


    Krysto-


    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?


    vote=Krysto
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  9. ADubXJ03

    ADubXJ03 New Member

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    adubb

    yo yo yo
    krys frontin like this text shit isnt his life, cuz the only time your
    spit is serving me is through the window on your mcdonalds mic//

    alright.

    so go ahead krysto add my lettuce, listen to the customer
    please clean up that piss my retard wife made im not touchin her

    why would you admit your wife is retarded?

    lookin like a cyclop cuz I bashed both of your optics together
    I drop hits to break bones, your hits feel like pillow feathers//

    nice flow, the punch was weak though.

    Yea I read your wack shit and I voted for you last week
    but even fags in Frisco tellin you that your is ass is weak//

    nah.

    that verse put me sleep I woke up to hairy donkey kong,it
    was his fat girl I thought it was night cuz she blocked the dawn//

    booo...sounded like a yo mama joke...

    that bitch is shady I wonder how she could be creepin around
    until I seen Krys picture's, tryn to mug with an un even frown//

    nah.

    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?//

    ouch. forced setup...

    Krys that same thug always lying like he on that violent scheme
    kids laughin at him cuz he was cryin at the end of the lion king//

    that movie was brilliant...shoulda named a gayer flick...

    and your feeble lines not phasin with what this tyrant brings
    cuz I drop giant punches like Frodo Im the lord of the ring...

    no.

    krys

    I feel like a bandit..this victory is just too easy Bub
    I drop jaws single handedly everytime i steal A Dub

    bleh...

    FAG...even with ur ADD that still grabs ya attention Sir
    No pussy, cuz gays never have lines like "I openhers"

    stretched wordplay.

    OMG@ ur stool sample, I'll never run out of ways to say YOU SUCK
    With structure so damn sloppy..i dont know whether to laugh or fuck

    haha stool sample...punch was bleh...

    To suck is one thing..but your verse introduced me to new heights
    When i read i feel like im in a strip club.....with no working lights

    ehh...

    I feel obligated, trapped, and punished..to be in the same place
    Id much rather roll on Dubs.....fuck a gun to the face

    nah.

    You was just kiddin right?..you was hopin to wack a newb?
    I got more skill in my pinky..excuse me while i poke a boob

    nah.

    Your like the kid @school with purple socks that never thinks
    I'll nail them bitches to the ground..and tell u your shit stinks

    no.

    How can you be consistant if u dont know what a battle consists of ?
    Shit looks like the stockmaket crash..and i pray it dont trickle down cuz

    stop.

    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?

    heh.

    overall, both drops were weak. im gonna go with dubb though. he seemed to try on every single line, and while most punches didn't connect, atleast i could see where he was trying to go with the concept. krys had an ok opener and closer...but also had a string of nonsensical punches in the middle that really hurt his verse.

    vote- adubb
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  10. krysto

    krysto Chris Robba

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    Imagine that...some kid named ADubX votes for ADubb..[funny]

    its cool

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  11. Still Nameless

    Still Nameless Money Motivation.

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    Adub
    krys frontin like this text shit isnt his life, cuz the only time your
    spit is serving me is through the window on your mcdonalds mic//
    Ok..
    so go ahead krysto add my lettuce, listen to the customer
    please clean up that piss my retard wife made im not touchin her
    lookin like a cyclop cuz I bashed both of your optics together
    I drop hits to break bones, your hits feel like pillow feathers//
    No..
    Yea I read your wack shit and I voted for you last week
    but even fags in Frisco tellin you that your is ass is weak//
    No..
    that verse put me sleep I woke up to hairy donkey kong,it
    was his fat girl I thought it was night cuz she blocked the dawn//
    Wat tha hell is this ?? ..
    that bitch is shady I wonder how she could be creepin around
    until I seen Krys picture's, tryn to mug with an un even frown//
    Dont think so..
    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?//
    Ok flow .. dats it .
    Krys that same thug always lying like he on that violent scheme
    kids laughin at him cuz he was cryin at the end of the lion king//
    No again..
    and your feeble lines not phasin with what this tyrant brings
    cuz I drop giant punches like Frodo Im the lord of the ring...
    Horrible closer..

    Krys
    I feel like a bandit..this victory is just too easy Bub
    I drop jaws single handedly everytime i steal A Dub
    Ok..
    FAG...even with ur ADD that still grabs ya attention Sir
    No pussy, cuz gays never have lines like "I openhers"
    lol..
    OMG@ ur stool sample, I'll never run out of ways to say YOU SUCK
    With structure so damn sloppy..i dont know whether to laugh or fuck
    ??..
    To suck is one thing..but your verse introduced me to new heights
    When i read i feel like im in a strip club.....with no working lights
    No punch..
    I feel obligated, trapped, and punished..to be in the same place
    Id much rather roll on Dubs.....fuck a gun to the face
    ??..
    You was just kiddin right?..you was hopin to wack a newb?
    I got more skill in my pinky..excuse me while i poke a boob
    lol..
    Your like the kid @school with purple socks that never thinks
    I'll nail them bitches to the ground..and tell u your shit stinks
    No..
    How can you be consistant if u dont know what a battle consists of ?
    Shit looks like the stockmaket crash..and i pray it dont trickle down cuz
    Could have been worded better..
    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?
    Ok closer..

    Krys takes dis wit an overall better verse .. tha other kid jus wasnt on tha right page ..
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  12. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    i got krys takin this
    he simply outclassed A Dubb......even tho both verses were weak, krys had the better attempt at punches....his wordin was wayyyyyyyy better....structure also.....A dubb's lines were stretched, the rhyme structure was not good at all...his punches werent very good either...vote=krysto
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  13. Trapt Wit

    Trapt Wit ...Witty...

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    Vote - Krysto

    Not an outstanding battle but atleast Krysto had a quotable or two in there.
    Also, he just came across as alot more polished,
    Adubb came with some weaker lines that lacked some creativity.
    Also, his structure hurt him.
    Essentially Krysto wins for a better verse in all aspects.
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  14. Klear

    Klear so?

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    Krysto won this battle rather easily
    i don't think A Dubb will be here much longer unless he drastically improves
    everything was newbie about his verse
    stretched bar lengths, content & flow or lack thereof
    Krysto didn't do anything outstanding, but he held his own and took this battle

    vote = Krysto
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  15. Lethargic

    Lethargic Inactive

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    Blah...this was horrible. A Dub had nothing in his verse that struck me as quotable. His punches were garbage...nothing great. I had to struggle to finish reading it. Krysto, wasn't much better. However, his closer alone took it for him. There were a couple other okay punches. Overall, this battle was shit. I hope I never have to read anything like it again.

    Vote ~ Krysto
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  16. G. O. A. T.

    G. O. A. T. Greatest Of All Time...

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    A dub...not a good effort at all dogg.shit was real bad sorry to say..try better next time..Krysto..ur shit wasnt bad..but not as good as it should be..but i guess u beat him..

    Vote:Krysto
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  17. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    krys frontin like this text shit isnt his life, cuz the only time your
    spit is serving me is through the window on your mcdonalds mic//
    mickey ds sells mics now?
    so go ahead krysto add my lettuce, listen to the customer
    please clean up that piss my retard wife made im not touchin her
    the hell?
    lookin like a cyclop cuz I bashed both of your optics together
    I drop hits to break bones, your hits feel like pillow feathers//
    nope
    Yea I read your wack shit and I voted for you last week
    but even fags in Frisco tellin you that your is ass is weak//
    nah
    that verse put me sleep I woke up to hairy donkey kong,it
    was his fat girl I thought it was night cuz she blocked the dawn//
    gay.....very, very gay....tom sawyer gay.....
    that bitch is shady I wonder how she could be creepin around
    until I seen Krys picture's, tryn to mug with an un even frown//
    ehhh
    Your a clown your verses are stupid, ever heard of pronouns
    over 16,000 post rhymin like lil flip thinkin you a pro now?//
    best line...
    Krys that same thug always lying like he on that violent scheme
    kids laughin at him cuz he was cryin at the end of the lion king//
    no
    and your feeble lines not phasin with what this tyrant brings
    cuz I drop giant punches like Frodo Im the lord of the ring...
    horrible



    I feel like a bandit..this victory is just too easy Bub
    I drop jaws single handedly everytime i steal A Dub
    better opener....
    FAG...even with ur ADD that still grabs ya attention Sir
    No pussy, cuz gays never have lines like "I openhers"
    ehh...
    OMG@ ur stool sample, I'll never run out of ways to say YOU SUCK
    With structure so damn sloppy..i dont know whether to laugh or fuck
    nah
    To suck is one thing..but your verse introduced me to new heights
    When i read i feel like im in a strip club.....with no working lights
    decent
    I feel obligated, trapped, and punished..to be in the same place
    Id much rather roll on Dubs.....fuck a gun to the face
    guns lines suck....
    You was just kiddin right?..you was hopin to wack a newb?
    I got more skill in my pinky..excuse me while i poke a boob
    gaaaaaaaaaaaaay
    Your like the kid @school with purple socks that never thinks
    I'll nail them bitches to the ground..and tell u your shit stinks
    now youre just runnin outta ideas...
    How can you be consistant if u dont know what a battle consists of ?
    Shit looks like the stockmaket crash..and i pray it dont trickle down cuz
    decent flow....concept sucks
    You'll get a kick @ how I pilfer dubs and leave whips on bricks
    Im amazed @your spit, How can u have 18 lines and still not say shit?
    decent closer


    damn


    you guys both quarter assed it here


    krysto had a couple 'decent' lines, and i use that term loosely

    a dubb was just awful, half of his shit didnt even make sense....


    *dojo toss*


    Vote= Krysto
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  18. M.H.

    M.H. New Member

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    ^lmao @ dojo toss

    both were pretty weak. i really have no idea what the fuck a dubb was doing. and honestly, krysto wasn't too much better. but still good enough to get the win. made more sense and beter punches. if you can't think of alot of good lines, don't just put down bad ones to take up the space.
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  19. itzconstant

    itzconstant T00 ILL

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    a-dubb came pretty wack, had an aight structure but the disses were weak, and really didn't have any good personals or punches. Krysto had a harder spit, a couple witty punches, nuthin real good though. but he defintely outshined a-dubb here. fav line
    ...LOL good flow, and punch...vote-krysto
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  20. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    i got krysto taking this. both came pretty aight. i liked the roll on Dubs line, coulda been reworded theo to make harder. but you had nice structure and it looked more polished. you basically took the battle on strength of that line tho.

    coo match tho.

    vote kyrsto
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