7. Venamis 1-0 v.s 8. Quite Stange 1-0

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Let's go 12 max.. I don't think anyone in this league right now can write 12 solid hard hitting punches, so let's do it.
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  3. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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  4. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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    12 Is What Ya Sed Boss So In 12 Ill Leave Ya Hed Popped
    Dude Highlighted His Name So He Could Be Read Hot
    Youll Be Defending Ya Shit Come In The Thread Jus Enter And Spit
    Buh Yo Niqqa I Got The Antidote So I Aint Worried Bout A Venamis Bitch
    This Vets Evil And Yu Cant Hear Me Buh My Threats Leathal
    After This Battle Imma Make Yu Sign Out Like Deaf People
    I Dont Kno If Yu Red My Bars Buh Yo Yu Better 'Charge'
    These Are Sik Lines But All 'V's Are' Whack Like 'Credit Cards'
    This Will Get Ya heart Racing Ya Nervous So Start Pacing
    And Yall Watch Me Leave 'V 8' Somthing Like 'Car Racing'
    Bring Ya Crew Because I Rape Geeks & Hate 'Cheats'
    And We All Know 'Venamis Bite' Like Fuckin 'Snake Teeth'​
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  5. Phillup Banks

    Phillup Banks New Member

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    Ayy... I got banned as Venamis, I think for only a day though.. So I made an alias to finish this week, then I'ma sign out.. good luck Q'.

    I over come anybody, let me show you what I mean by it..
    The only Q holding me down is: How you ranked this high bitch?
    I'm looking at his bars, oh man, oh heaven!..
    His race to hall of fame is worse than Superstar mode in Madden 07
    But he's scared of my kind cuz my pistols the best wrestler..
    So I'll have him run for his Life faster than hungry breakfasters
    I carry the AK, bitch you ain't cool & you're the worst to boast..
    I'ma come thru and shoot the shit & you won't have a verse to post
    See I wanna diss your girl, tho I can't lie she's an angel..
    She really took her parents advice & refused to give a ride to a Stranger
    Tryna live up to your name? that's a strange statement..
    Cuz with that voice, we all wish the e & the t would change places
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  6. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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    ^ Aiight Nice Verse Famz Good Lux, Uppin For Votes
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  7. Oddwirdz

    Oddwirdz New Member

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    Qs-
    oull Be Defending Ya Shit Come In The Thread Jus Enter And Spit
    Buh Yo Niqqa I Got The Antidote So I Aint Worried Bout A Venamis Bitch
    This Vets Evil And Yu Cant Hear Me Buh My Threats Leathal
    After This Battle Imma Make Yu Sign Out Like Deaf People
    I Dont Kno If Yu Red My Bars Buh Yo Yu Better 'Charge'
    These Are Sik Lines But All 'V's Are' Whack Like 'Credit Cards'
    This Will Get Ya heart Racing Ya Nervous So Start Pacing
    And Yall Watch Me Leave 'V 8' Somthing Like 'Car Racing'

    Venamis-
    I over come anybody, let me show you what I mean by it..
    The only Q holding me down is: How you ranked this high bitch?
    ee I wanna diss your girl, tho I can't lie she's an angel..
    She really took her parents advice & refused to give a ride to a Stranger

    ok...although i thought V had the hardest punches (those 2) the rest of his verse, was aight at best, wasn't really feeling it, on the other hand, QS had more punches and his nameflips is what won this for him..the only lines i wasn't feeling from him where his openner and closer...

    vote-QS
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  8. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    quite strange got this one because his punches consistant

    i like the last few lines...he ended it hard



    vote-quite strange
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  9. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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    2-0 Upping Props On The Votes!!!!!!
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  10. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    dude ripped it, venam gave it some effort but just got outdone with personals, structure, and punches.

    and qs yU shold make 'ur' verse more clear doh bcuz folks on here don't know how to read ghetto talk n shit nosk noskinamini? and don't make so many damn quotation marks. good luck

    vote- q
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  11. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    i think quite got this...


    venamis had a couple cool concepts, but were worded pretty badly, and QS had some good lines...but were also worded badly...and that visa line is way too much of a strech for me...


    i liked running for life

    vs

    12 Is What Ya Sed Boss So In 12 Ill Leave Ya Hed Popped
    Dude Highlighted His Name So He Could Be Read Hot
    Youll Be Defending Ya Shit Come In The Thread Jus Enter And Spit
    Buh Yo Niqqa I Got The Antidote So I Aint Worried Bout A Venamis Bitch
    This Vets Evil And Yu Cant Hear Me Buh My Threats Leathal
    After This Battle Imma Make Yu Sign Out Like Deaf People


    Vote Qs, good battle you...
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  12. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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  13. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    this was really close.. neither were that witty.. Quite had a lotta personals tho, they were aight.. his wording was a little better than ven's.. Q had a decent flow goin too, little rhyme scheme.. i think he edged it out, his verse was just overall better.. still, it was close, good battle

    Vote: Quite Strange
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  14. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Neither one of you had any lines worth quoting.. But Quite Strange had the better verse of the two.. He had better flow, wording, and structure.. I didn't like anything in Ven's verse

    vote = Quite Strange
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  15. SPuL

    SPuL SP

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    This Vets Evil And Yu Cant Hear Me Buh My Threats Leathal
    After This Battle Imma Make Yu Sign Out Like Deaf People
    I Dont Kno If Yu Red My Bars Buh Yo Yu Better 'Charge'
    These Are Sik Lines But All 'V's Are' Whack Like 'Credit Cards'

    v.s.

    nothing really

    overall aiight battle. QS had some good multi's. But again as I seen in a lot of battles, dude focused more on multi's than having hard punches. However, QS also tried a lot of wordplay and some harshness. But I mean, I think he sacrificed some lines just for the multi. Like that visa line. I liked the wordplay, but could of been made harsher, all in all not bad verse. Keep it comin'. Venamix on the other hand came alright. Iunno if he just didn't try this week or what, but I ain't really see anything from him. Lines were more statementish than harsh. Maybe try and throw more wordplay in there. But over QS got this one pretty easy. not bad battle guys. stay up

    v/QS
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  16. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    QS wins.
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