7. Saliva(6-0) vs 8. Vyris(7-3)

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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  3. AeLuRUs

    AeLuRUs New Member

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    iigh son imma match that up

    lets talk bout ranks before this bum gets rattled
    this week its 7 verses 8...like my run after this battle
    you showed promise a while back, but werent mentored right
    so now the turn around of ya career been more like :moon:
    you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
    i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it
    i feel for ya...down syndrom netcee? we know its no rumor
    cause you the son of a bitch...with a real mean sense of humor
    poundin this fool, yall know he deserve it
    just a wica bitch bout to get hung like the salem witch verdicts
    speakin of that shit, not too far in the past
    you a lil like my wins, another trick of the craft
    learn about wordplay, get dope n fame
    saliva capatilize on wackness like the V in ya name
    mc kill this bitch from Botswanna to Great Lakes to Rio
    i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio
    this shits for real, now drop ya wack shit, all stacked
    dude still got a hard dick from that ass similie some bars back
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  4. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    gotcha...

    take a bath
    break my craft?

    I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
    cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
    expell the violence, in school ya grades sucked
    but to make it worse, 2 weeks ago ya proved u failed scientz
    a frail appliance, this cheater reps beyond the net
    so fuck letting ya flop a verse, you'd rather FLIP a concept
    I rip this nonvet, your small and a moses of ghosting
    he's bogus at posting lines, and is so short he poses for trophies!
    notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
    but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
    get left in the dirt, it's me against the old fat don
    6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on
    and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
    I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
    and combat is ugly, this fucker is going through trials
    of tribulations cuz even ya location suggests you live in denile!
    spittin a mile, you ain't top or wild see
    you posting nice is more of a turn off than that smilie

    and then vyris won...
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  5. ResinMC

    ResinMC aka PunchRhyme

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    Vyris.
    The Good:

    cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!

    The Bad:

    6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on

    Saliva:
    The Good:

    i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it

    saliva capatilize on wackness like the V in ya name

    i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio

    The Bad:

    so now the turn around of ya career been more like

    you a lil like my wins, another trick of the craft


    Hmm. I'm going with Sal here. Just more cleverness Compared to Vy. Good shit tho fellas.


    Vote - Saliva
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  6. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    saliva niceness:
    you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
    i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it
    just a wica bitch bout to get hung like the salem witch verdicts
    mc kill this bitch from Botswanna to Great Lakes to Rio
    i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio


    decent verse... a little short....

    vyris niceness:
    I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
    cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
    notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
    but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
    and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
    I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
    and combat is ugly, this fucker is going through trials
    of tribulations cuz even ya location suggests you live in denile!

    this verse made me chuckle a few times... nice

    vote - vyris....

    return the favor vote on theFRANCHISE v. Suwoop
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  7. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    vote-saliva

    lets talk bout ranks before this bum gets rattled
    this week its 7 verses 8...like my run after this battle

    even tho u didnt eat my verse fucka lol...nah this was nice


    had a few nice lines that i felt...the trick in the book, and island lines were straight...he was also more consistant than vyris...that saliva/vyris line was sick but after that vyris seemed to start slacking...u made ur verse seem more like the dozens than a battle verse...u were using old jokes that i heard back in the days...like the screw ya hat on line, n the pose for trophies joint...thats more like some in living color shit than some battle lines...no diss at all but i dont think u did enough to take vyris in this match
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  8. EVIL GENIUS.

    EVIL GENIUS. Untouchable

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    notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
    but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
    ^^lol.. line of the battle

    This was a decent battle. nothin too stunning but i felt vyris alittle bit more.. although some of his lines were like he got them off a joke website.. e.g. screw ya hat on punch.. He had the line of the battle.. & an overall more consistent verse.. Saliva was ight too, wasnt feeling the smilie thing though..

    vote: vyris
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  9. euphemism

    euphemism .

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    Vote = Vyris

    Saliva came pretty straight, I mean.. there's nothing negative I can say about his shit really. I just thought Vyris brought more game.
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  10. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    vote - vyris

    i thought saliva had horrible concepts this week and the ones that were decent were played, it wasa cool match, but vyris had more originality and better wording.
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  11. Vember2

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    weak battle, not hatin, but honestly how did you all get in top 30 wit these verses? damn, seriously...

    Saliva-bad concepts, wack noob lines, really nothin positive that stood out

    Vyris-a little better, but the noob concepts were flying left and right.

    expell the violence, in school ya grades sucked
    but to make it worse, 2 weeks ago ya proved u failed scientz
    doesnt even rhyme..but about the best one he had

    notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
    but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
    get left in the dirt, it's me against the old fat don
    6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on
    and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
    I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
    This^ is all a bunch of newbie bullshit, i wouldnt expect some1 in top 30 to be so thoughtless when it comes to their verse, i did that Fat and chunky line honestly when i first started rapping, and i was wack as hell

    v/vyris, won this due to lack of concepts from other cat, weak battle tho
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  12. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    V - Vyris

    Came with some nicer punches

    That step line was cool. Saliva, rushed it. And that's obvious since he came pretty ill in the past few weeks.

    Decent battle.
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  13. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    saliva

    "you showed promise a while back, but werent mentored right
    so now the turn around of ya career been more like
    you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
    i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it"

    vyris

    "I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
    cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
    notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
    but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
    and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
    I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky"

    those were my favourite lines, but

    vote - vyris
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  14. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    up over noshows
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  15. Vandette

    Vandette New Member

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    vote-vyris

    fresh different, more appealing less wordy concepts that didn't hit than the other guy

    nice battle
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    AeLuRUs New Member

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  17. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Viris started off good, but started to lack towards the end, whereas Saliva was a bit flaky every now and then throughout the verse. I don't mean to go against the grain, but I'm going to vote for Saliva for a little..I mean a LITTLE bit more creativity, and consistency. Viris, you had a pretty niice verse though.....good match.

    ..Battle reponed.

    -m.CRUMB
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  18. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    this is my up...
    vote count is 8-2, me

    uppin for more!
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  19. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Virus wins.

    -m.CRUMB
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