7. Oneduh 20-2 vs 8. The Fakulty 12-1

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  1. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    eh, oneduh was disappointing.........wasnt on point at all, didnt have any good concepts, no humor....and what was worse, he didnt bring a dope flow........was way to mediocre....he'll bounce back with this loss *if he stays in*


    vote fakulty, had a couple just corny mixtape punches, but he also had 2 or 3 that were aight........just felt like he wanted it more and posted a hungry verse
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  2. Srevir Rm

    Srevir Rm WentFromGodToGodDamn

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    like whoa


    Fakulty, ya verse was ok. i found quite a few couplets and sequences that lacked a full concept. the first four lines were pretty nice, and i was likin em a lot, but then you dropped a pretty sad contendership line and well, things went to hell from there. after that the verse was pretty weak in my opinion. the first four were flames though, what happened??? there were maybe just a couple other mediocre punches in there


    One, i wasn't really liking some of your rhyming techniques, but overall the verse hit a bit harder than Fakulty's. now although your wordplay at times was as simple if not more so, than Fakulty's, i still liked the way your punches hit directly. where there wasn't filler, there were brutal punches. a decent verse overall.


    vote-Oneduh by a little bit..

    nicest sequence:

    This loser never had the chance to pimp the ladies
    We all know perms haven't been big since the 80's
    Words can kill, & thats nothin to doubt
    My shit will make ya jaw drop, so I can put a gun in ya mouth
    I aint the one to fuck with, my shells be fatal
    Beef with One, you'll pay the Price like Kelly's label
    No DJ's want ya album, you aint collectin ya bread
    So I guess I'll leave a scratch on ya battle record instead
    This verse proves that you can't see mine on this board
    There wont be pants lyin around, when I Levi's on the floor

    although the last line coulda been done better, it was still aight

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  3. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    lmao..

    Perma

    leave - come back, leave - comeback, just cant let you go
    oh wait you did, then cameback, but where the fucks wonderflow ten point O

    lol..

    now mud let you in his crew, but that doesn't make ya thug neither
    when I'd put Ex under the floorboards; like a fucken drug dealer

    ok..

    the differance between us is simple, why compare with penmanship
    I mean we may be on the same boat; but you'll never see contendership

    ok..

    the last time you ranked number 2, you should HAVE just ducked
    it was the biggest Champ loss; since the redskins salary cut

    lol..

    fuck claims at top five, fag beating you's nothing tough
    & i dont need a scale from oneduh-ten; just to tell that you fuckin suck

    lol..

    I see why ex-t recruited you, its not that there planning to climb
    they were just desperate for members, and only had EXPANSION in mind

    coo..

    may be 20-2, but this guy isnt worthy
    so I'm putting a 3 next to his name; like an Iverson jersey

    ok..

    see the outcome is simple, so how can this dope beat me ?
    after this match I'll have won' after my name, like i fuckin wrote graffiti

    meh..

    I'm gangster like fifty, hows this w*gger gonna act harder
    when guns could make him crip-old, like syn as a grand father

    lol..

    if ones predicting a win, my finishers sure to spell it out
    better hope that stream of consiousness; is more of a wishing well

    meh..

    Oneduh

    Tryna act like a hustler, you shook when ya near herb
    The only crack you see, is when you look at a mirror

    meh..

    Type'a n1gga to talk bout bricks before movin his first nick
    That's hustlin backwords, it's like you doin reverse sprints

    ok..

    The dirt's where cowards that speak about me'll be kid
    So death's right around the corner, by the alley you sleep in

    ok..

    This loser never had the chance to pimp the ladies
    We all know perms haven't been big since the 80's

    lol.. coulda been done better the wording threw the flow off..

    Words can kill, & thats nothin to doubt
    My shit will make ya jaw drop, so I can put a gun in ya mouth

    blah..

    I aint the one to fuck with, my shells be fatal
    Beef with One, you'll pay the Price like Kelly's label

    ok..

    No DJ's want ya album, you aint collectin ya bread
    So I guess I'll leave a scratch on ya battle record instead

    lol..

    This verse proves that you can't see mine on this board
    There wont be pants lyin around, when I Levi's on the floor

    didnt get it..

    Wanna brawl with a giant? listen, ya crazy
    Of course I get under ya skin, s'why you been itchin to face me

    meh..

    I got this shit in the bag, why would I try against P?
    He lost soon as I said he couldn't recycle my lines this week

    ok..

    vote - Perma. Simply better. Oneduh had some decent ideas, but they seemed too rushed.
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  4. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    Faculty was decent, but he had a few weak ones and a few punches that were obvious or played.
    Oneduh came pretty nice...had a lot of lines that were good and a few that were pretty dope.

    V/One
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  5. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    vote - perma, he actually came creative and thats what i like to see, floorboard, wonderflow, redskins line were all coo. Oneduh had a few nice lines i was feeling here and there but his verse as a whole lacked in the creativity classification. first few lines were nice. One Duh had the 80's and kellys label lines and that's pretty much all i was really feeling.

    vote = follow the drip, and you'll get perm
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  6. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    this is mad hard to decide on, neither came great, but both had a couple witty lines


    I'm gonna go with Perma though cuz Oneduh had that bad name play on Perm and that closer is so out-dated and
    Frost had a couple lines I liked .. the "redskins salary cut" line was cool

    vote - Perma Frost
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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    I got one edgin this out...


    vote=one

    1Ne
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  8. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Oneduh Wins

    Perma Loses Due To Lack Of Voting
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