7. Joey Donuts 6-0 vs 8. Super Dooper 10-2

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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  3. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    yo ray why arent you ever on anymore?

    and lets go 20
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  4. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    First off super’s my homey, so I don’t wanna bring the bullets
    So just stick to what your good at and trim my bushes
    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?
    Never shown strength in your lines, even headless can see…
    …That your verses don’t mean squat! Bench, deadlift, or clean
    And now he think he’s a pimp? Man, I would smack this gay
    But if I did he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    Cause this spitter is a hoe
    Tried his hand at the pba, let’s just say he couldn’t fit his fingers in the holes
    Changed his name from hazmat, It’d be a sore to mention why
    Maybe cause he’d been embarrassed too many times at 411 hype
    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again
    How do you even have a chance, I’m better in battles
    Fuck the nation guard
    You better bring the quarterback, center, and tackle
    And on that education tip, he’s set to win rapping quotes
    Fucker thought the sat’s were a Mexican fashion show
    Yeah, super is a dope gangsta, he’s ominous when robbing
    Lost to island last week? Then consider me a continent of problems
    G’luck
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  5. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    began to read ya shit but was sounding gay
    list punches? their paused, rewound and played
    last week ur win was a fluke, dont u see that
    u got fucked up by drugs..u should be in rehab
    cyberin.. im not down for that yet
    a spider can kill u, since ur stuck to the net
    when i'm fighting, my shit couldnt get any harder
    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces
    all this talk of being hard, quit boastin
    heard you hold less weight than mary-kate olsen
    no doubt to where the voters been leanin
    hell, nostradamus even predicted me winning
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  6. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    sorry Soop...but Joey's got this...

    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?

    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again


    those lines killed it. I knew you shoulda never posted that pic, lol.

    vote: Joey Donuts
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  7. -Oz-

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  8. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote - Joey Donuts


    in a landslide

    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    And now he think he’s a pimp? Man, I would smack this gay
    But if I did he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place

    First off super’s my homey, so I don’t wanna bring the bullets
    So just stick to what your good at and trim my bushes
    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?

    could of have did without the list punches but shit was still aight though

    good verse

    Sooper shit was mad boring, like he put no effort

    a few lines were good, nothing that OMG bullshit though

    its like this is not his style b'cuz the lines look shorter, things look way different

    n e how, good battle fellas

    hollah at my shit Vern Acular vs . No Shit Shellshock
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  9. .Arsenic.

    .Arsenic. DoPe TeXtCeE.

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    Vote donuts

    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    lmfao!!
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  10. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Joey,

    But if I did he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place

    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    Lost to island last week? Then consider me a continent of problems

    Not bad mr Donuts I think your collar bone line was your best. Not feeling the squat line and the quarterback line..not my style of battling but cool verse

    Super,

    yea u didnt come with enough heat this week. The weight /olsen line might have been your best but nothing really good.

    My vote Joey
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  11. stOOpid

    stOOpid will lean ya maaan

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    First off super’s my homey, so I don’t wanna bring the bullets
    So just stick to what your good at and trim my bushes
    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?

    my favorite lines of the battle..

    vote donuts
    i was feelin donuts verse more. idk i jus didnt feel supers that much seen ya come better tho.

    pz

    return the favor..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=764198
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  12. Justin Control

    Justin Control LIVING LEGEND

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    This was actually pretty close

    Both had one stand out line that killed it

    BUT..

    Joey had two lines that killed his verse

    which were these two..

    DO NOT EVER EVER NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER use lines like that again
    Those are BEYOND played and fucked up your whole verse
    And basically lost the battle for you IMO

    v/ Super Dooper
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  13. Rygar's Penis

    Rygar's Penis New Member

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    first off, never use a list punch again

    First off super’s my homey, so I don’t wanna bring the bullets
    So just stick to what your good at and trim my bushes
    And now he think he’s a pimp? Man, I would smack this gay
    But if I did he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    nice verse..

    list punches? their paused, rewound and played

    this aint a quotable, just needed to point out the irony

    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    lol nice

    the rest wasnt impressive..


    vote = Joey D.
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  14. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    wow, some people are pretty weird with voting


    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    honestly this isn't that dope, too bad you don't realize it. although the finishing punch is pretty tight, as is the concept, the SETUP is what fucked it up. neither of those forced multis in the setup has ANYTHING to do with the punch. now that's just plain wack. soldiers and boulders? c'mon man..

    the rest of the verse was ok, but the SAT line was pretty fucking ill. however, again, the setup SUCKED ASS. what's the point of having a dope punch if it isn't relevant to any part of the verse OR the setup?? just wondering..

    anyway Super had a pretty well rounded verse, started rather slow but picked up the pace with some nice hits and wordplay.

    due to more consistency, vote-SuperDooper, don't usually like his shit, but was feelin it more this week. nice drop. nice battle.

    nicest sequence:

    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces
    all this talk of being hard, quit boastin
    heard you hold less weight than mary-kate olsen

    ha, nice nice nice

    pz
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  15. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    v- super

    Joey
    And now he think he’s a pimp? Man, I would smack this gay
    But if I did he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place

    Changed his name from hazmat, It’d be a sore to mention why
    Maybe cause he’d been embarrassed too many times at 411 hype

    And on that education tip, he’s set to win rapping quotes
    Fucker thought the sat’s were a Mexican fashion show

    you had some alright lines this week, I liked this drop a lot better than you others. You had some played mexican disses though, and added nothing dope to em. Like alpha said, bad setups and the island stuff has been done. Plus two list punches hurt the good in your verse.

    super
    began to read ya shit but was sounding gay
    list punches? their paused, rewound and played
    last week ur win was a fluke, dont u see that
    u got fucked up by drugs..u should be in rehab

    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country

    super came pretty good, i liked the list punch that was an anti list punch. Dopest of the battle. The mexican and me personals were cool too (although the rehab part made it kinda ehh). You had a lot less played shit than joey and less line I really didn't like, which gets you the win.
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  16. Oz Da God Emcee

    Oz Da God Emcee New Member

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    Wow, I got super taking this easy. Joey had some decent shit, but all them mexican lines have been done, and done better at that. Plus his wayyyy long lines and list punches(2??) took away from his verse.

    Super had some dope shit

    began to read ya shit but was sounding gay
    list punches? their paused, rewound and played

    The irony he used made this dope

    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces


    These were all good. I dunno sup with votes

    Vote Super
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  17. Jacent

    Jacent mister work

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    V/ Super Dooper

    Joey Donuts

    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?
    Changed his name from hazmat, It’d be a sore to mention why
    Maybe cause he’d been embarrassed too many times at 411 hype
    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again
    Yeah, super is a dope gangsta, he’s ominous when robbing
    Lost to island last week? Then consider me a continent of problems

    Super Dooper

    began to read ya shit but was sounding gay
    list punches? their paused, rewound and played
    cyberin.. im not down for that yet
    a spider can kill u, since ur stuck to the net
    when i'm fighting, my shit couldnt get any harder
    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces
    all this talk of being hard, quit boastin
    heard you hold less weight than mary-kate olsen

    Super had that dope section after the dissy line, joey was off & on, sometimes the lines were just straight fiya & then he had the listing *smh*, overall, super had a more appealing verse & shit , it was just more enjoyable
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  18. eye of the tiger

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    first of all wtf@list punches, those shits are played as fuck, bad move from joey
    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again

    dope

    closer was also dope from joey, but thats about it. Everything else was played as fuck and average.

    when i'm fighting, my shit couldnt get any harder
    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces
    all this talk of being hard, quit boastin
    heard you hold less weight than mary-kate olsen

    nice stuff from super

    he just came with the disses, flat out. 9/11 and mary kate were killers. he stayed consistant and nice through out.

    v-super
    super was more original than JD and fresher.
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  19. Torch1

    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    You saw his pic last week, attempts at a closer that’s formal
    But is it me, or is supers ear’s lower than normal?
    Changed his name from hazmat, It’d be a sore to mention why
    Maybe cause he’d been embarrassed too many times at 411 hype
    Plainly cause this soldier is thin, I’m throwin boulders at him
    Cause he crossed the line! It’s your entrance to America all over again



    when i'm fighting, my shit couldnt get any harder
    ill leave joey crying and crying, more than dis-honour
    one of my fingers can send J flyin to heaven
    with a more powerful flick than farenheit 9/11
    out to kill ur shook ass, this might be funny
    im a mexican that'll have YOU leaving the country
    u suck cuz ur wack, thats my thesis
    I got cut from PBA, but you got hacked to pieces
    all this talk of being hard, quit boastin
    heard you hold less weight than mary-kate olsen


    super had the flow and the pba line had me chucklin


    Vote= Super
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