7. Imperial 11-5 Vs. 8. Namix 9-2

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  1. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    :RBL Rules & Regulations:


    RBL Verses Due: Tuesday:12 (Midnight-Eastern Time)

    Like I Said...No Votes Needed

    -Each battler is allowed to up their threads TWICE in a match.​
    before the battler(s) is penalized -1 vote for each up after the​
    entitled amount. Upping: (vote count,discussing votes,or just​
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    -You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links​
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a​
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    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.​

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    -RBL "Under 300 Posts" List: If an opponent has LESS than 300​
    posts, check this list to see if his RBL name is on there. If not​
    contact a mod, immediately.​

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!​
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written​
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX​
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing​
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines.​

    -NO EDITING!!!! If your opponent comes and tell us you edited a​
    verse, EVEN if it's only a fucking word or phrase, you're done &​
    will be given an AUTOMATIC disqualifcation.​

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    even care if it's 5 minutes late. Even if s mod late with closing​
    the no shows, the deadline will still be enforced. Yes, there are​
    extensions..but you will be deducted 3 votes for recieiving one.​

    -if you bitch about votes, youre docked 20, so don't fuckin sway

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    I Just reposted the rules...but whatever im about to say cancels those out...

    you 2 do NOT have to post links...there are NO extensions....and as many lines as you go UNDER 16, results in a 3 vote loss for each one...you go 14?...thats 6 votes lost...you go 12?...thats 12 votes lost...this is the RBL's little Christmas Week Match...

    have fun, ladies...and check the due dates on your thread here...theyve been modified
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  2. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    ^read the special rules...

    and have a merry christmas
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  3. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Aight thanks, merry xmas to you too... Nam, lets make this real dope, battle of the week type shit.

    30 lines it is!!

    Ill most likely post tonight.
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  4. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    if we're the ONLY match, lets go 30 man.. c'mon!! thats the least you can do =)

    (respond by editing your message above tho dogg lol)
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  5. Razah

    Razah .. What Tha?

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    dont tell him that here
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  6. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Good luck, make it dope. =)

    *voters, skim through our first thread for this battle..
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=684161


    Go do some more research on me.. fuckin stalker

    Look...

    Ya verse in our 1st thread woulda been nice, fuckin dope
    ..If the personals werent already used five months ago!!
    Go back to ya old site kid.. when ya joined RM..
    You shoulda been a singer...
    ..so you could really be-boys to men
    You will never be-a-ten... so stop MCin
    Like the word above^...
    ..I can take lines out, and youll still get beaten
    Need another extension?.. well its not that likely
    Ya verse is in question... no wonder you cant ask nicely
    I saw ya girl cheatin.. and man, Id straight hit her
    Ya girl didnt wither away... I went away wither
    Last week Cale made you 9-2... losin twice is bad
    But to the same person!? damn, that shit's twice as bad
    Spit somethin new for a change.. ya shit's not felt now
    Ya verse had a breakthrough...
    ..must be where all the good lines fell out
    Fuck doin a concert.. ya show is gay hoe
    Kid had to mention g-unit...
    ..to get the crowd goin "Yay! Oh!"
    Ya shook, I won... Ima shoot clips 'til ya die son
    When I leave shells on you...
    ..its gonna 'beetle' you look like one
    And its no joke when I let the heat spray
    I put a pound to ya chest...
    ..faster than a fat bitch eatin cheesecake
    Fuck goin platinum.. ya album's straight wack, you suck
    You never saw-mills... I jus left ya face strapped to one
    Gettin past me? its apparent that you never have
    You wont 'get father'... its a-parent that you never have
    Namix aint ya full name... put this fucker in his place
    I wont dye-namix... thas real blood coverin his face!
    Look at this guy.. fuck him, kid's gonna die
    I made him face the music...
    ..by shovin a drumstick in his eye
    You should win an award.. man, it was meant to be
    Ya ‘verse is always worthy’... worst ones ive ever seen!
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  7. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    ups . . . .
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  8. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    (edited my verse into my freepost)

    your saying im not up to par? now that’s just too far…
    i made ur top 5 list, ‘n still dont kno who the fuck u are
    u seemed cocky as shit, until u read the raps that i spit
    then u hopped off ur high horse,
    …and landed smack dab on my dick
    bitch your just all flaws, i’ll beat u faster than frost thaws,
    this battles like a crow with laryngitis for u…a lost caws
    ideas dawn on me ‘fo mornin came, flow like poring rain
    i’m having a brainstorm g, and ur just givin storm g brain
    u got lots of hobbies, but textceein aint payin the bills
    said ur a skilled inline skater,
    …but online u cant skate with my skills
    im breakin smiles, ‘n taken u out Massachusetts style
    cuz u had so many badspells,
    …RMs about to have another Salem witch trial
    he said im the best hes seen, now i got him testin me?
    my last piece imprest Imp,
    but now we’re gonna see Imp-rest in peace
    u got raped by a Klutch, this joke is staying so scoffed
    Dough’s offed every one of ur pieces,
    …and everyone one of ur pieces make us dough’s off
    look, its ova… fuck respect, noone looks this rookie ova
    last time u got brownie points,
    …was when u met ur girlscout cookie quota
    who will win this match? hah, I wish this guy would ask
    because like j.ews on Rush Hashanah… i should fast
    and I’d let bygones be bygones… but you’ve gone bi
    …im getting fucking tired of faggots, and Yawn guys
    thinks ULs nice but the chain-a-commands sorry to others
    Links soo weak, zelda gave up n hired the mario brothers
    said u dont rap in public, ur scared of blacks givin u hate
    but i kno that isnt the case, its not like any live in ur state
    I doubt that your tough, so cut it out with that stuff
    i’d mention ur small measures,
    …but ur girl bitches about them enough
    didnt wana fuck u up, its somethin i was demanded to do
    i wont say u have a nice ass, but i had to hand it to you.
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    pretty good battle.
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  10. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Fucking Lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng...luckily I have nothing to do.

    IMPERIAL
    Pretty good, very inconsistent, especially the one area. Im thinking 30 lines was way to much? Still had a few nice ones, and some dope ones, as well as some wack ones.....

    NAMIX

    Sorry mayne I wasnt feeling much of your verse. Your best punches, were just plays on words, and that got repetitive when you did 3 or 4 in a row, their like list punches....dont wanna use all them.

    Vote Imperial...
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  11. WerdZ

    WerdZ New Member

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    lmao @ these peeps...even though im not the 1st vote ill be the first to give you both props on good verses..ill edit this with a vote in a minute gotta go buy somthin...just wanted to give props...
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  12. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    good looks werdz... imperial and i should start critiquing oz's 'ish to the fullest lol... hope you get at this battle cuzz.. we're not getting any love.. thanks for the breakdown tho oz.. first up? lol
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  13. Musaeus 617BC

    Musaeus 617BC Writer of Oracles

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    v - namix

    First off, Imp, that style isn't working for you man, I'm gonna be straight up about that.

    "Fuck doin a concert.. ya show is gay hoe
    Kid had to mention g-unit...
    ..to get the crowd goin "Yay! Oh!""

    Good concept, but you gotta say it to yourself, it's pretty forced when you think about it.

    "Need another extension?.. well its not that likely
    Ya verse is in question... no wonder you cant ask nicely"

    That was hot though IMO. Props.

    Namix, same about the style, man.

    "ideas dawn on me ‘fo mornin came, flow like poring rain
    i’m having a brainstorm g, and ur just givin storm g brain"

    Nice job there.

    "im breakin smiles, ‘n taken u out Massachusetts style
    cuz u had so many badspells,
    …RMs about to have another Salem witch trial"

    Cool.

    "your saying im not up to par? now that’s just too far…
    i made ur top 5 list, ‘n still dont kno who the fuck u are"

    Nice IMO.

    Overall though, Imp def. had the biggest standout line here, Namix came more consistent though, kept my interest all the way instead of having me drift in and out of the verse. Not a bad battle.
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  14. Da Bizness

    Da Bizness Yuno Da bizness

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    could go either way....

    imp you had some decent shit but i think you got carried away w/the word flip shit that namix does...i guess you was tryna use his shit against him but i get tired of seein that shit...its sooo 2000', not to mention when yall do that shit its like your forcing the word in there so it doesnt actually have that pun meaning to it (or a double meaning for slow muhfukkas....) so it takes away the potency of the punch in my eyes....but anyway namix u got carried away wit it as well but had some mediocre consistency while Imp had ups and downs but did have a few highlight lines...i cant vote yet though...just some thoughts
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  15. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Thanks for the votes so far...

    LMFAO at Oz sayin some of my best punches were wack. Still voted for me anyway tho.

    I was goin for more wordplay this verse.. i thought yall would like it more than they^ did. Whateva tho, keep votin...

    1-1
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  16. Cokes

    Cokes ur booty

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    nam

    your saying im not up to par? now that’s just too far…
    i made ur top 5 list, ‘n still dont kno who the fuck u are

    ok

    u seemed cocky as shit, until u read the raps that i spit
    then u hopped off ur high horse,
    …and landed smack dab on my dick

    nice

    bitch your just all flaws, i’ll beat u faster than frost thaws,
    this battles like a crow with laryngitis for u…a lost caws

    nice again

    ideas dawn on me ‘fo mornin came, flow like poring rain
    i’m having a brainstorm g, and ur just givin storm g brain

    dope

    u got lots of hobbies, but textceein aint payin the bills
    said ur a skilled inline skater,
    …but online u cant skate with my skills

    this was cool, the flow was off at the end

    im breakin smiles, ‘n taken u out Massachusetts style
    cuz u had so many badspells,
    …RMs about to have another Salem witch trial

    dope

    he said im the best hes seen, now i got him testin me?
    my last piece imprest Imp,
    but now we’re gonna see Imp-rest in peace

    dope

    u got raped by a Klutch, this joke is staying so scoffed
    Dough’s offed every one of ur pieces,
    …and everyone one of ur pieces make us dough’s off

    nice wordplay

    look, its ova… fuck respect, noone looks this rookie ova
    last time u got brownie points,
    …was when u met ur girlscout cookie quota

    nope

    who will win this match? hah, I wish this guy would ask
    because like j.ews on Rush Hashanah… i should fast

    forced

    and I’d let bygones be bygones… but you’ve gone bi
    …im getting fucking tired of faggots, and Yawn guys

    nope

    thinks ULs nice but the chain-a-commands sorry to others
    Links soo weak, zelda gave up n hired the mario brothers

    dope

    said u dont rap in public, ur scared of blacks givin u hate
    but i kno that isnt the case, its not like any live in ur state

    nice

    I doubt that your tough, so cut it out with that stuff
    i’d mention ur small measures,
    …but ur girl bitches about them enough

    damn, nice

    didnt wana fuck u up, its somethin i was demanded to do
    i wont say u have a nice ass, but i had to hand it to you.

    nope


    imp

    Ya verse in our 1st thread woulda been nice, fuckin dope
    ..If the personals werent already used five months ago!!

    ok

    Go back to ya old site kid.. when ya joined RM..
    You shoulda been a singer...
    ..so you could really be-boys to men

    nice

    You will never be-a-ten... so stop MCin
    Like the word above^...
    ..I can take lines out, and youll still get beaten

    nice

    Need another extension?.. well its not that likely
    Ya verse is in question... no wonder you cant ask nicely

    dope

    I saw ya girl cheatin.. and man, Id straight hit her
    Ya girl didnt wither away... I went away wither

    ok

    Last week Cale made you 9-2... losin twice is bad
    But to the same person!? damn, that shit's twice as bad

    nope

    Spit somethin new for a change.. ya shit's not felt now
    Ya verse had a breakthrough...
    ..must be where all the good lines fell out

    dope

    Fuck doin a concert.. ya show is gay hoe
    Kid had to mention g-unit...
    ..to get the crowd goin "Yay! Oh!"

    ok

    Ya shook, I won... Ima shoot clips 'til ya die son
    When I leave shells on you...
    ..its gonna 'beetle' you look like one

    nice wordplay

    And its no joke when I let the heat spray
    I put a pound to ya chest...
    ..faster than a fat bitch eatin cheesecake

    nope

    Fuck goin platinum.. ya album's straight wack, you suck
    You never saw-mills... I jus left ya face strapped to one

    nope

    Gettin past me? its apparent that you never have
    You wont 'get father'... its a-parent that you never have

    the wording was wrong or else this could have been dope

    Namix aint ya full name... put this fucker in his place
    I wont dye-namix... thas real blood coverin his face!

    so dyenamix is his full name right?

    Look at this guy.. fuck him, kid's gonna die
    I made him face the music...
    ..by shovin a drumstick in his eye

    ok

    You should win an award.. man, it was meant to be
    Ya ‘verse is always worthy’... worst ones ive ever seen!

    ok

    both of yall came with some hot lines, fu show

    I wasnt feeling nam's flow and this really was a wordplay vs wordplay battle.

    I think nams wordplay was cleaner then imps. They we're worded better and hit harder

    vote-nam, hot battle
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  17. Kanyne

    Kanyne 6x RBL Participant...lol

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    Vote= Imp jz came a lil more consistant with the hard punches.
    bestline=Namix-link/zelda
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  18. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Sorry guys, to be honest text battling in general bores me anymore, not too much of anything impresses me, including my own shit. I really just wasnt feeling your styles of wordplay, whether it be using a word with 2 meanings like the beaten punch, or plays on words. Concept shit is boring. Props on at least being different from everyone else....you CAN peep my shit, I dont care, I refuse to write the same way as everyone else. Twas a cool battle, even if I came off like a jerk :/
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  19. Vember

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    IMPERS:
    Spit somethin new for a change.. ya shit's not felt now
    Ya verse had a breakthrough...
    ..must be where all the good lines fell out

    ^that was pretty good, everything before that was average at best IMO, most bullshit filler types it seemed

    wasnt feelin ya verse too much, tha be-a-ten shit, NO...thatz jus like u were tryin too hard to be creative or somethin, didnt find it good at all, in fact i could sware i used somethin like that 2 years ago,lol

    Yayo punch was ya best one i guess, pretty good, but nothin Too over tha top
    Drumstick, no...typical newb line or w/e, seen that too many times
    reallly wasnt feelin ya verse at all like i said, Too many attempts at wordplay that were forced

    Namix:
    bitch your just all flaws, i’ll beat u faster than frost thaws,
    this battles like a crow with laryngitis for u…a lost caws

    I that that line was pretty good, u shouldnt have put "a" in, so it could make sense both ways, but thats jus wha i think
    Everything before tat was much better than Imp's, even tho it was jus average personals and wut not
    the givein "storm G brains" one sounds extremmely familiar tho, believe peoples already used that
    Middle was boring, Imp rest in peace picked it up tho, pretty good

    Dough’s offed every one of ur pieces,
    …and everyone one of ur pieces make us dough’s off

    Nice concept, but i wasnt feelin tha way it was written down or whatever

    blah, nother boring couplet
    Shockgod did a zelda/link line N s hit, wasnt really too fond of that, but ok
    Closer was better than Imp's

    Overall Namix kept his verse much less boring even during the not so good parts with better flow, Imp didnt really beat Nam in any category

    Punches-namix
    Creativity-namix ...imp's was jus all forced n ish, badly messed up his verse with the Dye-namix and stuff
    personals-namix by a lil, neither really thru that much that stood out, but namix edged this
    Flow-namix

    v/Namix...had the better lines and flow which made his boring parts as i said seem less boring.
    Imp jus was plain, i was really feeling tormented thruout most of his verse to have to read it
    Ridiculous wordplay was horrid, you wont get father...a-parent, naw
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  20. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    2-2 i think... good battle imp fo' sho.... i hope u get around to votin even tho u thought both of us sucked vem lol =) .. thanks for the time tho fella's..
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