7. I Deal 19-3 vs 8. Roadblock 8-0

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  1. U S E R

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  2. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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  3. Donis

    Donis New Member

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  4. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    lets get this over with...


    Alone in disgrace standing frozen in place,
    Tang knows damn well he’s no more than the I.Deal opponent to face.
    He claims thug, but his hippie ass lacks the right nature....
    Reppin’ a Woodstock that amounts to a stash of vibrators.
    You talk guns. Get OFF that play, mark.
    You’re scared of Long Shanks like the noble Scots in Braveheart.
    Fuckin’ recycling chump. You ain’t HALF as illin’;
    Them backdrafts couldn’t ignite a sub-African abandoned buildin'.
    Ya pen strokes make you a flavor-less narrator....
    Goddamn. Every letter ya drop is a less than savory character.
    You ain’t handlin’ me – Even after my peak.
    Gunplay comes off your lips like a band of pre-teens; playin’ Canon in D.
    Ya best shit brings less than a scare....
    Write box verses n' leave with rhymes resemblin’ Tienenmann Square.
    My vengeance is rare. Ya musta short’d cha memory.
    Call me Matt Damon. The second I was Bourne....Supremacy.
    I rhyme in Technicolor. You bring half the impression
    With them ‘many shades of Grae’....like an X-men glasses collection.
    Fruit, that semen necklace is a reason for sweatin’....
    So, I’m here addin ‘another Pearl’ like the most recent beheadin’.
    Maaan, it’s just that I rock it plain sick....
    Not to brag. But, even Jefferson Airplane calls His Grace, slick.
    Doc....you ain’t shit – You don’t feed no groupies.
    They all throw Hustle at my Sizemore like that new Pete Rose movie.
    My A game’ll show ya what Tangible’s worth....
    He’s rockin C-sections. While my place in the top ten's a natural berth.
    Ya think ya my boy. But, treat this bitch like 8 Mile.
    You get nothing more than a backstabbing Wink. Ok - and a fake smile.
    Cuz you run with posers, my man;
    So, best believe - Each vote ‘gainst me just serves to show how much doper I am.


    annnnnd....that’s the truth, pottna.
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  5. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    Pfffftt. Get ya fuckin weight up, old man.


    I think you having identity problems. Sonny, that aint coo.
    Cause I know exactly what a-don-is…. & truust me, that aint you.
    Self proclaimed net legend. Would you still ack hard when -
    You get the newsflash... YOU ONLY HAVE 1 DICK RIDER LEFT AT RM.
    Skinny white kid. I seen ya pic. No doubt a disgrace.
    I think I’d laugh if any of those tough words actually came outta ya face.
    Ohh, that’s right. You've got no voice, you only type text.
    Like, an 8 year text career… & somehow aint even touched a mic yet.
    Reality check, Ron J. You been stuck in the minor leagues.
    I’da called you has-been 2 years ago – but your bitch ass still trynna be.
    & I know a dope verse. That wont be how urs is described, kid.
    This is a fucking rap battle, not some kind of annoying movie guide quiz.
    Ur a hick, & frankly son. You rhyme in stacks & the pairs suck.
    Whats up with that short-long shit… is you trynna match ya haircut?
    Fuck outta here wit dat bullshit, Im floorin this queer.
    Aint no thang tho… RB’s are used to having shortened careers.
    You put no whores into tears. Only bluffin a whole lot.
    Last time I checked, only piss drunk people get fucked by a roadblock.
    Ohh, & this aint UPN – where ya groupies get hella violent.
    ... So I went ahead & saved you a thread to repost this on ellis island.
    Youse a homo... Who never gon stop with the cockhandlin'.
    Catch Donis pullin stick for quarters. & I aint talkin bout slot-gamblin.
    You neva robbed nobody. Quit that slang you spit, geek
    The only one thing you could EVER take from Tang, is a critique.
    So its one punch, niguh trust me – ya ass’ll be long gone.
    Ill leave ya eyes puffy enough to model glasses for sean john.
    Bottles, glasses, they all thrown – No guns this time.
    But after 8 wins in a row.... You can still watch me dump this 9.
    Leave this dumb bitch lyin. & next time ur knees grasp a victory dance
    It’ll be a triumphant 2 step… followed by rehab facility chants.


    Biiiiiiiitch. -I.D.
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  6. Fliped ScRiPtZ

    Fliped ScRiPtZ Flips yur scriptz

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    nice battle...
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  7. Imperial

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    I think donis got it.. Ideal's was harder and had some good shit, but some of it wasnt clever enough. Donis was just more consistent. LOL at him dissin tang for recyclin, then tang recyclin the puffy line. Honestly, it seemed like someone else wrote most of Tang's verse.. its nothin like the one he had vs me last week.

    Vote: Roadblock
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  8. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    wow u really on my dick niguh


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  9. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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    vote=tang

    nice battle..

    i like both verses, but i felt tangs was a lil more direct and witty..

    line of the battle..

    Reality check, Ron J. You been stuck in the minor leagues.
    I’da called you has-been 2 years ago – but your bitch ass still trynna be.
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  10. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    WTF you talkin about?
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  11. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    nice verse, pretty solid all in all man i liked it a lot




    man dope ass battle, adonis came really consistant and that opening section was real dope...for me that done enoguh to take this battle dukes, real good shit got what i expected.

    vote-don
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  12. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    this was a hella nice battle to read.

    Ideal-you had some nice lines in there, i was feelin the adonis line that you dropped early and that haircut line too. Roadblock line was cool too.

    Roadblock-you dropped a nice verse, your references were all nice, the first 6 lines or so were all fire, and i liked that bourne supremacy line for some reason.

    vote-Roadblock
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  13. Noble.

    Noble. New Member

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    I'ma be real here.. block you had some braggin lines and some lines that attacked and some that didn't. I really wasn't feelin your punches, because sometimes you try to get TOO creative to the point where I gotta look up shit on google to get half of your punches. Doesn't really make it entertaining at all just boring. The bourne line was dope great wording everything else was trying to hard to be clever which throws the reader way off. That's what I always thought about your battles sometimes I get it the other times I would have to think really hard on the punch and well I don't want to sit here and read a college homework sheet. Anyways I thought I.deal came pretty dope he was mad consistent punches were just nice on mixtape type shit. He recycled one line, but that's ok though writing a bang of lines each week can hurt ya, and you have to recycle. Other than that deal got a real smooth flow rolls off the tounge punches were just there didn't bore me, and overall was more consistent than donis.

    V- deal
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  14. Siege.

    Siege. WHOOPSY DAISY

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    Reality check, Ron J. You been stuck in the minor leagues.
    I’da called you has-been 2 years ago – but your bitch ass still trynna be.
    & I know a dope verse. That wont be how urs is described, kid.
    This is a fucking rap battle, not some kind of annoying movie guide quiz.
    Ur a hick, & frankly son. You rhyme in stacks & the pairs suck.
    Whats up with that short-long shit… is you trynna match ya haircut?
    Ohh, & this aint UPN – where ya groupies get hella violent.
    ... So I went ahead & saved you a thread to repost this on ellis island.
    Youse a homo... Who never gon stop with the cockhandlin'.
    Catch Donis pullin stick for quarters. & I aint talkin bout slot-gamblin
    So its one punch, niguh trust me – ya ass’ll be long gone.
    Ill leave ya eyes puffy enough to model glasses for sean john.

    i felt those were better then all of rb's verse

    v-I Deal
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  15. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Yeah, I'm going to have to go with I.Deal too. Roadblock had about 2 or 3 punches I liked, Deal came a lil' more consistent throughout...

    vote: I DEal
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  16. Chris P. Nutz

    Chris P. Nutz New Member

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    v-deal

    Block verse was ight,jus i wasnt feeling it as much bored me quickly.deal came nice though.basically winning off personals.the movie guide quiz and the haircut line kilt it for me lol.good battle folks deal jus got this one

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  17. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    I got tangible taking this too. sorry donis. less bragging and more punching, harder.

    v/ tang


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  18. Detailz

    Detailz Your boy

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    adonis came with a bunch of shit only 2% of people get



    with that said, eh....it was a cool verse...didnt make me drop my jaw...ya slippin homie



    tang had some hot stuff, same level.....vote tang
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  19. Eddie.

    Eddie. Weee

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    i got I Deal on this one...

    adonis, i came in here thinkin you would prolly get the win, butt....your verse wasnt all that great, outta 30 lines, there were like 14 i liked, which leaves...16 i didnt...so yeah...as for i deal, your whole verse was flames...that movie quiz line was dope as hell...prolly the line of the battle

    so...vote-I Deal
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  20. DYNASTY

    DYNASTY The Last Of The Best

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    vote - tang aka i.deal aka sinseer.

    it came down to overall verse to me. deal came with some slick punches.
    don started off ill, but dropped down in the middle to me. but finish ok.
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