7. Charles 9-4 vs 8. Scientz 9-2

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  1. GuILl0+INE blADEZ

    GuILl0+INE blADEZ New Member

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    you my boy scientz, but i vote charles...i liked ya verse, but in the end it didn't make me chuckle much or really say wow a lot...i liked hte one to i.deal a lot better...the lack of personals didn't make a whole lot of difference, but using a couple mighta helped some namean...the rhyme scheme was aiight, but a few played concepts hurt you, and this goes to both of you and EVERYONE in the RBL: dissin someone saying i'm fuckin ya girl, it's been played and it's gotten to the point where it can't get any more played than it already is...i swear there ain't a fuckin verse in the RBL except mine maybe that ain't got a line about i'm fuckin ya girl...the box spring line was nice, an the guerilla's/dinner table line was funny...

    charles had a nice rhyme scheme n a real solid flow, but i also liked the punches he was dropping...the only thing that really got me about ya verse was that you kept sayin "i ain't into guns" then spit a gun line...or "i don't like cum lines" then spit a cum line...if you gonna drop a gun line, then don't set it up with "i don't drop gun lines"...and the thing about shooting blanks...i've heard that concept a few times before...but overall some funny punches, and though this battle was close, in the end it was the humor that pulled it out for ya...

    so vote charles, cuz he made a few mistakes, but still made me say haha more than scientz did...
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  2. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    V - Charles

    Scientz said he keyed his shit, and it shows

    Charles came pretty nice, that rocket line was tight.
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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  4. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    i gotta go with charles on this one...

    although i liked scientz verse alot with punches like the...

    night stand...vijay singh...and mel gibson lines

    charles just got nasty....

    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz

    that was hot

    along with blue moon and whiz kid lines

    i just see charles taking this...it'll be close though...cause scientz didn't have a bad verse...charles just stepped it up...nice read fellas
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  5. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    damn


    closest battle ive read so far.


    both sides had some good, original ish.


    i think scientz had a tad more, however - he gets the vote


    v - Scientz.
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  6. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    vote = charles.

    more clever on the line tip, needed rewording on some. just better lines. imo.
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  7. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    at first I thought scientz would have this.. he had a nice verse, even for keyed.. but then after readin charles's verse, the lil difference between between takin time to write shown thru

    Charles - better set ups, a lil more original with the concepts

    good battle tho

    vote = charles
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  8. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    good shit charles

    respect kid...holla at cha boy
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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