7. Charles 9-4 vs 8. Scientz 9-2

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    lets go

    20-24!!!

    match it....g/l
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  3. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    fuck it...droppin early i got shit to do this weekend

    went a lil more....fuck it match me...couldnt stop keying

    when u see the audience at ya show, u'll shit ya trousers
    cuz three's a crowd.....wit ya moms, pops, n the bouncer
    ^^^i take back what i jus said, nobody stopped in fact
    last time u seen a fan, man...he flew in inside a boxing match
    take u on top of buildings, i wont risk poppin at u
    u'll drop from stories, n be rushed to a general hospital
    ya family's fat n ugly, fightin over chips n bagels
    the guerilla warfare u seen, is them bitches beefin at dinner tables
    i'll merc u for dolo, making sure ya pain never ends
    i would go after ya home, boy...but u dont have a residence
    the bullets r seeds, sci's known to slaughter his targets
    plant a few in ya crop cut, n use ya blood to water the harvest
    if u think ya homies r tough, then im bangin them thugs
    n start taking-out more bitches, than the neighborhood stud
    wanna know how i found wackness? besides ya newb features
    u showed so many signs,
    all u were missing is mel gibson n a few creatures
    ya punches r more like slaps, charles u speak gay things
    this homo stay around woods, like davis love n vijay singh
    one of the worst in the top 30, n im being so blatant
    if u had a series of greatness, the show musta got no ratings
    cant fuck girls on the first date, maybe in a hot dream
    so ya one night stand,
    came wit a dresser, mattress, n box spring
    hope u understand sarcasm, cuz i'll tell u this gladly
    ur bout as good as a heart attack, or death in the family
    i'll creep wit pounds, n leave this fucka beneath the ground
    n brake ya face so hard,
    i'll smell burnt rubber n hear a screeching sound
    u look like firemarshall bill, dog im suddenly scared
    u'll need all of NY's electricity, to help the plugs in ya hair

    no need for a fuckin personal....shit would be too easy that way!!!!

    holla at cha boy!!!
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  4. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    That was a keystyle...looks like it....

    GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE

    fuck what you say,it aint real,your a fake, a phoney
    Scientz dont agree wit religion,but ima make him holy
    i aint into guns duke,im in to war, i'll hold this promise
    fuck puttin a peace to ya head
    .........i'll deploy thousands of my little solidiers on it
    i get a 'damn' after my verse..its astounding me son
    see i get a dam,when the crowd jus wanna drown u in one
    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz
    ya got shot up at prowlers,you cant roll with the best
    always had ya face blew,like you was holdin ya breath
    voting for raw will change ya sex life,like it or not
    works like penis enlargers,cuz youll find sci’s on ya cock
    get beat once in a blue moon n no-ones fuckin wit him?
    well i just did,and God just got out his coloring pens
    i know come lines arnt felt,you see im not foolish man
    but if ya face is expressionless,then im shootin blanks
    ya girl must be autrailian,i met her n' now wonder
    cuz im the world to that bitch,n she always go down under
    sci always jumped in his town,gets bumps n bruises daily
    he scared of the park,like businessmen wit new mercedes
    you'll need a doc once i hit ya chops wit nifty shots
    ya hav more damn ice on ya face than that on fifty's watch
    ill and ur not, I know that we think in different ways
    cuz im on top of the game,you dream of fuckin triple H
    don’t need freeposters to show ya wack wit rhyming bars
    cuz rm aint fulla whiz_kids n’ still no1 finds scientz hard
    you dont write the verses u drop,this is a lesson bruh
    cuz i'd blast you,but im not the type to shoot the messenger
    im a head in this match,n theres blood gushing out yours
    and if anyone says that im tamer,its cuz im hushin up roar


    Bye,Bye..
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  5. Jason123

    Jason123 New Member

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    Man...idk, I think Raw got this really...lmfao @ the 3's a crowd line...and the signs line was fiya...

    ehhh..charles came correct, but scientz got 'em..

    My vote - Raw
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  6. 2krukid

    2krukid Unregistered User

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    when u see the audience at ya show, u'll shit ya trousers
    cuz three's a crowd.....wit ya moms, pops, n the bouncer
    ^^^i take back what i jus said, nobody stopped in fact
    last time u seen a fan, man...he flew in inside a boxing match
    -heh. 3's a crowd nice
    take u on top of buildings, i wont risk poppin at u
    u'll drop from stories, n be rushed to a general hospital
    ya family's fat n ugly, fightin over chips n bagels
    the guerilla warfare u seen, is them bitches beefin at dinner tables
    -ooooooooooooooh!
    i'll merc u for dolo, making sure ya pain never ends
    i would go after ya home, boy...but u dont have a residence
    -lol
    the bullets r seeds, sci's known to slaughter his targets
    plant a few in ya crop cut, n use ya blood to water the harvest
    -ouch
    if u think ya homies r tough, then im bangin them thugs
    n start taking-out more bitches, than the neighborhood stud
    -nice
    wanna know how i found wackness? besides ya newb features
    u showed so many signs,
    all u were missing is mel gibson n a few creatures
    -nice
    ya punches r more like slaps, charles u speak gay things
    this homo stay around woods, like davis love n vijay singh
    -lol
    one of the worst in the top 30, n im being so blatant
    if u had a series of greatness, the show musta got no ratings
    -coo
    cant fuck girls on the first date, maybe in a hot dream
    so ya one night stand,
    came wit a dresser, mattress, n box spring
    -nice
    hope u understand sarcasm, cuz i'll tell u this gladly
    ur bout as good as a heart attack, or death in the family
    -aaight
    i'll creep wit pounds, n leave this fucka beneath the ground
    n brake ya face so hard,
    i'll smell burnt rubber n hear a screeching sound
    -nice
    u look like firemarshall bill, dog im suddenly scared
    u'll need all of NY's electricity, to help the plugs in ya hair
    -coo close


    fuck what you say,it aint real,your a fake, a phoney
    Scientz dont agree wit religion,but ima make him holy
    -coo
    i aint into guns duke,im in to war, i'll hold this promise
    fuck puttin a peace to ya head
    .........i'll deploy thousands of my little solidiers on it
    -lol
    i get a 'damn' after my verse..its astounding me son
    see i get a dam,when the crowd jus wanna drown u in one
    -coo
    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    -oh!
    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz
    -umm na. had the potential tho
    ya got shot up at prowlers,you cant roll with the best
    always had ya face blew,like you was holdin ya breath
    -nice
    voting for raw will change ya sex life,like it or not
    works like penis enlargers,cuz youll find sci’s on ya cock
    -nice
    get beat once in a blue moon n no-ones fuckin wit him?
    well i just did,and God just got out his coloring pens
    -nice
    i know come lines arnt felt,you see im not foolish man
    but if ya face is expressionless,then im shootin blanks
    -fire
    ya girl must be autrailian,i met her n' now wonder
    cuz im the world to that bitch,n she always go down under
    -lol
    sci always jumped in his town,gets bumps n bruises daily
    he scared of the park,like businessmen wit new mercedes
    -nice
    you'll need a doc once i hit ya chops wit nifty shots
    ya hav more damn ice on ya face than that on fifty's watch
    -coo
    ill and ur not, I know that we think in different ways
    cuz im on top of the game,you dream of fuckin triple H
    -aaight
    don’t need freeposters to show ya wack wit rhyming bars
    cuz rm aint fulla whiz_kids n’ still no1 finds scientz hard
    -nice
    you dont write the verses u drop,this is a lesson bruh
    cuz i'd blast you,but im not the type to shoot the messenger
    -ouch.
    im a head in this match,n theres blood gushing out yours
    and if anyone says that im tamer,its cuz im hushin up roar
    -that was dope

    dope battle. i'm giving it to charlez his shit hit more to me.
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  7. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    *will be edited with links*

    see u wanted to do some extra...i went 28 u went 32

    but whatever...let the voting keep coming...good battle
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  8. Dat Gangsta

    Dat Gangsta •••••••••••••

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    Scientz


    when u see the audience at ya show, u'll shit ya trousers
    cuz three's a crowd.....wit ya moms, pops, n the bouncer
    ^^^i take back what i jus said, nobody stopped in fact
    last time u seen a fan, man...he flew in inside a boxing match

    aight opener was cool, but i gotta say and seriously this is 1 of the times that i actually laughed outloud and ity was too the fan man line ahahahhaha, lovin it


    take u on top of buildings, i wont risk poppin at u
    u'll drop from stories, n be rushed to a general hospital
    ya family's fat n ugly, fightin over chips n bagels
    the guerilla warfare u seen, is them bitches beefin at dinner tables

    aigh u slipped here badly..... that bitches at tables line was bad.. and the gebneral hospital line was ok at most. =(

    i'll merc u for dolo, making sure ya pain never ends
    i would go after ya home, boy...but u dont have a residence
    the bullets r seeds, sci's known to slaughter his targets
    plant a few in ya crop cut, n use ya blood to water the harvest

    sci what are tyou doing.... that residence line was eeeh and the water ya harvest was ok at best

    if u think ya homies r tough, then im bangin them thugs
    n start taking-out more bitches, than the neighborhood stud
    wanna know how i found wackness? besides ya newb features
    u showed so many signs,
    all u were missing is mel gibson n a few creatures
    ya punches r more like slaps, charles u speak gay things
    this homo stay around woods, like davis love n vijay singh

    these were coo, nothins special, the davis love and vj singh line was creative//////

    one of the worst in the top 30, n im being so blatant
    if u had a series of greatness, the show musta got no ratings
    cant fuck girls on the first date, maybe in a hot dream
    so ya one night stand,
    came wit a dresser, mattress, n box spring

    EVENTUALLY after ur openers, you were creative, nice, and worded a few nicely with something nice...... was feeling both of these couplets... =)


    hope u understand sarcasm, cuz i'll tell u this gladly
    ur bout as good as a heart attack, or death in the family
    i'll creep wit pounds, n leave this fucka beneath the ground
    n brake ya face so hard,
    i'll smell burnt rubber n hear a screeching sound

    first was ok, second impressed me with inners and multis which has brought the points your ay for this, line was nice, but you used it to effect.. nice


    u look like firemarshall bill, dog im suddenly scared
    u'll need all of NY's electricity, to help the plugs in ya hair

    cloer was original and nice...... i liked it... in the end i think this verse would have 70% of these idiotys quaking in their boot's and to me it was dope, but you mad fell off in the first 1 third of it.... i ono but i think u'll see yourelf


    Charles

    fuck what you say,it aint real,your a fake, a phoney
    Scientz dont agree wit religion,but ima make him holy

    straight up, this line is a NOONOOO to start with a holy line, c'mon... =(


    i aint into guns duke,im in to war, i'll hold this promise
    fuck puttin a peace to ya head
    .........i'll deploy thousands of my little solidiers on it
    i get a 'damn' after my verse..its astounding me son
    see i get a dam,when the crowd jus wanna drown u in one

    the soldier/ peace line was nice and the dam was cool... kinda getting into it just now

    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz

    that rocket sceintz line was switched up nicely, i wasnt expecting it abnd thats what makes it better.. first of these couplets was ok

    ya got shot up at prowlers,you cant roll with the best
    always had ya face blew,like you was holdin ya breath
    voting for raw will change ya sex life,like it or not
    works like penis enlargers,cuz youll find sci’s on ya cock

    that blew line was eeeh, it worked once not again the penis enlargers was ok


    get beat once in a blue moon n no-ones fuckin wit him?
    well i just did,and God just got out his coloring pens
    i know come lines arnt felt,you see im not foolish man
    but if ya face is expressionless,then im shootin blanks

    thwe god line was ok, and the shooting blanks was ok

    ya girl must be autrailian,i met her n' now wonder
    cuz im the world to that bitch,n she always go down under

    lool, i knew this was comming but it had somewhat impact ..

    sci always jumped in his town,gets bumps n bruises daily
    he scared of the park,like businessmen wit new mercedes
    you'll need a doc once i hit ya chops wit nifty shots
    ya hav more damn ice on ya face than that on fifty's watch

    the business man was nicely used the second was eh


    ill and ur not, I know that we think in different ways
    cuz im on top of the game,you dream of fuckin triple H
    don’t need freeposters to show ya wack wit rhyming bars
    cuz rm aint fulla whiz_kids n’ still no1 finds scientz hard
    you dont write the verses u drop,this is a lesson bruh
    cuz i'd blast you,but im not the type to shoot the messenger

    shoot the messanger line was nice, whiz line was eh..... triple H line was different.....

    im a head in this match,n theres blood gushing out yours
    and if anyone says that im tamer,its cuz im hushin up roar

    closer was cool, not really seen it that way.... in the end same as scientz nice but didnt live up to what i wanted, sorry...

    IT MAY BE THO, THAT I HAVE THAT MUCH RESPECT FOR BOTH F YOU, THAT I WANT MORE..... if u know what i mean, i just wanted and wanted i know u can give it.. in the end tho

    real nice battle waay above average, but i gotta go with scientz slightly.... due to more memorabelia.... dope battle tho, my criticsm is prolly bad, but its not meant to be.


    vote- scientz
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  9. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    hot battle, charles came nice, that mercedes line was hot, scientz ripped shit that signs line was dope as fuck, charles came nice and all but i think scientz got this one

    vote - scientz
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  10. Srevir Rm

    Srevir Rm WentFromGodToGodDamn

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    decent match here


    Scientz had some pretty dope lines, but some were pretty forced in my opinion, and altho he had some dope punches, i found a bit of blahness in it. i guess the style wasn't all that appealing to me.

    Charles, altho some of your lines were worded pretty weak, i felt your concepts more, and your style more. the flow was pretty sick, the personals were nice, and you rounded everything out nicely. a decent verse


    vote-Charles due to a more enjoyable verse, written a bit better too in my opinion


    nicest sequence:

    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz
    ya got shot up at prowlers,you cant roll with the best
    always had ya face blew,like you was holdin ya breath
    voting for raw will change ya sex life,like it or not
    works like penis enlargers,cuz youll find sci’s on ya cock


    lol, nice shit


    keep spittin

    pz
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  11. Masyre

    Masyre New Member

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    Vote charles



    i liked this battle because him and sci came with some flamin ass verses but charles had more punches to me
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  12. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Scientz


    heres my scale for this long ass battle.. 1= fuckin ill, 0 = dope/what i expect, -1= not as good as i expected.. (this is just to give me a feel, im not basing my vote on it)

    when u see the audience at ya show, u'll shit ya trousers
    cuz three's a crowd.....wit ya moms, pops, n the bouncer
    ..0, i wasnt feeling this as much as some kids, but it was still pretty cool

    ^^^i take back what i jus said, nobody stopped in fact
    last time u seen a fan, man...he flew in inside a boxing match
    ...-1, i wasnt feeling this that much.. not the freshest concept, but it was aiight

    take u on top of buildings, i wont risk poppin at u
    u'll drop from stories, n be rushed to a general hospital
    ...1, lol, general hospital is stigma's as that, good shit lol..

    ya family's fat n ugly, fightin over chips n bagels
    the guerilla warfare u seen, is them bitches beefin at dinner tables
    ...0, heh, funny stuff..

    i'll merc u for dolo, making sure ya pain never ends
    i would go after ya home, boy...but u dont have a residence
    .....1, haha, it was so simple, but i cant believe i havent heard homeboy before, it was dope though lol.. so simple it made me laugh

    the bullets r seeds, sci's known to slaughter his targets
    plant a few in ya crop cut, n use ya blood to water the harvest
    ....1, nice imagery

    if u think ya homies r tough, then im bangin them thugs
    n start taking-out more bitches, than the neighborhood stud
    ....-1, naw, you had nice wording, but the taking out concept has been played a lot

    wanna know how i found wackness? besides ya newb features
    u showed so many signs,
    all u were missing is mel gibson n a few creatures
    ....0, pretty cool

    ya punches r more like slaps, charles u speak gay things
    this homo stay around woods, like davis love n vijay singh
    ....0... aiight aiight, feelin it

    one of the worst in the top 30, n im being so blatant
    if u had a series of greatness, the show musta got no ratings
    .....-1, ehhh, i think 'ish like that is sort of worn out personally..

    cant fuck girls on the first date, maybe in a hot dream
    so ya one night stand,
    came wit a dresser, mattress, n box spring
    ...1, hahah

    hope u understand sarcasm, cuz i'll tell u this gladly
    ur bout as good as a heart attack, or death in the family
    ...0, cool..

    i'll creep wit pounds, n leave this fucka beneath the ground
    n brake ya face so hard,
    i'll smell burnt rubber n hear a screeching sound
    ...1, nice, rockin some more imagery.. smooth one

    u look like firemarshall bill, dog im suddenly scared
    u'll need all of NY's electricity, to help the plugs in ya hair
    .....1, again nice, not feeling it for a closer tho..

    +3...means i thought it was better than even usual, dope shit.. You didnt have personals tho , and i woulda dug that.. but you still came nice, pretty consistent.. mostly fresh concepts.. good read..
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  13. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Charles..

    fuck what you say,it aint real,your a fake, a phoney
    Scientz dont agree wit religion,but ima make him holy
    ........0, your right scientz dont agree with religion, i feel that, but holy wordplay is real played out so it didnt quite make it reaal dope..

    i aint into guns duke,im in to war, i'll hold this promise
    fuck puttin a peace to ya head
    .........i'll deploy thousands of my little solidiers on it
    .....-1, heh naw man, i dont know why but i wasnt feeling this one at all..

    i get a 'damn' after my verse..its astounding me son
    see i get a dam,when the crowd jus wanna drown u in one
    .......-1, just being real homeslice, you know this ;) ... But a Dam is what actually BLOCKS water into a reserviour , or something of the like.. so it didnt reaaaaaally make sense.. and damn./dam wordplay is played.. 'stop ur flow like DAMN', so on and so forth.. but it was still nice delivery of it..

    im gutter sonny,I fuck wit money n meet foes wit steel
    ya see i mean business,when you cant even close a Deal
    ....0, cool.. simple, but pretty nice..

    im a genious kid,check my guns,the steel im cockins giant
    i'll take raw out the equation,then fuckin rocket scientz
    ......0, aiight, you were on to a real dope thing here i fell like, but didnt quiteeeee pull it off.. it was still pretty nice though.. its hard to make Raw and scientz connect.. i said something reaaal stretched like 'im fuckin Scientz up like dr. jekyll and got everyone watchin Raw hyde'... (it was in a league he didnt show for lol).. but it was a cool attempt man, nice

    ya got shot up at prowlers,you cant roll with the best
    always had ya face blew,like you was holdin ya breath
    .........0, real nice, i thought this one was pretty tight, even though blue/blew wordplay is sort of played in my opinion

    voting for raw will change ya sex life,like it or not
    works like penis enlargers,cuz youll find sci’s on ya cock
    .....0, aiight, i just dont think you werded it very nicely, i think it coulda been flipped even nicer, but it was pretty coo

    get beat once in a blue moon n no-ones fuckin wit him?
    well i just did,and God just got out his coloring pens
    ....0, lol man, i dig this sorta, its pretty creative, but doesnt quite deliver a HARD punch..

    i know come lines arnt felt,you see im not foolish man
    but if ya face is expressionless,then im shootin blanks
    ......1, haha, dope man..

    ya girl must be autrailian,i met her n' now wonder
    cuz im the world to that bitch,n she always go down under
    ......0, ok... i said to DVS who is from australia "Australia is down under the equator's belt, but ur just down under tony's", so i wasnt feeling it as much as some kids might..

    sci always jumped in his town,gets bumps n bruises daily
    he scared of the park,like businessmen wit new mercedes
    ...0, pretty dope... its nice, but not yet VERY hard hitting, its not the meeeeeeanest diss, you know? still a cool thought tho

    you'll need a doc once i hit ya chops wit nifty shots
    ya hav more damn ice on ya face than that on fifty's watch
    ......-1, im sorry homeslice, i just really cant stand ice lines.. i dont even think their hard hitting, they dont even offend me.. and the comparisons to •••lery or snow or anything like that im not feeling.. you had an aiight delivery of it tho

    ill and ur not, I know that we think in different ways
    cuz im on top of the game,you dream of fuckin triple H
    .....-1, damn doggy, these last two bars have been the worst of your verse so far, i think this one is the worst tho lol.. I really hate wrestling lines, some kid had a nice triple H line a couple weeks ago, but i think its the only one i ever felt.. this was a simple delivery of it too partna.. not feeling it at all..

    don’t need freeposters to show ya wack wit rhyming bars
    cuz rm aint fulla whiz_kids n’ still no1 finds scientz hard
    .......1, haha, pretty nice here... i think you coulda have a little nicer reference to whiz kid, but it was still nice

    you dont write the verses u drop,this is a lesson bruh
    cuz i'd blast you,but im not the type to shoot the messenger
    .......0, ehh, you needed a cooler reference to messenger than you did man.. It was ok..

    im a head in this match,n theres blood gushing out yours
    and if anyone says that im tamer,its cuz im hushin up roar
    ........1, hah, aiight aiight.. not feeling it for an ender man, but

    -1, dope verse man.. negative one really is nice because you know your a dope head so dont get it twisted, i just think that on average here you normally come a little nicer, and it wasnt your concepts.. it almost felt slightly rushed at points, your wording wasnt quite as nice as it often times is, but you still were nice..


    Vote- Scientz


    Why? I thought this was close, and it was hard for me to decide, because while Scientz had slightly nicer delivery and wording, Charels made up for it with some pretty nice name flips, making it slightly more personal.. so it was pretty close, a couple times i fell off of charle's flow, cuz sometimes for instance people pronounce, yours as yeeeers, (not for me exactly just givin ya a heads up on words that can sound different), or bruh with messenger.. anyway, close battle guys, good reads..
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  14. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    vote - charles

    scientz seemed rush, less developed punches throughout his verse, while it looks like Charles took his time, flow-wise too. this just seemed like a case of underestimation by Scientz, or he was busy or somethin, cool battle though, props to both
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  15. rosa

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    goddamn that was ill



    vote - Charles

    holla if you want a full breakdown
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  16. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    I was anticipating this one as I did ranks..



    Feelin both of yall styles to the upmost..



    Aint gonna drop a vote, just wanted to show some credit..


    Some fiyah in here.
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  17. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Raw Sci

    Charles came with more of a verse but he came whacker in my eyes, his lines didnt match up with raws.. raw came with some pretty sick wordplay and he had some nice flips in there, this is what i seen Charles lacked hard punches some of the time but he had a decent verse, close battle. 1.
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  18. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    Sceints had the fan mine line, crop cut, home boy, sgins dope, wood coo, brake, alot of nice word play N dope personals . Charles had the dam line, deal coo personal, face blew coo, scis dope, down unde rdope, triple H, whiz kid coo personal, messenger funny..

    Cahrles ahd way more dope punches N concpets so

    v- Charles
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  19. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    This shit was dope. Both verses was flames, Sci had the wordplay everywhere.. Charles just came consistanly nice. More creative & harder hitting lines imo

    So I gotta give it to

    vote- Charles
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  20. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    OMFG, this battle was so fuckin ill.

    After readin Sci's verse, i didnt think charles was gonna be able to keep it close. Sci jus came so consistent wit nice lines. He had a couple real hard hitters, but mainly he had tons of nice lines, not fallin off at all.

    Charles wasnt quite as consistent. He had a lot more real standout lines though.

    I had to read this shit twice. In the end, im givin it to Charles, mainly for havin like 1 or 2 more blowout lines. It was so close, he jus came off a little harder to me.

    Dope ass battle.

    Vote: Charles
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