65. The Other Nova (0-0) vs. 66. MENACE (0-0)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
    -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


    -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


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  2. The Other Nova

    The Other Nova Nooooooooooooooova!

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  3. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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  4. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    (To Naughty By Nature's Uptown Anthem Instrumental)

    You asshole it's over//
    Is that so? a mismatched flow, tear a new black hole in nova//
    Go back to PBS or nova's home wherever that is//
    Im Alonzo Harris, (Puts tha 40 cal. to Jake's head)
    Take deep pcp breaths, overdose, inhale it faggot//
    u get slept on like sealy's, call me a bed of nails on mattress//
    Ruff neck like MC Lyte, hence we fight, Ladies Gents and dykes//
    watch me knock him off his feet, Sticky's like----- "whats left but empty nikes?"//
    Human Punch bag, body u till ur lungs lundge back--- human hunch back//
    Amusing, Im that, menace is a yada yada yada.... what a useless comeback...

    Im OutTie Good Luck
    OnE LoVe
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  5. The Other Nova

    The Other Nova Nooooooooooooooova!

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    im guessing u never battled before, that'd hurt u back then...
    but ur challenged mentally a hell of a lot more than ya verses have been
    and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET
    i havent seen something rely so much on flow and college humor
    ...since office chats and stories told at the water cooler
    im sorry, loser...in case i havent told you, ya cool
    but i dunno how long a persons 'prime' lasts, but yea...it's over for you
    i hope we can be friends tho, please don't be a sore loser
    wow tho, that one verse discredited ur past, and ruined ur whole future
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  6. SevenBC

    SevenBC I ♥ to sleep

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    Whoa nice battle..Both of you guys came nice.. let me break it down

    Best lines from Menace

    You asshole it's over//
    Is that so? a mismatched flow, tear a new black hole in nova//

    Ruff neck like MC Lyte, hence we fight, Ladies Gents and dykes//
    watch me knock him off his feet, Sticky's like----- "whats left but empty nikes?"//
    Human Punch bag, body u till ur lungs lundge back--- human hunch back//
    Amusing, Im that, menace is a yada yada yada.... what a useless comeback

    menace's verse is very well written, perfect flow, and words, vocabulary.. It lets u imagine that it's really happening, and it's funny at the same time.. nice punches.. and well written

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    The Other NOVA's Best Lines:

    and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET

    i havent seen something rely so much on flow and college humor
    ...since office chats and stories told at the water cooler

    These were the best lines, but the rest was kinda lacking something..


    Overall.. My vote Goes to MENACE.. he seems like a better writer.. I normally don't like all the physical imaginary battling, but in this case it was well written, flowed better, and served it's purpose

    VOTE: MENACE
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  7. montana Grimey

    montana Grimey tony montana's crackbaby.

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    Before anything, MENACE, plz Answer the riddle below..

    Go back to PBS or nova's home wherever that is//
    Im Alonzo Harris, (Puts tha 40 cal. to Jake's head)

    ^Who the hell is Jake, mate?





    You asshole it's over//
    Is that so? a mismatched flow, tear a new black hole in nova//

    Ruff neck like MC Lyte, hence we fight, Ladies Gents and dykes//
    watch me knock him off his feet, Sticky's like----- "whats left but empty nikes?"//
    Human Punch bag, body u till ur lungs lundge back--- human hunch back//

    Amusing, Im that, menace is a yada yada yada.... what a useless comeback...


    ^FAVS...


    You came out nice, but nothing directing ur opp. really...
    You have a agressive style and you see it when you read ya verse,
    ya verse never got boring too me and actually had me wanting to
    read more... But I guess you thought Nova wasent a challenge and
    you camed kinda half-assed.









    im guessing u never battled before, that'd hurt u back then...
    but ur challenged mentally a hell of a lot more than ya verses have been
    and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET

    im sorry, loser...in case i havent told you, ya cool
    but i dunno how long a persons 'prime' lasts, but yea...it's over for you
    i hope we can be friends tho, please don't be a sore loser
    wow tho, that one verse discredited ur past, and ruined ur whole future



    ^LMAO!!...


    yea Nova you came real nice, funny as hell also.
    In my view this was a Landslide...
    eventhough MENACE came ightt...

    Its obvious who won this, and hopefully I get too see more
    from yall in RBL...





    Nova won this shitnizz...
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  8. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    For My Mate Montana Grimey- Im talking about Training Day (alonzo harris) its all good tho, YO NOVA NICE VERSE, feeling that shit may that best emcee win, no hate dunny, OnE LoVe

    1-1
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  9. Rex Werdz

    Rex Werdz Rex Werdz RMX.

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    Vote - The Other Nova

    MENACE's verse did not really make too much sense to me at all, WHO THE FUCK IS JACK?!?!?..your verse made no real sense to me & therefore i didnt like it..

    Nova's verse was overall much better, with better everything..decent verse

    pz.
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  10. Colossus.

    Colossus. ^

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    vote- nova

    guy just had a harder hitting verse. other guy's was alright, but mostly overly forced bullshit. nova's was a little more polished.
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  11. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    FOR EVERYONE TO KNOW.... WATCH THA MOVIE TRAINING DAY JESUS CHRIST...
    Anyway No Hate...

    3-1 Nova Uppin 4 votes

    JAKE IZ THA COP IN TRAINING DAY DENZEL WASHINGTON OR WHO? (ALONZO HARRIS) puts tha piece too lol

    OnE lOvE
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  12. DirtBoy69

    DirtBoy69 why is this wrong?

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    real close battle alright verses from both sides i thought

    fav lines: menace "You asshole it's over//
    Is that so? a mismatched flow, tear a new black hole in nova//" solid opener i liked it

    nova-"and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET" nice addressed the oppenent well

    punches- nova
    flow-menace
    overall appeal- menace the rhyming seemed more concrete to me a few of novas lines the rhyming seemed a little hit and miss

    vote--menace
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  13. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    good lookin out...

    3-2 nova

    one
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  14. Terse

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    this battle was aight...

    Menace had coo multis, which were a plus....structure coulda used some work, but there was a good flow to his verse.... & his concepts were there, but the punches werent...they seemed a indirect...n if they did hit, they werent very hard-hittin...

    Nova's verse was straight.....the structure & flow was good....but he got this cuz he had a good mix of personals & punches that actually connected...plus he was more consistent...

    Vote - Nova
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  15. D.A.N.G.E.R.

    D.A.N.G.E.R. Fresh Emcee!

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    Good battle

    i liked overall menaces verse
    he came harder n wittier
    menace had a lot of good multis that were good
    very close battle though
    vote -Menace

    *edited cuz was bored i red the battle again n actually thought that menace won this*

    pce
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  16. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    4-3 Nova

    I think thats tha battle, I forget how many votes u need to win cuz i aint battled in here since last year.

    NoVa Word up ya shit was hottness, stay up, OnE
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  17. DA PUERTO RICAN

    DA PUERTO RICAN New Member

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    nice battle, both came hard but i personally liked menace's punchlines and flow better
    very close though
    i liked menace's first line, that was hot

    v-menace
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  18. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    good lookin out...
    i dunno if it even matters nemore tho

    5-3
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  19. Known Rapper

    Known Rapper New Member

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    Lynn mass right here...menace i seen your from boston lol

    You asshole it's over//
    Is that so? a mismatched flow, tear a new black hole in nova//

    ^^ so so
    Go back to PBS or nova's home wherever that is//
    Im Alonzo Harris, (Puts tha 40 cal. to Jake's head)

    ^^ i know wut your talking bout...but how is that a punch?

    Take deep pcp breaths, overdose, inhale it faggot//
    u get slept on like sealy's, call me a bed of nails on mattress//

    ^^ok

    Ruff neck like MC Lyte, hence we fight, Ladies Gents and dykes//
    watch me knock him off his feet, Sticky's like----- "whats left but empty nikes?"//
    Human Punch bag, body u till ur lungs lundge back--- human hunch back//
    Amusing, Im that, menace is a yada yada yada.... what a useless comeback...

    ^^ good flow..but no real punch

    other nova

    im guessing u never battled before, that'd hurt u back then...
    but ur challenged mentally a hell of a lot more than ya verses have been

    ^^decent

    and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET

    ^^ funny i guess

    i havent seen something rely so much on flow and college humor
    ...since office chats and stories told at the water cooler
    im sorry, loser...in case i havent told you, ya cool
    but i dunno how long a persons 'prime' lasts, but yea...it's over for you

    ^^ old and played out

    i hope we can be friends tho, please don't be a sore loser
    wow tho, that one verse discredited ur past, and ruined ur whole future

    ^^ i dunno bout this


    not a great battle...really cant see any one that won and stood out...but menace took this cuz atleast it was orginal and something i new kinda lol ...very sub par battle...step up the game...fella's

    vote-menace
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  20. Carl Carlson

    Carl Carlson and two your change....

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    vote nova. had a few decent punches in there.

    menaces' vers was aight, flow was cool and the opener was cool, but i personally wasnt feeling anything else.

    and dont talk back to me, i've just riled the worst vet
    ...who's been here since 2000, and aint got a style that works YET
    ^ this was a pretty funny personal, and my favourite bar of the battle.

    v/nova
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