65 Phatkid 8-7 vs 66 Al Murder U 6-8

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  2. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    haha....word, sup kid

    Jay ReEz

    goin bout 10-14
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  3. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    Herb i heard your a nerd, and that seems about true
    cause not even ya hoola hoop, wants to be around you
    im beating out dude, notice this ho isnt flowin so great
    Battlin me, he should grab ahold of a roll, so he can hold his own weight
    oh, no no no, wait, he'll prolly say that shit is played,
    so instead ill play a game of frisbee with his head and a dinner plate
    let me demonstrate, how u get a name for a fat kid with a tiny belt
    Jus push his big ass over, and the wait til he says, "Hey, INEEDHELP!"
    fallen and he cant get up, kinda like his rank in the battle league
    in the last two months only thing about him that's raised is his calories
    your only Half a G, and no, not cause ya pretend ya gangsta
    it's cause the scale said 500 pounds, last time ya asked ya boyfriend to weigh ya
    this shit is major, i almost know what ya gonna say without words
    Simply say my shit's better than your's, since ur gonna play off of my verse


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  4. INEEDHELP

    INEEDHELP 11 year olds get spanked

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    I aint playin off ya verse, I only do that when competition is worthy
    And simply put, this kid sucks more then Bart Simpson with a slurppy
    I rhyme for me, the heck with what ya want
    Your recipe wouldn’t be raw dog, if you were a Chinese restaurant
    Let’s get it on, my verse is polished, and yours is shotty
    Hence: you get shitted on more then a warm port-a-potty
    It’s Al Murder U a.k.a. Jae ReEz,
    But either way you say it, it means the same thing
    A complaining little baby, that’s been on my nuts since day three
    You obviously like Dick, like Bush with Cheney
    See, I can easily win by simply saying cliché things
    Yet, it takes you all day to say something halfway entertaining
    This is the last line, so I should prolly use a closer about this poser’s composure
    Ah fuck it, I already pulled your bitch card, like female dogs playing poker
    It’s over…
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  5. Haides

    Haides All In That A$$

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    They were both average verses in my opinion... No real punches... just a lot of jabs... I'll have to go with with Al Murder U on this one. INEEDHELP put up a good fight but Al just made more sense to me...

    Vote- AL Murder U
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  6. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    ^Word, basically.

    V/Al Murder

    He had stronger punches, better wording, and stronger personals.
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  7. Andrew`

    Andrew` fascinoso

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    I aint playin off ya verse, I only do that when competition is worthy
    And simply put, this kid sucks more then Bart Simpson with a slurppy
    A complaining little baby, that’s been on my nuts since day three
    You obviously like Dick, like Bush with Cheney

    ^those are someplayed ass lines there.....Bush/Dick...Talib Kweli...the proud.
    Plus Al had a few "better" punches than Phatkid.

    Vote Al Murder U
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  8. MC Uncle Jesse

    MC Uncle Jesse Better rapper than joey

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    "let me demonstrate, how u get a name for a fat kid with a tiny belt
    Jus push his big ass over, and the wait til he says, "Hey, INEEDHELP!"


    That was funny for some reason. Al murder u just had a much more consistannt flow and his punches hovered around personal.

    Ineedhelp didn't come too weak or anything its just that his punches didn't connect as much and the flow was way off in places
    based on that
    V= Al Murder u
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  9. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    good battle, you both came about the same at eachother... Jay Reez edged it with a few more disses.... Phatkid came with some ish about bart simpson and then bush/cheney, those two didn't seem to fit well..

    Vote - Jay Reez


    stay up
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  10. INEEDHELP

    INEEDHELP 11 year olds get spanked

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    I always do this, I try to come as hard as my opponent, fuck it, from here on out I'll come harder, nice verse though... hmmm anyways uppin 5-0 Jay Reez

    votes go here
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  11. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    INEED HELP

    I rhyme for me, the heck with what ya want
    Your recipe wouldn’t be raw dog, if you were a Chinese restaurant

    your closer was okay also.. but nothing else...still nice read...

    AL MURDER U

    fallen and he cant get up, kinda like his rank in the battle league
    in the last two months only thing about him that's raised is his calories

    best line to me....I thought u had solid lines nothing great but some humor and all..with the hoola hoop line..and all still u held it down..

    my vote AL Murder U
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  12. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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  13. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    lmfao my Al merked this.

    Seriously.

    V/Al murder you
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  14. SmokaJoka666

    SmokaJoka666 PostmorteM

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    ^Poor flip of an old concept....

    Vote - Al Murder U
    Reason:
    At least had better punches...original concepts and a few harder punches in his verse.....Phatkid didn't have much to quote and if it was quotable it wasn't really anything that was original or hasn't been said before....which is why A.M.U. gets my vote...
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  15. XNTU8

    XNTU8 HipHop ACCENTUATION

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    true, alot was played fav lines... chinese restaurante.... decent but old... almurder you stayed on point...

    i liked readin als better

    vote al
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  16. FLAMES.

    FLAMES. dboy fresh.

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    Ehh.. this battle was aight.

    INEEDHELP.. came with the same boring stuff. Nothing worth thinking about.

    A lil' advice: Try rewording ya shit, & use the simplicity to create your punches, set up & concepts.

    Al murder had something's I did like:

    let me demonstrate, how u get a name for a fat kid with a tiny belt
    Jus push his big ass over, and the wait til he says, "Hey, INEEDHELP!"
    fallen and he cant get up, kinda like his rank in the battle league
    in the last two months only thing about him that's raised is his calories

    Which was cool, & a lot better than what his opponent brung so...

    Vote-Al Murder U
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  17. al's flow was like a story yo
    and it ran smooth

    he came wit some nice punches his flow was flawless, lyrics was cool, and disses whuz nice wit you gettin on him bein fat

    phatkid
    ya punches was metiocre. and u had some standout lines,

    A complaining little baby, that’s been on my nuts since day three
    You obviously like Dick, like Bush with Cheney''
    ^ i almost fell out my chair when i heard dat

    but

    al came wit overall betta verse

    vote-AL
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  18. INEEDHELP

    INEEDHELP 11 year olds get spanked

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    wow...just wow
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  19. Al Keyholic

    Al Keyholic eye shatter reps

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    phat` ur verse had lines played much like the spellin in ur name... i gay played concepts are an all around concept for u... kind of ironic.. al your verse was nothing special either and didn't flow very well but in all it contained slightly more gripping punches.. and slightly less played ones...

    vote - al
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  20. MC Uncle Jesse

    MC Uncle Jesse Better rapper than joey

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    ...good battle
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