61. ADubXJ03 1-0 v. 62. phillybuster 1-0

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  2. ADubXJ03

    ADubXJ03 New Member

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    hey, hows 16 sound?
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  3. Peril-Eyes

    Peril-Eyes LP1 Lunch Pines Throwback

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    You've got no Monet- even when extorting at Claude's bank,
    I'll put a hole in this poster like the Warden in Shawshank,
    There's more than the bra strength...to 'gettin the cup',
    You're Set Up like the remix with Obie and Lloyd banks,
    Dubz should avoid rank- before he get's his dome capped-in,
    You're ran-sacked- you're nuts jetted- like what happened?
    Life of crime? You'de figure Dubz...would go and Spree-well...
    But i cut him off at his greeting just to make him see "Hell-"
    Your rhymes are long in the tooth and nothing to gain smiles,
    Looking like a geriatric the way you rocking the 'Caine' style.
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  4. ADubXJ03

    ADubXJ03 New Member

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    So I guess you didn't read the mag...lame punk...
    Because it specifically requests you NOT use another "caine" punch
    You talk too much bitch shit, so I'll cock the steel
    And laugh at the irony...when the paramedics aid to doctor Phil
    Lord of the Rings fan? Must be, man peep what you wrote
    Cuz ya lines got more "forced humor" than a Treebeard joke
    And yes...you suck, I'll ensure PB never earns ovations
    When pumping Shell's in you like I worked a full service station
    Knockout punch, and my rebuttal's clever, kid
    You're no challenger to me
    Cuz I'll leave you seeing stars...but the shuttle never did

    Thx.
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  5. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    whoa at this.....
    i see ADub gettin the W
    ADub completely surprised me here, his punches, flow were much better than peril
    The tree beard and doctor phil lines were nice...Peril on the other hand...i was expectin more from him....i wasnt especially feeling anything from him....maybe h didn't try iono but he wasnt very good
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  6. Peril-Eyes

    Peril-Eyes LP1 Lunch Pines Throwback

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    i sill dont even know who tree beard is?
    but good looking out.
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  7. Methodine

    Methodine New Member

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    aite, this battle was aite, some coo' punches in both verses, but nothin too hot.

    Peril - You opened pretty nicely, but after that youre wording and punches went downhill, structure was good, and ya flow was decent too, but you need stronger punches, overall a pretty weak verse, pz

    A Dub - Same as peril, you opened up nicely, but you went downhill too, maybe one other punch that was ok in ya verse, but you need to work on consistancy, structure and flow were decent aswell, overall an ok verse, pz

    Vote = A Dub

    Had like one more punch than peril, which was all really, both need to work on consistancy tho, pz
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  8. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    ????A clone with my name!!?!?!
    Peril
    anyway PEril verse was ummmmm not good in my eyes........a bunch of forced concepts back with alot of a few played lines....I think you should consider taking more time to write but um thats just me........

    A Dub
    .......just murder this kid period, his content and thoughts were well executed and it shows in his verse.....I dont know who the hell treebeard is tho but the doctor phil line was the nicest in the battle
    the shuttle stars shit was pretty good but u could of flipped it better and the shells line was cool

    Vote A Dub
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  9. G. O. A. T.

    G. O. A. T. Greatest Of All Time...

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    Yea well..ive seein both come harder..

    Peril:wtf happend man..ur shit was fucking disgusting..and not in the good way either..it was extremely forced and didnt sound good at all..not to mention it was boring as hell..

    AdubXJ03:not bad..since peril didnt do a good job..u beat him is all i gotta say

    Vote:Adubwhateverhisnameis/
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  10. Peril-Eyes

    Peril-Eyes LP1 Lunch Pines Throwback

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    note to self... stick with rstl.
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  11. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    tha only line I liked from pb wuz his opener...

    You've got no Monet- even when extorting at Claude's bank,
    I'll put a hole in this poster like the Warden in Shawshank,

    I just remembered tha scene wit tha warden (thanks peril)...nevertheless...this wuz his only good line...


    anyways...adubb def had tha better verse (tho I'm not a fan of feedin nor do I know wut a treebeard is)...but his other lines were good enough to get tha win...

    vote=adub

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  12. Peril-Eyes

    Peril-Eyes LP1 Lunch Pines Throwback

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    the warden throws a rock through the poster... remember? thats how he discovers it.
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  13. ST_UC

    ST_UC Please Try Me

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    This was a lot closer than thje votes woudl lead u to believe

    I'll put a hole in this poster like the Warden in Shawshank,

    this was the best line right here ... this will make the mag... if anyone doesnt get this line they shouldnt vote

    But i cut him off at his greeting just to make him see "Hell-"

    i liked this one


    And laugh at the irony...when the paramedics aid to doctor Phil

    this was aight

    When pumping Shell's in you like I worked a full service station

    this was nice... i really liked this one


    i give the VOTE to PerilEyes

    i just looked at the two best lines and peryl had them

    i know everyone else voted for adub... but this is my honest opinion

    if u want something to vote on early... go to STUC VS Methodine in top30
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  14. Trapt Wit

    Trapt Wit ...Witty...

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    Peril came decent for his first bar then just fell off

    Adub didnt come too bad, however, could have been improved on with some more creativity.
    Not bad, but try to be more witty.

    Blah,......

    Vote- Adub... it was just better overall
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  15. ADubXJ03

    ADubXJ03 New Member

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  16. Def Angel

    Def Angel Fuck you

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    Vote= A Dub

    Better punches and better flow

    phillybuster on tha other hand kinda fell off in tha middle of that bitch. It did make sense.

    Even tho ya'll wuz talkin' some fake "WANGSTA SHIT" A dub jus' had a better flow.

    Good Night Gentlemen.
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  17. ** P.Dëƒ **

    ** P.Dëƒ ** 85-8"Battle Machine"

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    OPENING STATEMENTS
    This was pretty ill battle! I felt both emcee's!

    BATTLE CHART
    PUNCH-LINES: ADub
    CREATIVITY: ADub
    MULIT'S: phillybuster
    FLOW: ADub
    OVR: ADub


    FAVORITE LINES
    phillybuster: Dubz should avoid rank- before he get's his dome capped-in,
    You're ran-sacked- you're nuts jetted- like what happened?
    Life of crime? You'de figure Dubz...would go and Spree-well...
    But i cut him off at his greeting just to make him see "Hell-"


    ADub: Lord of the Rings fan? Must be, man peep what you wrote
    Cuz ya lines got more "forced humor" than a Treebeard joke
    And yes...you suck, I'll ensure PB never earns ovations
    When pumping Shell's in you like I worked a full service station

    VOTE: ADub
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  18. Alphabet

    Alphabet Soup

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    Peril


    Your rhymes are long in the tooth and nothing to gain smiles,
    Looking like a geriatric the way you rocking the 'Caine' style.


    A Dub


    You talk too much bitch shit, so I'll cock the steel
    And laugh at the irony...when the paramedics aid to doctor Phil

    vote=A Dub
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  19. Mark-It

    Mark-It The Original

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    Peril
    Really I dont see how everyone says your verse went downhill,
    I liked the spreewell line,
    the only thing is it was true that it was in the mag that the caine punches were getting played out

    ADUB
    you did comeback at him pretty good,
    but your opener was a caine punch too so i dont know

    i think i will have to go against popular opinion
    Vote Peril
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  20. Still Nameless

    Still Nameless Money Motivation.

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    Life of crime? You'de figure Dubz...would go and Spree-well...
    But i cut him off at his greeting just to make him see "Hell-"
    Jus thought this had creativeness to it ..

    Adub
    You talk too much bitch shit, so I'll cock the steel
    And laugh at the irony...when the paramedics aid to doctor Phil
    Ight line right cha .. Other lines i jus wasnt feelin ..

    Basically i jus wasnt feelin adub's ish .. wasnt anything nice in my book .. s0o0o0o0o .. im givin dis to Peril/Philly ... Jus thought he came witta ight verse and overall better one ..

    V - Peril
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