59. No Shit Sherlock 2-1 vs 60. Mr. Body 1-0

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    lets keep it short

    16 at most

    .........Sherlock.........
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  3. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    16 sounds good..

    good luck.. U'll need it

    Ur technique N RM's are similar, I'll be bold to prove it
    Cuz no matter how U look at it, they're both old N stupid

    EYO-

    NSS ain't shit so he'll try to get mods to ban me..
    N if that don't work he'll just pussy out, like crotchless panties..
    U did aight thru three battles.. but I'm bustin queers..
    Cuz Ur gonna fall apart in the fourth worse than the buccaneers..
    Ur a weak fag dude -- U'll be lost N charred up..
    N U rival boston harbor -- for how many guys tea bagged you..
    But Sher's the best! <--that's not true, I'm just mocking..
    How if I gave U a run for Ur money, I'd ruin Ur stocking's..
    This whore hates but I don't know anyone more fake tho..
    So I'ma make wind N leave holmes wrecked like a tornado..
    I'll punch til U earl-- As this battle ends quick..
    I'll give 'em the short end of the stick, like he does to his girl..
    I doubt Ur even decent.. I'm cold when fists pound a dude..
    The RBL's better off with No Sherlock so I'ma choke the shit outta U..!
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  4. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    ...........lol, fuck you.................

    Ur verse aint half ass bad, my punches damage a fag
    and leave stars ova ya head, like waving an American flag

    Hes Resin Mic, yeah right...........

    Sherlock ignoring the hype, someone put a cork in dis dike
    dis homo comes in group of bitches, as if living da soriety life
    hes boring me right, and im not taking his shit
    not only did Mr. Body put his heart into it..............
    he added lungs, intestines, and a pancreas
    watch this maggot get slayed, and hope he happen to spray
    in fact, Mr. Body will put a cap up.............on graduation day
    cause when my text stop, is when his neck pop
    sherlock is on top of da game, like on owners in the press box....
    I pop lock folks, wit my top notch flow
    he style so old and played.........
    add em to archive of all da knock knock jokes
    sherlock techniques ring da bell, thug life, trained as well
    and if there is a heaven for a gangsta, your on ya way to hell
    lets end this shit , we all read ya verse, and we here ya fibs,
    you should leave da RBL, and make a good bye letter like Censor did

    .........Sherlock.........
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  5. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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  6. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    Mr. Body:

    Ur technique N RM's are similar, I'll be bold to prove it
    Cuz no matter how U look at it, they're both old N stupid(nice)

    EYO-

    NSS ain't shit so he'll try to get mods to ban me..
    N if that don't work he'll just pussy out, like crotchless panties..(lol)
    U did aight thru three battles.. but I'm bustin queers..
    Cuz Ur gonna fall apart in the fourth worse than the buccaneers..(haha)
    Ur a weak fag dude -- U'll be lost N charred up..
    N U rival boston harbor -- for how many guys tea bagged you..(nice)
    But Sher's the best! <--that's not true, I'm just mocking..
    How if I gave U a run for Ur money, I'd ruin Ur stocking's..(lol)
    This whore hates but I don't know anyone more fake tho..
    So I'ma make wind N leave holmes wrecked like a tornado..(aight)
    I'll punch til U earl-- As this battle ends quick..
    I'll give 'em the short end of the stick, like he does to his girl..(aight)
    I doubt Ur even decent.. I'm cold when fists pound a dude..
    The RBL's better off with No Sherlock so I'ma choke the shit outta U..!( weak ending..coulda been worded better)

    the begining was dope as shit bit throu the end it kinda fell off..overall the punches were there and the flow..
    7.5/10


    NoShit:


    Ur verse aint half ass bad, my punches damage a fag
    and leave stars ova ya head, like waving an American flag(nice)

    Hes Resin Mic, yeah right...........(lol)

    Sherlock ignoring the hype, someone put a cork in dis dike
    dis homo comes in group of bitches, as if living da soriety life(HAHAHA)
    hes boring me right, and im not taking his shit
    not only did Mr. Body put his heart into it.............. (lol)
    he added lungs, intestines, and a pancreas
    watch this maggot get slayed, and hope he happen to spray
    in fact, Mr. Body will put a cap up.............on graduation day(ha)
    cause when my text stop, is when his neck pop
    sherlock is on top of da game, like on owners in the press box....(nice)
    I pop lock folks, wit my top notch flow
    he style so old and played.........
    add em to archive of all da knock knock jokes(hahaha)
    sherlock techniques ring da bell, thug life, trained as well
    and if there is a heaven for a gangsta, your on ya way to hell(decent)
    lets end this shit , we all read ya verse, and we here ya fibs,
    you should leave da RBL, and make a good bye letter like Censor did(lmao)

    the punches hit a bit harder and the flow was more consistant than Body's...
    8/10

    both verses were good...


    Vote: NoShit

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  7. Stalis Orion

    Stalis Orion DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    close match up here.
    Probably closest I peeped so far.

    Mr Body

    crotchless panties line was cool, bucs line worked well since it is his 4th, tea bag line ok, short end of the stick line was funny, closer needed rewording.
    Nice veres overall.

    Sherlock:

    opener was pretty coo, sorority life was aight, graduation day line was eh, the press box line was niice, knock knock line was coo, heaven for thug line was eh and the closer was ok.

    Overall, real close shit here.
    Didn't really see any super standout lines from either, but a decent match up nonetheless.

    Both had concepts that weren't ground breaking, so really, it came down to who worded better an' shit IMO.

    I'm giving Mr. Body the slight nod here.
    And if he said he's Resin MIC, well, that's just gay times eight.

    Vote=Mr. Body, close one
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  8. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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  9. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    vote sherlock

    i just felt it more.. i thought it was harder than mr. bodys although mr bodys was decent.
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  10. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    vote = mr. body

    sherlock had a played opener...the rest was good, but work on the originality a little...got a little repetitive flow wise as well

    pz
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  11. Osh McGosh.

    Osh McGosh. Lackadayzickal.

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    v/ - Mr. Body

    Better verse, nice structure, couple good lines.

    Sherlock came cool, but not enuff to overpower Mr Body.

    Zp.
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  12. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    I gotta go with sherlock..

    Body had some tight ass lines...couple were kinda played..

    Sherlock came with it....more consisitent..nice style..

    vote=No shit Sherlock
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  13. in awe

    in awe solo

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    the crothless panties and tornado lines were real nice.

    sherlok I was feeling the press box line and some others but your flow fell off alot. also bod had a more consistent verse, sherloks had weak parts and strong parts.

    vote body
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  14. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

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    To me, both verses were on the bland side. I saw a noticable amount of played lines from each, but I saw less in Body's verse. Both verses were decent, but both need to raise their level of originality also.

    VOTE= Mr. Body
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  15. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    Vote: Sherlock

    His verse was more witty and original in my opinion. Some played concepts and setups from both of you, but a few lines were nice like the pressbox, short end of the stick etc. I felt Sherlock edged him out a bit though.
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  16. vote - sherlock.

    this was actually a good battle.

    both had witty and creative punches, but after reading both verses, i must say sherlock took it.. and man, i swear, that stars over your head like an american flag line had me like ''damn..'' and i never really get like that in text..
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  17. Venomus

    Venomus Spit Sick

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    this was a close battle, but I gotta go with sherlock on this one.
    Mr. Body was good, I just felt that sherlock was more consistant and more thought out
    both were good tho, good battle kiddies.

    vote: No Shit Sherlock
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  18. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    Ur technique N RM's are similar, I'll be bold to prove it
    Cuz no matter how U look at it, they're both old N stupid
    -okay
    EYO-

    NSS ain't shit so he'll try to get mods to ban me..
    N if that don't work he'll just pussy out, like crotchless panties..
    -tight word play
    U did aight thru three battles.. but I'm bustin queers..
    Cuz Ur gonna fall apart in the fourth worse than the buccaneers..
    -hot multi, just filler though
    Ur a weak fag dude -- U'll be lost N charred up..
    N U rival boston harbor -- for how many guys tea bagged you..
    -haha, nice shit right there
    But Sher's the best! <--that's not true, I'm just mocking..
    How if I gave U a run for Ur money, I'd ruin Ur stocking's..
    -nice, but played
    This whore hates but I don't know anyone more fake tho..
    So I'ma make wind N leave holmes wrecked like a tornado..
    -good, not too much
    I'll punch til U earl-- As this battle ends quick..
    I'll give 'em the short end of the stick, like he does to his girl..
    -so so, kinda corny, I liked the back bar rhyme tho
    I doubt Ur even decent.. I'm cold when fists pound a dude..
    The RBL's better off with No Sherlock so I'ma choke the shit outta U..!
    -good play off his name


    Ur verse aint half ass bad, my punches damage a fag
    and leave stars ova ya head, like waving an American flag
    -nice
    Hes Resin Mic, yeah right...........

    Sherlock ignoring the hype, someone put a cork in dis dike
    dis homo comes in group of bitches, as if living da soriety life
    -not bad
    hes boring me right, and im not taking his shit
    not only did Mr. Body put his heart into it..............
    -haha, I liked that one
    he added lungs, intestines, and a pancreas
    watch this maggot get slayed, and hope he happen to spray
    in fact, Mr. Body will put a cap up.............on graduation day
    -good punch, but I've seen a grip of 'graduation cap' lines before
    cause when my text stop, is when his neck pop
    sherlock is on top of da game, like on owners in the press box....
    -dope
    I pop lock folks, wit my top notch flow
    he style so old and played.........
    add em to archive of all da knock knock jokes
    -AHAHA.. nice shit
    sherlock techniques ring da bell, thug life, trained as well
    and if there is a heaven for a gangsta, your on ya way to hell
    -filler
    lets end this shit , we all read ya verse, and we here ya fibs,
    you should leave da RBL, and make a good bye letter like Censor did
    -Hot closer


    good battle.. IMO no shit hit harder with the punches that conected.. liked his style a little more

    vote-no shit in a close one
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  20. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    vote = Mr. Body
    I was feelin his verse more
    he was more consistant
    not takin nothin away from NSS
    but Mr. Body just edged this one out
    both were good tho.

    holla atcha boy!
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