57 sexC vs. 58 Iye WunDeR vs. 59 <maven>

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Omen, Jun 28, 2003.

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    Choose 1 topic here:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=592953

    and write your story for your match in this thread!


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    VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!!

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    if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!!



    GO FOR IT!!!
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  2. <maven>

    <maven> Vice Versa

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    topic: The afternoon is late.. and the storm is coming down hard.... you walk out in the street... and see a baby all alone further down crying.. soaked... and lost... --- you look... and notice the baby is by himself... but when he turns head at your attention.. u find that the little boy is you as a child.... What did you feel? think? Do?

    The door closes behind me, and I pull my hat over my eyes
    and my mind races silently as the heavens sorrowfully cry
    teardrops hitting me harder than any pummeling ever before
    and I see a child wrapped up tightly sitting alone on the floor
    his hair is plastered to his forehead, but he doesn't shed a tear
    I feel us being connected, he sees me and shows no fear
    so I approach the small boy; so young that he can't talk
    somebody bumps me, so I look away from the sidewalk
    I look back, the child is gone, all that's left is his small jacket
    peering at the tag, in permanent marker it says "Patrick"
    confirming my belief, the child was not magic, he was me
    remembering what I had seen, that afternoon that they left me.......

    *remembers*

    I woke up late, my tear stained eyes looked up into Her face,
    and I noticed that the worry lines around Her eyes encased,
    and He stood behind her; they were dressed and ready to go
    I didn't comprehend it then, but now I wouldn't have shown
    my elation at being allowed out of the house, even in the rain
    She changed me and got me dressed, Her eyes still showing pain
    I didn't notice then, too bad, I look back now and realise
    the pain I saw reflected there was what made the heavens cry
    so we exited the house and She hugged me tightly there
    He whispered to her after a while; He never really cared
    and She put me down there and kissed me on both cheeks
    She told me not to worry and said that She would miss me
    so I sat there crying in the rain, until some strange passers by
    picked me up and took me home, the heavens stopped their cry
    the sun came out and I could see that I would still live on
    and I knew, at that young age, that life would carry on

    *leaves the memory*

    I walked home that rainy afternoon, thinking of the past
    my mother was such an enigma, I knew this vision wouldn't last
    I reached my home and took off my coat and hat; I wouldn't pout
    I turned on the evening news.................and Her face...stared out....

    *reporter:.... Elisa Grant was found dead today in Sunnybrook Park. Anyone with information is to call the authorities. Moving on.......*
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    I'll post the links to my 6 votes once people actually start their battles.
    Peace
    test
  3. <maven>

    <maven> Vice Versa

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    no show?

    do I get two wins if they both no show? or if they show and I win?
    test
  4. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    Maven wins 2-0

    the other 2 no show
    test
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