57 Copywritten 3-4 vs 58 Smoke Trail 2-2

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. whyte hype

    whyte hype DoNt TeSt Me

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    checkin in man..........goin like 12 - 16 lines
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  3. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Sounds good to me, good luck. :)
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  4. whyte hype

    whyte hype DoNt TeSt Me

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    My Verse G'luck

    ayo man you fuckin witha ringa
    punch out your blocks, leave you fallin like Jenga/
    so you can crash and burn
    only way you hot if you was the F.B.I's greatest concern/
    F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude
    put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/
    you think your hotter than me
    come on man you cant de'feet' me im stoppin out your heat/
    you like your eggs scrambled
    im 'over' you 'easy', leavin you as the Mag's worst verse sample/
    how many personals of yours will be fake
    only mistake M. Crumb made was your post # should = your rank/
    so you think your a true baller
    only way thats real if your sig was your fuckin father/
    to bad theres no word of the week
    cause its only 'wins'day and im already beaten this geek/
    so im gunna leave yall on this last com'mint'
    you need to break ice kid, go pick up some icebreaker mints/


    g luck, did this today, one



    Will Include Votes in here when i do vote.....
    1. klobb vs optix........http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7402498
    2.Tank vs Memento........http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7402696
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  5. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Let me key this real quick...

    This verse is about to take me 5 minutes
    And I don't even need rhymes in it to win it
    I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish
    Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed
    Killin' you, like it's nobody's business..
    Your rhymes put you on the stake, and you ain't even religious
    NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack
    He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass
    I can't believe you posted that, it's kids like you I hate yo
    But I gotta thank you..
    For makin' me 4-4, and givin' me this KO
    I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk
    But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult


    Sorry for the lack of effort..Just keyed this one =P
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  6. G Status

    G Status New Member

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    Wasnt a very good battle. Copy took this easily with way harder punches and some shit he had was nice. Smoke came with all basics, no twists or anything. Copy could have been more creative too. Pretty boring battle.

    Best lines:
    Smoke -----------
    Copy: I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish
    Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed
    ..decent

    This line was sick right here:
    NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack
    He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass



    Vote: Copywritten
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  7. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    ok battle....not really feelin' either verse to well but copy took this bcuz he had harder punches n better creatvity.....other guy had some ok lines but as said pretty basic...

    v-copywritten

    Verbal
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  8. J Rocca

    J Rocca New Member

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    this wasn't a nice battle to read at alll....wheather it was copy lack of effort or smoke's lack of punches

    vote=smoke
    he had ok punches and had some flow to it.....copy didn't even try to make his flow so therfor i give this one to smoke

    fav line:F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude
    put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/
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  9. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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    thank both of you for an easy vote...vote copy...obvious reasons
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  10. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    vote copy


    no questions
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  11. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    v-copy

    better punches structure
    wordplay concepts
    blah blah blah
    everything

    smoke trail came wack
    with no real good concepts or any decent punches

    I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk
    But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult
    ^decent
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  12. NAX

    NAX Bring the Pain.

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    smoke kilt this one. i think y'all are reading it wrong. even if smoke has the styles flow, it still came out nice. and even if the typing was ebonicized. nothing against copywritten but he didn't even put up a fight, and he should've.

    vote = smoke.

    maybe im reading this wrong. dope battle guys. pce.
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  13. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    Vote-CopyWritten

    Smoke Trail was decent....that post # = rank line was dope for real

    It was said in the above replies...i agree--
    Good battle guys

    >>Grimm<<
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  14. Noggah

    Noggah Politically Incorrect

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    shiet..... Copy didnt even have that many good punches, just had flow and thats it...I think smoke definately got this wit the family fued line, every other line in both of ya'lls verses was just filler n weak...

    vote = smoke
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  15. kenny wayne

    kenny wayne New Member

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    ewww

    this battle was gay..
    both verses sucked big floppy donkey dick but still

    copy took it

    vote-copy
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  16. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Votes are 7-3 me as of now. Nice battle smoke, no beef. :)
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  17. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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  18. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    vote= copywritten

    pretty easy decision...

    hes a better battler.
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  19. The Bionic MC

    The Bionic MC New Member

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    vote=Copywritten

    This was aight
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  20. afraid knot.

    afraid knot. Mr. Get Jerk'd In The RBL

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    uummm vote = copywritten..
    lol @ people voting for smoke trail.. this was one-sided..

    but dope line @ make you fall like jenga
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