57. Caps lock vs. 58. Erykah~Caine

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Omen, Oct 19, 2003.

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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  2. Betty*Beretta

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  3. Caps lock

    Caps lock Iller Than you.

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    Criticized: You find a time machine and go back in time to when u were a little one. Every now and then, time fast-forwards to another point in your life. Write about things then you would've done differently to make the life you have now better. Expand
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    white=press
    blue=victim
    red=assailant
    green=bullet

    Juliet Jacobs died at exactly 10:00p.m.The assailant , her ex boyfriend, Romero Jones has confessed and will give a public statement at 11:00. Stay tuned

    9:00 p.m.
    I sit awake and contemplate this the date she chose my heart to break
    Another star-crossed fuck screaming to the messiah my blind hate
    Irate I walk the plank and plunge into a ocean of unsettled emotion
    notions going down a stream of blood trails ending with her floating
    Picturing her puzzled look as I gut her with hooks the only piece missin'
    the blood of a broken heart and agony of failure is clouding my vision
    Fuck love! Fuck devotion! Fuck emotion! Fuck trust!
    She dies tonight…that’s my final decision…she’s dust


    9:23p.m.
    *in bed with Tyrone*
    Caught up in fantasies twisting anatomy…who needs a bed
    He balling like A.I the way I’m dribbling between my legs
    unstoppable when he puts his back into it
    Spot my honey pot and slid his tongue into it
    We getting intimate..thrusts is intricate.. Hit every spot just right
    After sex like this…I feel like I could die tonight


    9:37 p.m.
    *dads gun cabinet*
    I’m finally getting loaded into the chamber…but who is this stranger
    This cat has real anger…I’ll give him the drive..to let me out and endanger
    I was constructed for battle sick of sitting idle on the mantle
    This man’s heated hand shouldn’t find me too hard to handle


    9:45p.m.
    *8th Ave. paths finally cross*
    Are u stalking me, damn Romero how long have u been there
    Long enough to hear u yell “Spank me, Pull my hair”
    You fucking slut you had sex with him on our anniversary night

    Your obsessed! I believe your right
    OBSESSED with giving u the best for the rest of my life
    Do you have any a morsel of love for me left

    don’t coherce just let me disperse I’ll tell u when I lodge in her chest
    Your compulsive! Yeah I am look what I got
    Now I’m COMPULSED to probe and prod each consecutive spot


    9:52
    *her side shatters covered with her lung matter*
    You are sick and sadistic
    NO your love is ADDICTIVE ur like liquor
    Slice capillaries and aorta, which one makes u bleed quicker
    Take me for better or worse and I wont fire again
    I NEED YOU!! I BREATHE YOU..U RUN THRU MY VEINS
    WHATS IN THIS GAUGE’LL butcher ya remains
    News repot will read snake ass bitch stained
    This piece’ll eat ya chest in this chess game u played

    assemble void in her chest that resembles yours when she left
    Shoot her jaw off and leave her chin with a cleft


    *heart busts from the guns thrust*
    I’ve brought truth to images
    My love lays full of pain as she hemorrhages
    Wrap hands round neck there’ll be no witnesses
    she tries to speak but ARRGH ends all sentences
    Grasp her trachea as I’m shaking her till she lost strength to fray
    Now the feelings mutual I’m finally able to take ya breath away


    *11:00
    We are here at the L.A.P.D headquarters awaiting the statement from murderer Romero Jones*

    * approaches podium*

    “are you crazy?”
    We’ll obsessions a temporary insanity
    Minus the meds but a little more profanity


    “what happened”
    she was cheating So I Approached the Hoe with my evil Fury...
    Shot stabbed and choked till she died, with no way of Curing....


    “any last words”
    Its hard to wake up in despair when nobodies there
    Physically yeah but her heart was bare
    I’m under arrest, cuz of my Infatuations of Death.
    A Savage beast at Best, Swiss Army’s Ak's and Techs....
    My ways aint Blessed, witnessed the devils spawn last stand...
    *pulls out a gun*
    When my brain hit’s the land
    gather it and ask how God could create such a devious man

    *lights out*
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  5. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    Caps no shows

    Erykah wins 1-0
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